Firebid Boot

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Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Jun 28, 2015 10:56 am

yes teacher

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Jul 02, 2015 3:55 am

Your attempt was passable, so we'll move onto the next lesson.

Your next section of the bootcamp will focus on combat.

Next Lesson- Have your OC attack a Bootcamp dummy.
Requirements:
-Use three offensive attacks (low, medium, and high) and one defensive attack during the fight.
-The post must be written in third person point of view, not first person point of view.
-Entire post must be grammatically correct.
--Penalities will be decided upon Loxa and myself.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Jul 02, 2015 5:00 am

oh okay i will start do that tomorrow i get to go to bed

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Jul 11, 2015 9:40 pm

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:: Next Lesson- Have your OC attack a Bootcamp dummy.
Requirements:
-Use three offensive attacks (low, medium, and high) and one defensive attack during the fight.
-The post must be written in third person point of view, not first person point of view.
-Entire post must be grammatically correct.
--Penalities will be decided upon Loxa and myself.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Jul 11, 2015 10:15 pm

oh okay i'm going to do this sorry i have been busy with camps on youtube and stuff

flower petal shouts Fran as flower petals hit the dummy
flower pollen says Fran with pollen sprinkling on the dummy

flower thorns Fran yells as a poisonous rose attacks the dummy

Bubble shield Alina says joining Fran and protecting her

Bubble barrier Alina yells as a barrier surrounds her and Fran protecting her

bubble key shouts Alina as she used a key to open a door to another door and the dummy come with her meaning she is alone

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Jul 30, 2015 3:26 am

You must A.) use proper grammar for this post as we have requested in every lesson so far, and B.) must describe the attack and its effects when they are used.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Aug 01, 2015 7:40 am

Fran uses her flower pollen attack as pollen rains down on the dummy.And then she used the flower thorns to rain down poisonous roses to attack the dumm.After that she used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leafs once the attack was done she waited for the dummy to attack her. So she decided to tend to the flowers that were hurt during the fight.

Alina uses her Bubble shield to protect Fran in the bubble so she doesn't get hit by her dummies after that Alina's dummy attacks but before that happends.Alina casts her bubble barrier to protect herself.After that Alina uses bubble key to open a door to another place so Fran wouldn't get hurt again but Alina don't know she was alone.So after the door closes from her bubble key spells she uses one extra attack her bubble burst to hit her dummy.Then wait for her dummy to attack while she reads a book so she is not bored or did some running.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:36 am

Please remember to use punctuations.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:56 am

Fran uses her flower pollen attack as pollen rains down on the dummy. And then she used the flower thorns to rain down poisonous roses to attack the dummy. After that she used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leafs once the attack was done she waited for the dummy to attack her. So she decided to tend to the flowers that were hurt during the fight.

Alina uses her Bubble shield to protect Fran in the bubble so she doesn't get hit by her dummies after that Alina's dummy attacks but before that happens. Alina casts her bubble barrier to protect herself. After that Alina uses bubble key to open a door to another place so Fran wouldn't get hurt again but Alina don't know she was alone.So after the door closes from her bubble key spells she uses one extra attack her bubble burst to hit her dummy. Then wait for her dummy to attack while she reads a book so she is not bored or did some running.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue Aug 25, 2015 2:01 am

Quote :: So she decided to tend to the flowers that were hurt during the fight.

Please remove this sentence, it's not useful to your paragraph at all.

Quote :: After that she used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leafs once the attack was done she waited for the dummy to attack her

This sentence is a run-on, please fix it. Also, make sure to use the proper plural form of the word "leaf"

Quote :: Alina uses her Bubble shield to protect Fran in the bubble so she doesn't get hit by her dummies after that Alina's dummy attacks but before that happens. Alina casts her bubble barrier to protect herself. After that Alina uses bubble key to open a door to another place so Fran wouldn't get hurt again but Alina don't know she was alone.So after the door closes from her bubble key spells she uses one extra attack her bubble burst to hit her dummy. Then wait for her dummy to attack while she reads a book so she is not bored or did some running.

This paragraph isn't necessary. Please remove it and make sure to add in a defense spell in the first paragraph by Fran.

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