Firebid Boot

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Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Fri Sep 11, 2015 2:27 am

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. Then she takes a shower and eats her breakfest in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor wizgiz. She goes to professor wizgiz potionlogy class.Later in the morning Alina goes to her swimming class taught by Aisha. Then goes to her nature class taught by Flora with her friend Francine. The second to last class is cooking class taught by Bloom. The last class before lunch Alina takes is professor pallumidium's simlutor class. In the afternoon she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy Sophie Heather and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone because she hates doing that. Later in the day she goes to music class taught by Musa. Then she goes to fashion class taught by Stella. The last class she takes for the day is Technology and Math class taught by Techa. In the evening Alina makes her dinner for her four roomates and then she eats her dinner. Later in the evening she listens to her music and does her homework she has from all her class. Then she goes to sleep after she is done with her homework and listens to her music.But on the weekend she likes to go to the magix's mall to hang out with Brandy Francine Heather and Sophie to hang out with them.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:09 am

There's no speech in your latest attempt. Please try again, while making sure to fulfill all the requirements.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:25 am

oh okay my final time copying and pasteing it helps because it helps me easier

and I will add a speech I forget that part

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. Then she takes a shower and eats her breakfest in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor wizgiz. She goes to professor wizgiz potionlogy class.Later in the morning Alina goes to her swimming class taught by Aisha. Then goes to her nature class taught by Flora with her friend Francine. The second to last class is cooking class taught by Bloom. The last class before lunch Alina takes is professor pallumidium's simlutor class. In the afternoon she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy Sophie Heather and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone because she hates doing that. Later in the day she goes to music class taught by Musa. Then she goes to fashion class taught by Stella. The last class she takes for the day is Technology and Math class taught by Techa. In the evening Alina makes her dinner for her four roomates and then she eats her dinner. Later in the evening she listens to her music and does her homework she has from all her class. Then she goes to sleep after she is done with her homework and listens to her music.But on the weekend she likes to go to the magix's mall to hang out with Brandy Francine Heather and Sophie to hang out with them.

Alina's speech or combat cry: There is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to won this fight and also I always stand beside my friends and fight to the death with all my might

Fran's speech/combat cry: There are so many beginnings in life and so many new beginnings in life and endings and many good fortunes bad fortunes and a good life I will fight evil with all my heart because I love all my friends everyone of them

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon Sep 21, 2015 9:39 am

I am sorry for the confusion but I didn't mean a speech presented by her. Here are the requirements again:

Quote :: -Must rely on all your lessons you have learned since coming under my teachings.

Quote :

Quote :: --You cannot use any of your earlier posts nor any posts used for examples.

Quote :: -Must use dialogue, imagery, and combat.

Quote :: -The post must be written in third person point of view, not first person point of view.

Quote :: -Entire post must be grammatically correct.

Quote :: --Penalties will be decided upon Loxa and myself.

You haven't added in dialogue to your final paragraph.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Sep 23, 2015 12:15 am

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. She takes a shower and eats her breakfest in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor wizgiz. She goes to professor wizgiz potionlogy class. That morning Alina goes to her swimming class taught by Aisha. She heads to her nature class with her friend Francine. The next class is cooking class taught by her friend Brady but she takes the class with Heather the ice witch. She heads to her simulator class before they ate lunch .In the afternoon she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy Sophie Heather and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone because she hates doing that. Later in that day she goes to music class with her friend Marissa . She goes to fashion class with her friend Sophie even though Alina thinks the class is super boring. Finally the last class for the day is Technology and Math class with her friend Trixie again Alina doesn't like the class because that is one of her weaknesses. In the evening Alina makes her dinner for her four roommates. Then she eats her dinner and washes the dishes . Later in the evening she listens to her music and does her homework she has from all her class. Before she goes to bed she brushes her teeth and puts on her nightgown. Then she heads to bed after she is done with all her schoolwork and listens to her music until she gets tired . Then she finally goes to sleep and Alina says goodnight to all her friends Alina says goodnight Fran Alina says goodnight to Sophie Alina says goodnight to Brandy Alina says goodnight to Bethany and Heather. When she is not at school you will find her at the mall with her friends Brandy Francine Heather and Sophie.

Alina's combat words: There is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to won this fight and also I always stand beside my friends and fight to the death with all my might

Fran's combat words:There are so many beginnings in life and so many new beginnings in life and endings and many good fortunes bad fortunes and a good life I will fight evil with all my heart because I love all my friends everyone of them

Fran's speech/combat cry: There are so many beginnings in life and so many new beginnings in life and endings and many good fortunes bad fortunes and a good life I will fight evil with all my heart because I love all my friends everyone of them

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Sep 23, 2015 8:12 am

Sorry Firebid, but don't add a combat cry or a speech. You can look back at the previous lessons in this thread to remember what dialogue is. Please remove Fran's speeches, combat words, and combat cry and replace them with dialogue within the paragraph.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Fri Sep 25, 2015 11:08 pm

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. She takes a shower and eats her breakfest in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor wizgiz. She goes to professor wizgiz potionlogy class. That morning Alina goes to her swimming class taught by Aisha. She heads to her nature class with her friend Francine. The next class is cooking class taught by her friend Brady but she takes the class with Heather the ice witch. She heads to her simulator class before they ate lunch .In the afternoon she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy Sophie Heather and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone because she hates doing that. Later in that day she goes to music class with her friend Marissa . She goes to fashion class with her friend Sophie even though Alina thinks the class is super boring. Finally the last class for the day is Technology and Math class with her friend Trixie again Alina doesn't like the class because that is one of her weaknesses. In the evening Alina makes her dinner for her four roommates. Then she eats her dinner and washes the dishes . Later in the evening she listens to her music and does her homework she has from all her class. Before she goes to bed she brushes her teeth and puts on her nightgown. Then she heads to bed after she is done with all her schoolwork and listens to her music until she gets tired . Then she finally goes to sleep and Alina says goodnight to all her friends Alina says goodnight Fran Alina says goodnight to Sophie Alina says goodnight to Brandy Alina says goodnight to Bethany and Heather. When she is not at school you will find her at the mall with her friends Brandy Francine Heather and Sophie or now missions and Alina's battle cry is always and will be there is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to won the fight and must always stand beside my friends plus fight to the death with all my might to protect them.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue Sep 29, 2015 10:04 pm

Firebid, it's still missing a dialogue. Please try again.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Sep 30, 2015 3:50 am

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. She takes a shower and eats her breakfest in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor wizgiz. She goes to professor wizgiz potionlogy class. That morning Alina goes to her swimming class taught by Aisha. She heads to her nature class with her friend Francine. The next class is cooking class taught by her friend Brady but she takes the class with Heather the ice witch. She heads to her simulator class before they ate lunch .In the afternoon she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy Sophie Heather and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone because she hates doing that. Later in that day she goes to music class with her friend Marissa . She goes to fashion class with her friend Sophie even though Alina thinks the class is super boring. Finally the last class for the day is Technology and Math class with her friend Trixie again Alina doesn't like the class because that is one of her weaknesses. In the evening Alina makes her dinner for her four roommates. Then she eats her dinner and washes the dishes . Later in the evening she listens to her music and does her homework she has from all her class. Before she goes to bed she brushes her teeth and puts on her nightgown. Then she heads to bed after she is done with all her schoolwork and listens to her music until she gets tired . Then she finally goes to sleep and Alina says goodnight to all her friends Alina says goodnight Fran Alina says goodnight to Sophie Alina says goodnight to Brandy Alina says goodnight to Bethany and Heather. When she is not at school you will find her at the mall with her friends Brandy Francine Heather and Sophie or now missions and Alina's battle cry is always and will be there is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to won the fight and must always stand beside my friends plus fight to the death with all my might to protect them.

Dialouge: Good morning What a terrible day says Alina.Good morning to you too grumpy pant explains Fran. Good what is so good about morning yells Alina. Why it's just the beginning of the day Alina exclaims Fran. Whatever says Alina rolling her eyes at Fran.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Sep 30, 2015 11:52 am

Quote :: -Must use dialogue, imagery, and combat.

Again, please pay attention to what I am saying. You must insert a dialogue in your paragraph. As if they're two OC's speaking while using " " to indicate speaking lines. The dialogue could be about a combat since you must also include combat in your paragraph.

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