Firebid Boot

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Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Oct 01, 2015 5:00 am

"Roses are red Vilots are blue i'm kicking a butt or two and i'm going to make a clown out of you" Shouts Alina

"Flowers are pretty flowers are nice you better not hurt any two or I will destroy you Shouts Fran"

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Oct 01, 2015 8:10 am

The dialogue must be a part of the entire construction. You must use the lessons we have gone over in your bootcamp (dialogue, imagery, and combat) and you must use them correctly in order to graduate.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Oct 01, 2015 1:22 pm

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. She takes a shower and eats her breakfast in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor Wizgiz. That morning, Alina went to her swimming class taught by Aisha. She heads to her nature class with her friend Francine. The next class is cooking class taught by her friend Brady and she takes the class with Heather the ice witch. She heads to her simulator class before they ate lunch. In the afternoon, she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy, Sophie, Heather, and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone since she hates doing that. Later in that day, she went to music class with her friend Marissa. She went to fashion class with her friend Sophie, even though Alina thinks the class is super boring. Finally, the last class for the day was Technology and Math class with her friend Trixie. Again Alina doesn't like the class because that is one of her weaknesses. In the evening, Alina made dinner for her four roommates. Then she ate her dinner alone when they left and washes the dishes. Later in the evening she listened to her music and did her homework she has from all her class. Before she went, to bed she brushed her teeth and put on her nightgown. Then she headed to bed after she was done with all her schoolwork and listened to her music until she gets tired. Then she finally goes to sleep and Alina said goodnight to all her friends. Alina said goodnight to Fran, Alina said goodnight to Sophie, Alina said goodnight to Brandy, Alina said goodnight to Bethany, Alina also said goodnight to Heather. When she is not at school you will find her at the mall with her friends Brandy, Francine, Heather, and Sophie or doing missions. Alina's battle cry is and always will be: "There is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to win the fight and must always stand besides my friends. Plus fight to death with all my might to protect them."

"Roses are red Violets are blue i'm kicking a butt or two and I'm going to make a clown out of you." Shouts Alina.

"Flowers are pretty flowers are nice you better not hurt any of them or you would think twice. Thank you and be nice." Shouts Fran

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:44 pm

Your latest attempt is good, you just need to change the last two sentences into Alina and Fran attacking something like in combat lesson, not just shouting.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:33 am

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. She takes a shower and eats her breakfast in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor Wizgiz. That morning, Alina went to her swimming class taught by Aisha. She heads to her nature class with her friend Francine. The next class is cooking class taught by her friend Brady and she takes the class with Heather the ice witch. She heads to her simulator class before they ate lunch. In the afternoon, she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy, Sophie, Heather, and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone since she hates doing that. Later in that day, she went to music class with her friend Marissa. She went to fashion class with her friend Sophie, even though Alina thinks the class is super boring. Finally, the last class for the day was Technology and Math class with her friend Trixie. Again Alina doesn't like the class because that is one of her weaknesses. In the evening, Alina made dinner for her four roommates. Then she ate her dinner alone when they left and washes the dishes. Later in the evening she listened to her music and did her homework she has from all her class. Before she went, to bed she brushed her teeth and put on her nightgown. Then she headed to bed after she was done with all her schoolwork and listened to her music until she gets tired. Then she finally goes to sleep and Alina said goodnight to all her friends. Alina said goodnight to Fran, Alina said goodnight to Sophie, Alina said goodnight to Brandy, Alina said goodnight to Bethany, Alina also said goodnight to Heather. When she is not at school you will find her at the mall with her friends Brandy, Francine, Heather, and Sophie or doing missions. Alina's battle cry is and always will be: "There is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to win the fight and must always stand besides my friends. Plus fight to death with all my might to protect them."

"Roses are red Violets are blue i'm kicking a butt or two and I'm going to make a clown out of you. Says Alina fighting a Ogre

"Flowers are pretty flowers are nice you better not hurt any of them or you would think twice. Thank you and be nice." Adds Fran fighting another ogre

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 17, 2015 5:10 pm

Sorry for the delay on the reply; I won't be able to be on BiW for about a week from now and I spotted Kyra only very few times these whole two weeks, so please bear with us.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Oct 18, 2015 6:13 am

it's fine you guys are doing very important things in your lives i have distracted myself with shows and other things for now until you or kyra get online in next few weeks so i can say this now we can have a short break with the bootcamp if it's oh okay with both of you lovely ladies

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Nov 12, 2015 9:38 pm

Sorry for being gone. Things picked up in the middle of October, and I'm just barely getting a breather.

Please incorporate the dialogue into your post better; it feels like it was quickly slapped on to meet the requirement.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Fri Nov 13, 2015 10:59 pm

oh okay i will do better i will do another one if you like

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Dec 02, 2015 4:47 am

Alina wakes up early in the morning and turns off her alarm clock. She takes a shower and eats her breakfast in the morning and brushes her teeth before she goes to her first class which is potionlogy with professor Wizgiz. That morning, Alina went to her swimming class taught by Aisha. She heads to her nature class with her friend Francine. The next class is cooking class taught by her friend Brady. and she takes the class with Heather the ice witch. She heads to her simulator class before she eats lunch. In the afternoon, she eats her lunch with Fran and her other friends Brandy, Sophie, Heather, and Bethany because she never likes to eat alone since she hates doing that. Later in that day, she went to music class with her friend Marissa. She went to fashion class with her friend Sophie, even though Alina thinks the class is super boring. Finally, the last class for the day was Technology and Math class with her friend Trixie. Again, Alina doesn't like the class because that is one of her weaknesses. In the evening, Alina made dinner for her four roommates. Then she ate her dinner alone when they left and washed the dishes. Later in the evening, she listened to her music and did her homework she had from all her class. Before she went to bed, she brushed her teeth and put on her nightgown. Then she headed to bed after she was done with all her schoolwork and listened to her music until she got tired. Then she finally goes to sleep and Alina says goodnight to all her friends. Alina said goodnight to Fran, Alina said goodnight to Sophie, Alina said goodnight to Brandy, Alina said goodnight to Bethany, and Alina also said goodnight to Heather. When she is not at school you will find her at the mall with her friends Brandy, Francine, Heather, and Sophie or doing missions. Alina's battle cry is and always will be: "There is so much evil in the world that I can try my best to win the fight and must always stand besides my friends. Plus fight to death with all my might to protect them."

"Roses are red and violets are blue. I'm kicking a butt or two and I'm going to make a clown out of you." says Alina, fighting an Ogre.

"Flowers are pretty flowers are nice, you better not hurt any of them or you would think twice. Thank you and be nice." shouts Fran angrily while fighting another ogre.

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