Firebid Boot

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Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue Aug 25, 2015 4:33 am

Fran uses her vine whip attack as vines hit her dummy. Then she used the flower thorns to rain down poisonous roses to attack the dummy. She used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leaf. once the attack was done she waited for the dummy to attack her. Then she protected herself with her flower heal which heals her and her friends

Alina uses her bubble burst on her dummy and it hits the dummy slightly. Then Alina uses her bubble slash to hit the dummy more. After that Alina uses her bubble blast to finish off the dummy eventhough they are tiny bubbles that don't do much damage. Then Alina finally uses her bubble shield to protect herself from her dummy

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue Aug 25, 2015 4:55 am

Quote :: Fran uses her vine whip attack as vines hit her dummy. Then she used the flower thorns to rain down poisonous roses to attack the dummy. She used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leaf. once the attack was done she waited for the dummy to attack her. Then she protected herself with her flower heal which heals her and her friends

Please capitalize the word "once". Please add an ending mark at the very end.

Quote :: Alina uses her bubble burst on her dummy and it hits the dummy slightly. Then Alina uses her bubble slash to hit the dummy more. After that Alina uses her bubble blast to finish off the dummy eventhough they are tiny bubbles that don't do much damage. Then Alina finally uses her bubble shield to protect herself from her dummy

Please remove this paragraph - it's not needed.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Aug 26, 2015 4:27 am

Fran uses her vine whip attack as vines hit the dummy. Then she used the flower thorns to rain down poisonous roses to attack the dummy. She used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leaf. Once the attack was done, she waited for the dummy to attack her. Then she protected herself with her flower shield which defends herself from the dummy.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Aug 26, 2015 9:41 am

Please wait for a response from Kyra.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Fri Aug 28, 2015 4:39 am

oh okay mmm flame melody i forget your real name

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Wed Sep 09, 2015 3:47 am

firebid1030 wrote:: Then she protected herself with her flower heal which heals her and her friends.

This is not a defense spell; this is a healing spell.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Sep 10, 2015 1:06 am

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: Then she protected herself with her flower heal which heals her and her friends.

This is not a defense spell; this is a healing spell.

oh okay i did sorry and also i will make the flower heal to shield

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Sep 10, 2015 1:11 am

Please re-post it as well.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Sep 10, 2015 2:12 am

Fran uses her vine whip attack as vines hit the dummy. Then she used the flower thorns to rain down poisonous roses to attack the dummy. She used her flower petal attack that shoot out razor sharp leaf. Once the attack was done, she waited for the dummy to attack her. Then she protected herself with her flower shield which defends herself from the dummy.

btw i will use my one copy and paste

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Thu Sep 10, 2015 3:56 am

Your attempt was passable, so we'll move onto the next lesson.

This is your last task; once you pass this, you will be complete with your bootcamp.

Last Task - Narrate a day for one of your OCs.
Requirements:
-Must rely on all your lessons you have learned since coming under my teachings.
--You cannot use any of your earlier posts nor any posts used for examples.
-Must use dialogue, imagery, and combat.
-The post must be written in third person point of view, not first person point of view.
-Entire post must be grammatically correct.
--Penalities will be decided upon Loxa and myself.

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