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zerowing21
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 | Subject: Firebid Boot  Sun Oct 19, 2014 7:36 am | |
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Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin | |
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firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
 
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat May 09, 2015 11:15 pm | |
| Hey Alina,How are you doing today best friend.Fran says excited about something!
Hey Fran what are you so excited about like I really care about what it is Alina says not so very interested in what it is.
Oh nothing much I just won two tickets to my favorite boy group and I want to take you with me Fran says jumping up and down excited.
No I'm not going forget about it Fran I'm not going with you Alina yells at Fran with anger.
Aww but it's going to not be fun without you please come with me pretty please Fran says begging Alina to go.
No I'm not going that is final don't ask me again Alina says getting more angry she is red to the face with anger.
Fine then I'm not going at all I just wanted to have fun with you my best friend Fran says to Alina running away crying with tears running down her face and closing her room door.
Oh Fran I just don't like them like you do Fran Alina says to nobody because Fran left and went to her room upset with her.
gosh i need to slow down and read before i send something i learned this from zero | |
| | | | Flame Melody
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon May 11, 2015 8:32 am | |
| Great, your whole post is grammatically correct. Don't change anything. Now, please insert the quote marks " " correctly to indicate the speaking lines of an OC. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon May 11, 2015 4:35 pm | |
| "Hey Alina,How are you doing today best friend.Fran says excited about something!"
"Hey Fran what are you so excited about like I really care about what it is Alina says not so very interested in what it is."
"Oh nothing much I just won two tickets to my favorite boy group and I want to take you with me Fran says jumping up and down excited."
"No I'm not going forget about it Fran I'm not going with you Alina yells at Fran with anger."
"Aww but it's going to not be fun without you please come with me pretty please Fran says begging Alina to go."
"No I'm not going that is final don't ask me again Alina says getting more angry she is red to the face with anger."
"Fine then I'm not going at all I just wanted to have fun with you my best friend Fran says to Alina running away crying with tears running down her face and closing her room door."
"Oh Fran I just don't like them like you do Fran Alina says to nobody because Fran left and went to her room upset with her."
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| | | | Flame Melody
Administrator
Posts : 4857
Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon May 18, 2015 9:48 pm | |
| Sorry for the extremely late delays, we apologize for leaving you hanging, but we've had our own issues to deal with. Please be patient for a little bit of time to get the information you need to know if you've passed or not. | |
| | | | Kyra_Xyrespace
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Posts : 1182
Age : 31
Location : America
Hobbies : Writing, playing games, moderating on another forum
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon May 18, 2015 10:59 pm | |
| Please fix the grammar and punctuation. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Mon May 18, 2015 11:37 pm | |
| "Hey Alina,How are you doing today best friend" Fran says excited about something!
"Hey Fran what are you so excited about like I really care about what it is" Alina growling at Fran not so very interested in what it is.
"Oh nothing much I just won two tickets to my favorite boy group and I want to take you with me" Fran explains to Alina excited for it.
"No I'm not going forget about it Fran I'm not going with you" Alina yells at Fran.
"Aww but it's going to not be fun without you please come with me pretty please" Fran pleads to Alina to go with her.
"No I'm not going that is final don't ask me again" Alina yells getting more angry her face turning red with anger.
"Fine then I'm not going at all I just wanted to have fun with you my best friend" Fran shouts to Alina running away bursting into tears running to her bedroom.
"Oh Fran I just don't like them like you do Fran" Alina shouts to nobody because Fran left and went to her room upset with her.
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| | | | Kyra_Xyrespace
Super Moderator
Posts : 1182
Age : 31
Location : America
Hobbies : Writing, playing games, moderating on another forum
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue May 19, 2015 12:00 am | |
| Please fix the punctuation for the dialogue. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue May 19, 2015 12:23 am | |
| "Hey Alina,How are you doing today best friend. Fran says excited !
"Hey Fran what are you so excited about like I really care about what it is " Alina growling at Fran annoyed.
"Oh nothing much I just won two tickets to my favorite boy group and I want to take you with me" Fran explains to Alina excited for it.
"No I'm not going forget about it Fran I'm not going with you" Alina yells at Fran.
"Aww but it's going to not be fun without you please come with me pretty please" Fran pleads to Alina to go with her.
"No I'm not going that is final don't ask me again" Alina yells getting more angry her face turning red with anger.
"Fine then I'm not going at all I just wanted to have fun with you my best friend" Fran shouts to Alina running away bursting into tears running to her bedroom.
"Oh Fran I just don't like them like you do Fran" Alina shouts not knowing Fran was gone.
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| | | | Kyra_Xyrespace
Super Moderator
Posts : 1182
Age : 31
Location : America
Hobbies : Writing, playing games, moderating on another forum
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue May 19, 2015 1:34 am | |
| Firebid, you need to also fix the punctuation inside the quotes. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Tue May 19, 2015 2:41 am | |
| "Hey Alina,How are you doing today best friend"Fran says excited !
"Hey Fran what are you so excited about like I really care about what it is" Alina growling at Fran annoyed.
"Oh nothing much I just won two tickets to my favorite boy group and I want to take you with me"Fran explains to Alina excited for it.
"No I'm not going forget about it Fran I'm not going with you" Alina yells at Fran.
"Aww but it's going to not be fun without you please come with me pretty please" Fran pleads to Alina to go with her.
"No I'm not going that is final don't ask me again" Alina yells getting more angry her face turning red with anger.
"Fine then I'm not going at all I just wanted to have fun with you my best friend" Fran shouts to Alina running away bursting into tears running to her bedroom.
"Oh Fran I just don't like them like you do Fran" Alina shouts not knowing Fran was gone.
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