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zerowing21
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 | Subject: Firebid Boot  Sun Oct 19, 2014 7:36 am | |
| First topic message reminder :
Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin | |
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firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
 
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:05 am | |
| " Oh hi i'm Alina,I can't wait for this course Alina says excited"
" So is it against the rules to fly on school grounds,Or what Fran says annoyed | |
| | | | Flame Melody
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:16 am | |
| You need to capitalize i'm into (I'm), and you don't add capitals after comma, and you need to remember adding the " sign after finishing a conversation. And please, just place a period or the appropriate ending mark in the end of the sentence. We told you many times to place ending marks..why aren't you placing them? | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:28 am | |
| " Oh hi I'm Alina, i can't wait for this course Alina says excited."
" So is it against the rules to fly on school grounds,or what Fran says annoyed."
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| | | | Flame Melody
Administrator
Posts : 4857
Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:33 am | |
| Nope, you forgot to capitalize "i" in the first sentence. You need to add the sign " after ((or what)) and add a period after ((or what)) once you do that. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:42 am | |
| " Oh hi I'm Alina, I can't wait for this course.Alina says excited"
" So is it against the rules to fly on school grounds,or what.Fran says annoyed"
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| | | | Flame Melody
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Posts : 4857
Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
Hobbies : Scaring/Banning members c: - We'll fairy you!
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:50 am | |
| The " should be placed after ((course.)) and after ((or what.)), not after you finish typing everything. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 3:56 am | |
| " Oh hi I'm Alina, I can't wait for this course"Alina says excited.
" So is it against the rules to fly on school grounds,or what".Fran says annoyed.
Last edited by firebid1030 on Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:10 am; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | | Flame Melody
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Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:04 am | |
| No no no Firebid. I added (( )) for you to be sure of what I want from you. No need to add them at all. I want you to place " after the 2 words ~~~or what.~~~ and another " after the word ~~~course.~~~ | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:11 am | |
| " Oh hi I'm Alina, I can't wait for this course"Alina says excited.
" So is it against the rules to fly on school grounds,or what"Fran says annoyed.
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| | | | Flame Melody
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Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:14 am | |
| You need a period after the word course and another period after the word what. | |
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