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 | Subject: Firebid Boot  Sun Oct 19, 2014 7:36 am | |
| First topic message reminder :
Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin | |
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firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
 
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Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:41 am | |
| " Oh hi I'm Alina, I can't wait for this course."Alina says excited.
" So is it against the rules to fly on school grounds,or what."Fran says annoyed.
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| | | | Flame Melody
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 5:47 am | |
| Yesss excellent. Just keep up this way. Just remember to keep using this same grammar and " format! You'll pass if you keep being using this correct way.
Snow takes Fran and Alina outside. "It's not that it isn't allowed to fly, it's just that Miss Faragonda has been taking this seriously. You two are going to experience a survival course. Follow me." Snow exits out of Alfea's entrance, where she waits the two girls in front of a bus. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
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Location : aurora colorado
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 6:19 am | |
| " Really then the whole miss grislda dentention thing was just too scary me." Fran says shocked
" Wow so i'm guessing we are going to need our survival outfits right,please say yes." Alina says really excited | |
| | | | Flame Melody
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 6:34 am | |
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| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 6:39 am | |
| " Really then the whole miss Grislda dentention thing was just too scary me." Fran says shocked
" Wow so i'm guessing we are going to need our survival outfits right,please say yes." Alina says really excited
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| | | | Flame Melody
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Posts : 4857
Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
Hobbies : Scaring/Banning members c: - We'll fairy you!
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 6:48 am | |
| Capitalize i'm into I'm. Add periods after actions. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 7:30 am | |
| " Really then the whole miss Grislda dentention thing was just too scary me" Fran says shocked.
" Wow so I'm guessing we are going to need our survival outfits right,please say yes" Alina says really excited.
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| | | | Flame Melody
Administrator
Posts : 4857
Age : 2022
Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 7:46 am | |
| Add a period after you finish your speech. | |
| | | | firebid1030
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411
Age : 33
Location : aurora colorado
Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 8:07 am | |
| oh i have the period in the wrong place
" Really then the whole miss Grislda dentention thing,was just too scary me" Fran says shocked.
" Wow so i'm guessing we are going to need our survival outfits right,please say yes" Alina says really excited.
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| | | | Flame Melody
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Location : 1313 Webfoot Walk, Duckberg
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| | Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Oct 25, 2014 8:09 am | |
| You need to add 2 periods! One is after they finish the speech, and one after they finish their actions. | |
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