Episode 1 Part 2

Subject: Episode 1 Part 2 Fri Nov 01, 2013 1:26 pm

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No!!!!! i screamed lily!!!!!! i ran to her but all i felt was the block of ice. I had enough of this!!! screamed maggie take that!!!!!! water hurricane!!!!! ugh!!! yelled icy im outta here!!!! next thing i knew she was gone. Riven and lily!!! they are still cold!!!! said timmy , ok ok i know i stammered heals of the light!!! i said next thing i knew riven and lily woke up what happend? you guys got turned into ice replied brandon lets go said timmy its getting cold out here. What happened in the omega portal? asked mrs.brandy nothing because we didn't go i said what? replied mrs. kara. We got attacked by icy stammered riven who's face was still frosty another attack? asked mrs. demi there was another attack? i asked puzzled umm i think you guys should get some rest said mrs.demi . As we were walking to our cabins, i saw kiara looking at me again i walked over to her but britteny got there first . Well look who its is MRS. LITTLE STALKER!! she said smiling kiara didn't smile everybody knew she had anger promblems last year she put a bowl of mouse dung on somebodys head. Leave me alone!!! kiara said loudly why?? britteny said your not going to do anything are you?? LEAVE HER ALONE !!! i shouted britteny turned towards me and laughed in my face your not going to do ANYTHING!!!! just because mrs.brandy sent you on a special mission doesn't mean you can talk to me like that!!! screamed britteny GIRLS GIRLS STOP RIGHT NOW!!!! we turned around to see mrs.kara standing with her hands on her hips. Britteny come to my office right now!!!! yelled mrs.kara and kayla go to your cabin RIGHT NOW!!! then she turned away towards her office britteny gave me the evil eye and walked with mrs.kara to her office . I walked to my cabin i was very tired and she was still wondering what kiara was up to but she just sat down on her bed staring at the walls then she heard something scratching at the window she walked to the window to scared to open it but she opened it anyway and she lit up as soon as she saw the winx holding flowers and goodies and her mom musa was with them.

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:26 am

rashid29 wrote:: You know kayla, if you don't have time to edit your stories, I could edit them for you if you give me some credit.

sorry no thanks

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:33 am

winxbloom800 wrote:

rashid29 wrote:: You know kayla, if you don't have time to edit your stories, I could edit them for you if you give me some credit.

sorry no thanks

I don't understand that. Lily just offered to help you fix your story so it's more readable and enjoyable and you don't want her to do it? Why not? Your story is really hard to read and enjoy because of the things that Kyra and myself have pointed out. YOu need to work on that.

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:36 am

Domino_kitty wrote:

winxbloom800 wrote:

rashid29 wrote:: You know kayla, if you don't have time to edit your stories, I could edit them for you if you give me some credit.

sorry no thanks

I don't understand that. lilly just offered to help you fix your story so it's more readable and enjoyable and you don't want her to do it? Why not? Your story is really hard to read and enjoy because of the things that Kyra and myself have pointed out. YOu need to work on that

well im fine Sad

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:38 am

winxbloom800 wrote:

Domino_kitty wrote:

winxbloom800 wrote:

rashid29 wrote:: You know kayla, if you don't have time to edit your stories, I could edit them for you if you give me some credit.

sorry no thanks

I don't understand that. lilly just offered to help you fix your story so it's more readable and enjoyable and you don't want her to do it? Why not? Your story is really hard to read and enjoy because of the things that Kyra and myself have pointed out. YOu need to work on that

well im fine Sad

but the rest of us aren't. It's not that we don't like the stories but it's just really hard to read.

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:56 am

winxbloom800 wrote:

Domino_kitty wrote:

winxbloom800 wrote:

rashid29 wrote:: You know kayla, if you don't have time to edit your stories, I could edit them for you if you give me some credit.

sorry no thanks

I don't understand that. lilly just offered to help you fix your story so it's more readable and enjoyable and you don't want her to do it? Why not? Your story is really hard to read and enjoy because of the things that Kyra and myself have pointed out. YOu need to work on that

well im fine Sad

Except that you aren't fine. Your grammar and typing skills aren't very good. When I was 11 I had done poetry and creative writing for school as part of my English classes and didn't write like that. I don't understand why kids now can't diagram a simple sentence and are so against fixing their problems.

If your stories aren't spaced and you don't have proper punctuation, no one can read them. Simple as that.

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:59 am

firebid1030 wrote:: oh you changed the teacher name to Brittney that is fine hyou for changing it

I did to change it it's still the same name brandy

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Sun Nov 03, 2013 6:02 am

winxbloom800 wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: oh you changed the teacher name to Brittney that is fine hyou for changing it

I did to change it it's still the same name brandy

oh nevermind btw you can use the name I don't mind it's a famous name let's forget about it

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:10 am

firebid1030 wrote:

winxbloom800 wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: oh you changed the teacher name to Brittney that is fine hyou for changing it

I did to change it it's still the same name brandy

oh nevermind btw you can use the name I don't mind it's a famous name let's forget about it

britteny is not a teacher brandy is

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:42 am

It's kinda hard to tell who is who in this.

Subject: Re: Episode 1 Part 2 Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:22 pm

yep pretty much I was confused but I think you stole my rpc's name because she is a teacher in my fanfic if you look go to page 5 and click on the new generation winx

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