Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks

Subject: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:14 am

name: Brandy fire flame

age: 18

gender: female

height: 6"1

what creature are you: fairy

ethnicity: domino

race: domino

allegiance: she is fighting for good never evil

origin: fairy

powers: fire sparks

spells: fire spark it is a big flame of fire that hit her enemies for three minutes high

fire heal it heals any of her friends that have been burned by fire high

fire flame it is a big huge flame that hits her enemies into a nice crispy burn making them flee medium

fire shield this attack protects herself medium

fire spark shield this attack protects her friends and everyone around her low

fire blast this attack hits her enemies for 5 to 3 seconds low

appearance: red hair red boots red shirt orange skirt this is her human form orange glitter wings and orange skirt and shirt and she keeps the red boots from her human form that is her fairy form her eyes are brown she also has an apron for when she is at work

strengths: being a great listener and also being a amazing friend to all of her friends and she is really good at reading ancient warnings her fire powers are stronger when she is somewhere near lava or volcanoes

weakness:not great at sports her fire powers are weak when she is near somewhere that is cold and icy not being a amazing friend to all of her friends not being a great listener when she is busy with work

personality: she is bossy she whines a lot and she has a tiny secret that most people might know about her past she loves to pick out dresses for her friends and she is very very sweet finally she doesn't like it when someone else is in charge she hates lazy people she doesn't like cold weather she is alittle clumsy when she serves food to people she doesn't know

history: Brandy was born in a cave with her family who get killed by the same dark fairy that killed alina's animal friends when she was a little girl and lived in a cave with a pet dragon named bob he always take care of her with the help of his dragon trainer he couldn't take care of her because he had to train all of the dragons and she lived there until the waitresses found her because they were looking for dragon eggs but they found her instead and take her in as a waitresses for the royal domino family when she was a little girl.They also take bob her pet dragon in as their house pet because it was oh okay with the dragon trainer.Her mother would make her food when she was at school when she was a little girl. One day she showed off her waitresses skills with other royal families by delivering the food to all of domino.She lived at the castle with the waitresses who found her she was a waitresses until she needed enough money for a place of her own. but she was looking for a job to pay the rent when she lived there she show a for hire sign on the castle window and she get the job to pay the rent .But when her mother died her sous chef friend made her food until she was all grown up. When she want to the college of domino people know she come from a cave and she was teacher's pet all the girls would pick on her until she had enough she used her fire powers on one of the students and get herself expelled from the college She want to alfea and bloom would know her because she was the waitresses she hired for her family because they needed someone to deliver the food because the other workers were too busy with their work to do it. In the future she wants to be a sous chef after she gets promoted from being a waitresses.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Sat Mar 15, 2014 8:10 am

Her strengths aren't strengths. The weaknesses aren't weaknesses besides "She hates working out" which you should edit that because "hating" isn't a weakness.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:13 am

edited thanks for the help

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Thu Mar 20, 2014 6:46 pm

If you edit her strengths then I'll accept her. Her strengths need to be three or more stuff of which she's good/really strong at.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Fri Mar 21, 2014 12:19 am

SarahTheGamerEmpress wrote:: If you edit her strengths then I'll accept her. Her strengths need to be three or more stuff of which she's good/really strong at.

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thanks edited and now ready for approval from three people

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Fri Mar 21, 2014 9:59 am

Yepp, seems good to me! You've got my approval.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Sat Mar 22, 2014 4:58 am

firebid1030 wrote:: personality: she is bossy she whines a lot and she has a tiny secret that most people might know about her past

Her personality needs more.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Fri Mar 28, 2014 12:24 pm

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: personality: she is bossy she whines a lot and she has a tiny secret that most people might know about her past

Her personality needs more.

thank you edited it ready to get accepted thanks In Love

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Since this OC is still at work I'd like to ask more questions about it (also because it's either accepted, or sent to the Omega)

firebid1030 wrote:: history: brandy lived in a cave with a pet dragon named bob he always take care of her

What happened to Bob then? You said he always took care of her, yet somehow he just seemed to have disappeared. Did she leave him in the cave? How exactly did Bob take care of Brandy when he is the pet?

Quote :: history: until someone found her and take her in as a chef for the royal domino family

So they just took her in as a chef, even though they don't even know if she has abilities to cook. Can you please elaborate on how she became a cook that's amazing enough to be the cook for the Royal Domino Family?

Quote :: she use to be a mean girl in her old school which would be the college of domino

So she's a chef at Domino, but she also goes to school. Who prepares the meals when she's at school then? How exactly was she mean? Was she bullying the students, or something? It seems like she's taken in to be a cook, yet she has the audacity to be rude to students?

This OC needs alot of work, please start considering those points.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Mon Sep 01, 2014 12:26 am

AbeashFromSinnoh wrote:

Since this OC is still at work I'd like to ask more questions about it (also because it's either accepted, or sent to the Omega)

firebid1030 wrote:: history: brandy lived in a cave with a pet dragon named bob he always take care of her

What happened to Bob then? You said he always took care of her, yet somehow he just seemed to have disappeared. Did she leave him in the cave? How exactly did Bob take care of Brandy when he is the pet?

Quote :: history: until someone found her and take her in as a chef for the royal domino family

So they just took her in as a chef, even though they don't even know if she has abilities to cook. Can you please elaborate on how she became a cook that's amazing enough to be the cook for the Royal Domino Family?

Quote :: she use to be a mean girl in her old school which would be the college of domino

So she's a chef at Domino, but she also goes to school. Who prepares the meals when she's at school then? How exactly was she mean? Was she bullying the students, or something? It seems like she's taken in to be a cook, yet she has the audacity to be rude to students?

This OC needs alot of work, please start considering those points.

edited it thanks for the question

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