Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon

Subject: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 6:16 am

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Name: Sophie/Sophia sunny moon heart

age: 18

gender: female

what creature are you: fairy

race: solaria

allegiance: Good

origin: fairy

powers: Sunlight/Moon

spells:

sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee and panick because the enemies are scared of her attack and it makes them run away too high

sunlight heal this attack uses sunlight to heal herself low

solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blind with the moonlight for a whole 6 seconds high

sunlight shield this protects all her friends and all sun light around her low

sunny heart this attack is a strong attack/strike with the damage implied high

sunlight ray this attack only paralyzes her enemies for at least 1 minutes than the spell is done medium

appearance: her hair is blonde with a white streak and her eyes are hazel her human form is white boots white shirt and white skirt her fairy form is yellow top and white skirt and white boots she keeps the white boots from her human form,her wings are all white

strengths:Athletic,Her powers are strong around Earth fairies, Her powers are strong around Water fairies, Fashion because she wants to be a fashion designer like her idol Stella from the winx club.

weakness:her sunlight powers are weak when she is around dark places and dark creatures because she is afraid of turning dark, her sunlight powers are weak when around ice places like the omega dimension,Math because she is not very good or helpful with it

personality: she is light hearted and she is nice,she can be very cheer,she has a good fashion sense , is a very social and good person, she is reliable when it comes fashion aspects with her friends, she is not reliable when it comes to other problems,she loves all her friends,she loves cute animals who are nice and can talk,she doesn't like being lazy when it comes to working out with her friends, she can't handle too many tasks at once, she isn't very helpful when it comes to math problems of any kind.

history: She was born in a small house with her mother and father. She lived in the small house with her mother and father when she was a little girl she always would play dress up with her pet dog named Stella she was named after her idol and favorite winx Stella. Her mother was a chef for a solarian restaurant and her father is a male fashion model. When she was 6 years old she discover she had sunlight/moon powers when evil creatures attacked her just because she was playing with one of the baby creatures and the mother don't like it. So after she told her mother and father she had powers they throw her a party and enrolled her in Alfea before she was old because they were students that want to the college when miss Faragonda was a student. When Sophie get old she decided she wanted to move out but her parents don't like that idea becuase she don't have money to pay for a apartment but then suddenly a big fashion designer noticed she loved fashion because of the outfit she decided to give her an internship with her and she was a big named designer on solarian anyways. So her mother and father agreed for her taking the internship. One day someone from the magix dimension noticed sophie and her boss and how go she was with fashion and decided to give her a job with her as a female model for the magix's gazette a big magazine/Newpaper that showed her in outfits for different seasons of the year. Thanks to the job she get the apartment and her parents are very happy with her especially her father and her dog Stella lives with her too because she is her dog she was given to her when she was just a little girl after finding out she had sunlight/moon powers. She also get to meet her idol Stella because she get to model some of her clothes. When she meet Fran and the other girls she was busy with her work when they were visting the magix's mall for a meet and greet and the girls told her about alfea and told her she could learn another magic abilites in the dimension. Then Sophie decided to go to alfea to learn more about other powers in the dimension thanks to Fran Alina Brandy and Heather who is the nice witch from cloudtower. In the future Sophie wants to become a fashion designer like her idol Stella.

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sat Aug 08, 2015 10:15 am

yukai5 wrote:

Quote :: solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blinded for a whole 6 seconds medium

This is a low ranked spell

Quote :: sunlight shield this protects all her friends and all light around her low

Medium rank

Quote :: sunlight ray this attack only paralyzes her enemies for at least 3 to 5 minutes than the spell is done medium

1 minute maximum since this is a medium spell

Quote :: and plants because of her light powers she can give light to plants

This is not a strength

Quote :: her powers are strong when she is around all the elements like earth wind fire water and air

Why is that?

Quote :: ,dark creatures,

why are her powers weak near dark creatures?

Quote :: ,she loves to be around boys who like the somethings as her ,she loves math

These are not personality traits. These are likes and dislikes.

Quote :: she is very very good

Good at doing what?

Quote :: she loves the colors white and yellow she hates dark colors like black and purple,she also is good friends with mirta, she is very athletic like the other girls, she doesn't like dark creatures that can talk,she doesn't like the cold she complains alot when she is in it, She doesn't like Heather because she is a ice witch and she is weak by it.

These are not personality traits. Once again, these are likes and dislikes

And about her history.
How did she meet Francine before going to Alfea? And how old was she when she moved outside to work as a butler? Also, how did her dad allow her to work and she was 15 or so and travel by herself? What was the trip she went to about?

done and done next feedback or more or whatever

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 32 Location : New Zealand

Quote :: sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee high

Why does the attack make the enemies flee? Is it because they are panicking? And what kind of damage will it deal with?

Quote :: sunlight heal that attack heals herself low

What does this do exactly? Please expand on it more.

Quote :: solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blinded for a whole 6 seconds low

Um.....this sounds like a medium-high spell. Plus, how does she make her enemies go blind?

Quote :: sunny heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike high

There is another way to rewrite that without the one strike. So please rewrite it as more of a strong attack/strike with the damage implied.

Quote :: strengths:her powers are stronger when she is near somewhere that sunlight,athletic, her powers are very strong when you make her very angry, her powers are strong when she is around all the elements like earth wind fire water and air

Too much power strentghs. Please choose ONE power strength and replace them with a non-power strength. Plus no-one gets a power boost when they are angry, or with the four elements. The only valid strength is her being athletic.

Quote :: weakness:her sunlight powers are weak when she is around dark places, her sunlight powers are weak when around ice places like the omega dimension,dark creatures because she was born with only good in her heart, her powers are weak when she is hit by ice and snow.

Again, too much power related here. Choose one that affects her powers and not something that she can overcome easily. And please explain why dark creatures is a weakness.

Quote :: personality: she is light hearted and she is nice,she can be very cheer,she has a good fashion sense , is a very social and good person, she is reliable when it comes fashion aspects with her friends, she is not reliable when it comes to other problems,she loves all her friends,she loves cute animals who are nice and can talk,

Three negative traits please. And remember, no dislikes.

And for your history, I think you need to do a huge overhall. We are seeing more things that is not relating to her. We want to see about how she is, how she grew up, when she discovered her powers and her reasons for going to Alfea. And please don't make her work to royalty since majority of your OCs have been working for them. This time, you must try something new. We don't encourage shoddy role-playing and we can't allow you to use royalty again due to you using it A LOT.

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sat Aug 29, 2015 7:07 am

yukai5 wrote:

Quote :: sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee high

Why does the attack make the enemies flee? Is it because they are panicking? And what kind of damage will it deal with?

Quote :: sunlight heal that attack heals herself low

What does this do exactly? Please expand on it more.

Quote :: solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blinded for a whole 6 seconds low

Um.....this sounds like a medium-high spell. Plus, how does she make her enemies go blind?

Quote :: sunny heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike high

There is another way to rewrite that without the one strike. So please rewrite it as more of a strong attack/strike with the damage implied.

Quote :: strengths:her powers are stronger when she is near somewhere that sunlight,athletic, her powers are very strong when you make her very angry, her powers are strong when she is around all the elements like earth wind fire water and air

Too much power strentghs. Please choose ONE power strength and replace them with a non-power strength. Plus no-one gets a power boost when they are angry, or with the four elements. The only valid strength is her being athletic.

Quote :: weakness:her sunlight powers are weak when she is around dark places, her sunlight powers are weak when around ice places like the omega dimension,dark creatures because she was born with only good in her heart, her powers are weak when she is hit by ice and snow.

Again, too much power related here. Choose one that affects her powers and not something that she can overcome easily. And please explain why dark creatures is a weakness.

Quote :: personality: she is light hearted and she is nice,she can be very cheer,she has a good fashion sense , is a very social and good person, she is reliable when it comes fashion aspects with her friends, she is not reliable when it comes to other problems,she loves all her friends,she loves cute animals who are nice and can talk,

Three negative traits please. And remember, no dislikes.

And for your history, I think you need to do a huge overhall. We are seeing more things that is not relating to her. We want to see about how she is, how she grew up, when she discovered her powers and her reasons for going to Alfea. And please don't make her work to royalty since majority of your OCs have been working for them. This time, you must try something new. We don't encourage shoddy role-playing and we can't allow you to use royalty again due to you using it A LOT.

i re read this post about her history and i figured how about i have her been an intern for someone and if you don't like the stella idea i can just say she is working for a big solarian fashion designer right just to get off the whole royal working train for the oc

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 32 Location : New Zealand

firebid1030 wrote:

yukai5 wrote:

Quote :: sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee high

Why does the attack make the enemies flee? Is it because they are panicking? And what kind of damage will it deal with?

Quote :: sunlight heal that attack heals herself low

What does this do exactly? Please expand on it more.

Quote :: solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blinded for a whole 6 seconds low

Um.....this sounds like a medium-high spell. Plus, how does she make her enemies go blind?

Quote :: sunny heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike high

There is another way to rewrite that without the one strike. So please rewrite it as more of a strong attack/strike with the damage implied.

Quote :: strengths:her powers are stronger when she is near somewhere that sunlight,athletic, her powers are very strong when you make her very angry, her powers are strong when she is around all the elements like earth wind fire water and air

Too much power strentghs. Please choose ONE power strength and replace them with a non-power strength. Plus no-one gets a power boost when they are angry, or with the four elements. The only valid strength is her being athletic.

Quote :: weakness:her sunlight powers are weak when she is around dark places, her sunlight powers are weak when around ice places like the omega dimension,dark creatures because she was born with only good in her heart, her powers are weak when she is hit by ice and snow.

Again, too much power related here. Choose one that affects her powers and not something that she can overcome easily. And please explain why dark creatures is a weakness.

Quote :: personality: she is light hearted and she is nice,she can be very cheer,she has a good fashion sense , is a very social and good person, she is reliable when it comes fashion aspects with her friends, she is not reliable when it comes to other problems,she loves all her friends,she loves cute animals who are nice and can talk,

Three negative traits please. And remember, no dislikes.

And for your history, I think you need to do a huge overhall. We are seeing more things that is not relating to her. We want to see about how she is, how she grew up, when she discovered her powers and her reasons for going to Alfea. And please don't make her work to royalty since majority of your OCs have been working for them. This time, you must try something new. We don't encourage shoddy role-playing and we can't allow you to use royalty again due to you using it A LOT.

i re read this post about her history and i figured how about i have her been an intern for someone and if you don't like the stella idea i can just say she is working for a big solarian fashion designer right just to get off the whole royal working train for the oc

It's up to you, but remember the main points.

-Who is Sophie?
-How did she live?
-What was her childhood like?
-How did her powers activate?
-What made her think of going to Alfea?
-Don't use royalty
-Make it about her than other ocs that you have (and that's going across the board with your ocs).

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sat Aug 29, 2015 8:16 am

yukai5 wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:

yukai5 wrote:

Quote :: sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee high

Why does the attack make the enemies flee? Is it because they are panicking? And what kind of damage will it deal with?

Quote :: sunlight heal that attack heals herself low

What does this do exactly? Please expand on it more.

Quote :: solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blinded for a whole 6 seconds low

Um.....this sounds like a medium-high spell. Plus, how does she make her enemies go blind?

Quote :: sunny heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike high

There is another way to rewrite that without the one strike. So please rewrite it as more of a strong attack/strike with the damage implied.

Quote :: strengths:her powers are stronger when she is near somewhere that sunlight,athletic, her powers are very strong when you make her very angry, her powers are strong when she is around all the elements like earth wind fire water and air

Too much power strentghs. Please choose ONE power strength and replace them with a non-power strength. Plus no-one gets a power boost when they are angry, or with the four elements. The only valid strength is her being athletic.

Quote :: weakness:her sunlight powers are weak when she is around dark places, her sunlight powers are weak when around ice places like the omega dimension,dark creatures because she was born with only good in her heart, her powers are weak when she is hit by ice and snow.

Again, too much power related here. Choose one that affects her powers and not something that she can overcome easily. And please explain why dark creatures is a weakness.

Quote :: personality: she is light hearted and she is nice,she can be very cheer,she has a good fashion sense , is a very social and good person, she is reliable when it comes fashion aspects with her friends, she is not reliable when it comes to other problems,she loves all her friends,she loves cute animals who are nice and can talk,

Three negative traits please. And remember, no dislikes.

And for your history, I think you need to do a huge overhall. We are seeing more things that is not relating to her. We want to see about how she is, how she grew up, when she discovered her powers and her reasons for going to Alfea. And please don't make her work to royalty since majority of your OCs have been working for them. This time, you must try something new. We don't encourage shoddy role-playing and we can't allow you to use royalty again due to you using it A LOT.

i re read this post about her history and i figured how about i have her been an intern for someone and if you don't like the stella idea i can just say she is working for a big solarian fashion designer right just to get off the whole royal working train for the oc

It's up to you, but remember the main points.

-Who is Sophie?
-How did she live?
-What was her childhood like?
-How did her powers activate?
-What made her think of going to Alfea?
-Don't use royalty
-Make it about her than other ocs that you have (and that's going across the board with your ocs).

oh okay teacher for oc it's ready for feedback thank you andif you want me to get rid of the part about how sophie/sophia met fran and the others i can do that

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