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Subject: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 4:42 am
Name: Chandra Iris Amitola.
Nicknames: Chandy
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Height: 5"4
Role in moon kingdom: Moon Priestess
Creature: Fairy
Ethnicity: Moon/Prism
Origin: Magic User
Allegiance: Good
Powers: Moon/Rainbows
Spells:
Spectrum Midnight : Shoots a beam of multiple colours that cover the target's vision for 20 seconds. (Medium)
Prismic Moonbows : Small colourful crescent-shaped rainbows go in a zigzag formation before hitting the target, which can throw them off. Each does little damage but all combined causes the target's to feel 25% weaker. (Medium)
Gravitational Moon Tides: A water based spell where if near water, she can control the tides of the water, strong enough to pick someone up. (High)
Lunar Rainbow Summoning: Credit to John) Calls upon the colors of the rainbow to give her help. She can only use 2 colours at a time and would cause her to lose 75% of her energy. The spell can only be used once a day max. (High)
Red and Orange: Summons an orange dragon that shoots out red fire attacks. Yellow and Green: A yellow nymph would be summoned that attacks with green nature attacks. Blue and Violet: Blue and violet siren would be summoned that would let out a sonic scream which would make the foe in a trans.
Crescent Knives: Throws curved knives that look like a crescent moon that give off the feeling of getting stabbed. (Low)
Moonglade Lunation : Summons up a protective shield that is also able to camouflage to match its surrounding while also reflecting back 20%. (Medium)
Icicle Twilight: Shoots a sphere of ice magic that causes the opponent to be trapped in an ice prism up to their shoulders for about 15 seconds unless 2 medium spells or high spell is used to break the ice first. (Medium)
Appearance: Chandra has have hot pink lips and she is fair skinned. Her hair is indigo and half way down her back and is curled at the ends. She also has a crescent moon mark on her forehead when she's transformed.
The rest of her appearance depends on if it is day or night. During day time, her eyes are multicoloured, her hair has multicoloured highlights. She puts her hair in 2 ponytails too. Her crescent moon mark is multicoloured At night, her hair has silver highlights. Her eyes and crescent moon mark are silver too.
Civilian outfit: Chandra wears a sparkly silver one strap top with a skirt that has ruffles of every colour of the rainbow with a mini indigo leather jacket. Her earrings are crescent moon shaped and she has a special crescent moon pendant. The pendant has some of her white rainbow element in it. She never likes to take it off since her powers are a bit less out of control when she wears her pendant. Her flats are silver and shiny as well. On her left wrist she wears multicoloured bracelets while on her right wrist she wears a charm bracelet where each charm is a different phase of the moon and a different colour each. Her nails are multicoloured nail polish with a crescent moon stamp on each one. The colours of her outfit darken a bit at night, and her silver parts stand out more.
Alternate Outfits:
Fairy Form:
Charmix:
Ballgowns/Formal Outfits:
All of the art is from Liana's Paper Dolls.
Strengths: - Acrobatic and flexible - Being under the moonlight makes her a bit stronger. Same goes for a rainbow. - Great in the arts and in astrology - She is a good swimmer
Weaknesses: - Can be very forgetful so she can't summon up spells right away sometimes. - can also be easily distracted - has a habit of falling victim to her gullibleness and finds trouble wherever she goes - isn't intelligent when it comes to academic subjects either, (except for astrology).
Personality: Chandra can be a troublemaker sometimes and a ditz. She likes to use teen lingo and slang as well. She’s also full of sass and doesn’t think before talking. Chandra has an obsession with glitter, shiny things, fashion, and is boy-crazy. She likes eavesdropping too. Chandra doesn’t enjoy being serious either as she prefers to be more carefree and be optimistic. Same goes for being focused. She is usually focused when she finds out people are keeping a secret from her and will be determined to figure out what the secret is or if a friend is in serious danger. She can be overdramatic at times too and act like everyone is her BFF.
But like all people she has a soft and tender side to her too. She is very supportive mainly because she is head cheerleader in the Solarian Cheerleading Team. She's pretty cheerful and doesn't get put down when she messes something up.
History: During the destruction of the moon kingdom, Chandra's mother and Stella's mother both fled together to Solaria.
Chandra's mother there met Chandra's father who was from Prism and was a wizard of rainbows. She also wanted to play more often with second cousin, Stella. Chandra was from Stella's mother's side of the family so being partially related to Stella was another reason why she felt more connected to Solaria then Prism.
Chandra had done gymnastics ever since she was 4 and her favourite exercise were practicing flips. She had won a few medals for tournaments that were held. She also attended dance lessons.
With the Secret Passage way that Stella showed her, she snuck out on her 10th birthday and went to the Solarian cheerleading tryouts and was able to get in. She was practically in expert with her years of dancing and gymnastics training that she became head cheerleader. But her parents eventually found out and were steamed but eventually made her a deal that if she wanted to keep being the head Cheerleader for Solaria's sport teams, then she would have to also choose a more calmer and sophisticated hobby for when she grew out of cheerleading. She decided that she would take art classes starting from her 12th birthday.
Chandra first unlocked her powers at a Magic Dimension Olympix game when at the the end, she was standing on 2 girls’ shoulders and accidentally let out a burst of energy which let out rainbow fireworks. It distracted the other sport's team on the field who were playing and Solaria was able to win the games.
She tried to stop King Radius' wedding with Countess Cassandra because she knew that Stella didn't want them to get married but had no idea that Stella also intended to come with the winx. She found out about the wedding times during school when her sick classmate texted her about it that during a lesson. She faked sick the next day, and then left home through the window when her parents thought she was getting some rest. She was able to get in with an invitation from a friend who's parents couldn't go to the wedding. At the wedding she kept objecting and to make a number of excuses on why the wedding couldn't happen, hoping that everyone else would try to understand as well. Luckily, the winx were able to sneak in and stop it themselves.
Because of Chandra being an only child, her parents got her a little pink bunny on her 15th birthday. Chandra decided to name it Diana and didn’t hesitate to take her when she registered for Alfea to get better control over her powers.
She didn’t want to go to Alfea at first but one night she had a dream where the goddesses of the moon, and Iris the Goddess of the Rainbows told her that she was destined for a great future if she learned to control her powers. They also told her that they granted the Moonbow Pendant when she was a month old since they discovered that she was the next moon priestess but decided to leave that part out so that Chandra could discover on her own. The pendant was forged in the Rainbow Obelisk before the destruction of the moon kingdom. She couldn't recall the dream when she woke up since her powers weren't full strong.
Before going to Alfea, her parents thought about telling her the truth about her actually being half from the moon but they thought that it would be too much of a burden for Chandra to know something so upsetting and they didn't think that there would be much point in looking in the past either. So Chandra currently has no idea how important her powers are or about the moon kingdom.
Year 1:
Chandra came to Alfea on the same day that some of the first year fairies went back in time to save little Bloom. She did make lots of friends as well as a few people who hated her.
When Helios tried to attack Noko, Chandra stepped up to defend her friend. But he had noticed the pendant she was wearing and snatched it, thinking that it was Noko's pendant. Chandra panicked a bit but tried hard to concentrate and eventually was able to get her moonbow pendant back from Helios and earned her charmix since she stayed calm and focussed with determination.
She went along the Celestix when they went to Shadowhaunt to retrieve Noko's pendant and accompanied them to the moon when they wanted to save Noko's soul. Along the way, she found out that she was the future moon priestess.
After Rose's art studio opened, she got a job as a part-time worker there.
Relationships: Arcus Amitola - Father who's a wizard of rainbows from Prism Levanna Amitola - Mother who was previous moon ambassador from the moon Princess Stella - Second cousin from both their moms' side Queen Luna - Cousin of her mother Diana - Pet
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:05 am
Well this character is defiantly going to annoy Roll when they meet since Stella does so, but that's here nor there, on with what I can see first and going from there.
Gullible would be a personality trait. Change it to say, she easily believes anything. They you have it worded, you have only two weaknesses.
I would honestly prefer this be another pink bunny since it would flow easier.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 10:18 am
Okay first off, the name already makes it sound like a Sailor Moon rip off. "Selenity/Selena" already gives off that "Serenity/Serena" vibe which really, makes me feel like this isn't an OC, it's a CC (Copied Character), thus changing the name would be my suggestion, you can keep Selena, but Selenity has to go.
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Though she isn't as strong at night, being under the moonlight makes her a bit stronger and a little bit more serene, calm and smarter.
So she's the fairy of the Moon, yet she's not that strong at night.... also, becoming a little bit more serene and calm is not a strength, that's part of her personality. You can let the becoming strong stay, as well as being smart as that can be used for it can make her tactful in battle, but serene and calm has to be moved to personality.
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She did colouring, painting, sculpting, ALL KINDS OF ARTSY THINGS.
Be specific. I need to know which ones, film making is artsy, acting is artsy, singing is artsy, be specific, she can't be perfect at everything, that's not possible.
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By the time Selena was 7, her parents thought she was a bit too wild for her age and enrolled her in a dance class that taught her all kinds of dances
Please elaborate on how being wild and getting dance lessons is related? It just kinda seems, random. Like "Oh honey you're so wild, let me enroll you to dance lessons" sounds ridiculous to me.
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Selena first unlocked her powers at a Magic Dimension Olympix game when at the the end, she was standing on 2 girls’ shoulders and accidently let out a burst of energy which let out rainbow fireworks. It distracted the other team and Solaria was able to win. The other team demanded a rematch because they felt that Selena distracted them but she innocently said that her accidental rainbow fireworks were just good support for Solaria unless they couldn’t handle the support Solaria was getting.
Wait, so who was cheer leading at the time, them or the other students? I don't understand, why would she be on 2 girls' shoulder if it wasn't their turn, and how could the other cheerleaders be distracted if it wasn't their turn? Elaborate and explain because I am confused.
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This was why her pendant is different from other Moon-based magic users. The 2 goddesses also said that Selena could summon them with her pendant as well.
Summoning two goddesses with a pendant? This should be a spell then. But I feel as if it's OP, but that's just me.
Now, as someone who has great interests in Celestial Summoning, or Summoning magic, I would like to correct your list of spells if you don't mind. Summoning magic is all about summoning a different entities that can fight for you,
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Orange: An Orange Beam which would never miss its target
This is basically your OC releasing another attack, this is not summoning, this is just a flat out beam attack.
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Yellow: She would shoot out yellow beams which would completely freeze the enemy. The summoner and her allies would be able to still communicate except the rest of their body that doesn’t require talking or looking at each other would be frozen until the minute is up. This yellow beam mostly helps to give time to the summoner and her allies to think up a strategy a bit.
Once again just another beam attack, this is not summoning. If you were talking about summoning beams, that's not really what Celestial Summoning is all about. That's like just another normal attack. I think that these are just basically an additional spell and not really part of the Summoning Magic.
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She also has a crescent moon mark on her forehead.
Yet again, the Sailor Moon/Usagi reference is becoming strong on this one, since she's also a blonde, but I'll let it slide. A question though, when does it appear? Even when she's not transformed? (Noko's one appears only when she's transformed)
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This was why her pendant is different from other Moon-based magic users.
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All people who have powers of the moon have been given a pendant but Selena’s was different
Please remove this, since it's not really canon. I've also changed it from my RP, it's no longer existent, so I suggest you should remove it as well.
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Her earrings are crescent moon shaped and she has a special crescent moon pendant which she likes to call the Crescent Moonbow Pendant she had since the day she was born.
Where did the pendant come from? It couldn't have just magically appeared while she was still in her mother's womb...
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 4:40 pm
AbeashFromSinnoh wrote:
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This was why her pendant is different from other Moon-based magic users. The 2 goddesses also said that Selena could summon them with her pendant as well.
Summoning two goddesses with a pendant? This should be a spell then. But I feel as if it's OP, but that's just me.
It's OP. Summoning one alone would be OP, but summoning two just bumps it up even further. Please remove or change.
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Orange: An Orange Beam which would never miss its target
This is basically your OC releasing another attack, this is not summoning, this is just a flat out beam attack.
Also, "never miss its target" needs to be removed this never implies that she'll never miss with this attack, and that isn't allowed. Sometimes you hit the mark, and sometimes you don't.
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She also has a crescent moon mark on her forehead.
Yet again, the Sailor Moon/Usagi reference is becoming strong on this one, since she's also a blonde, but I'll let it slide.
I'm not. Considering the amount of imitation used in the OC from Sailor Moon, I'm not allowing the blond hair. There's a difference between inspiration and imitation and this OC is on the imitation side. Change it to another color.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:10 pm
Are you sure I can't keep the blonde hair? I mean I kind of what Selena to have blonde hair considering she's not very smart. I also already edited some stuff.
Also I was going to name Selena Luna or Iris but I couldn't since we already have a Luna in the show and Iris is already a rp character.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:22 pm
rashid29 wrote:
Are you sure I can't keep the blonde hair? I mean I kind of what Selena to have blonde hair considering she's not very smart. I also already edited some stuff.
Hair color has nothing to do with intelligence. That's a terrible prejudice to have against people with blond hair.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:40 pm
Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:
rashid29 wrote:
Are you sure I can't keep the blonde hair? I mean I kind of what Selena to have blonde hair considering she's not very smart. I also already edited some stuff.
Hair color has nothing to do with intelligence. That's a terrible prejudice to have against people with blond hair.
I know that but its the same for Stella.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 6:13 pm
rashid29 wrote:
I know that but its the same for Stella.
1) Still prejudice thinking. 2) The hair color is just the topping to this Sailor Moon Imitation.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 7:35 pm
Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:
rashid29 wrote:
I know that but its the same for Stella.
1) Still prejudice thinking. 2) The hair color is just the topping to this Sailor Moon Imitation.
I changed her hair colour to pitch black.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow Sat Oct 04, 2014 8:25 pm
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Selenity /Selena Iris Amitola
Please explain this. An Alias? A nickname? Also there's nothing wrong with having the same names really..
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Crescent Moon Boomerang (Low) – She throws a crescent shaped boomerang at her enemy and it does physical damage. It’s edges at very sharp as well.
I'm sorry but I won't allow this spell, please be original.
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fairy of the Moonbow
You can base it on Sailor Moon but don't make it too obvious. Please change this into the full Moon and Rainbow, it doesn't matter if it's too long.
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Rainbow Mist (Low) – A water based attack. Shoots mist that blocks sight and makes the air denser so its slightly harder to fly.
How long does it last? I would say 5-10 minutes max.
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Gravitational Moon Pull– (White Rainbow Themed? High) A spell where the moon of the planet loses its gravitational pull on a region of the planet which loses its gravity for 30 min max.
I don't understand how this works... there are many factors of gravity. I think you should change this and make it related to the ocean since we're speaking about the moon here.
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Lunar Rainbow Summon– (White Rainbow Themed, High, and CREDIT TO JOHN FOR THE IDEA!!!!) Calls upon the colors of the rainbow to give her help. She can only use one colour at a time: Red: A red sword would get summoned that would have its tip on fire. Orange: Magic reflectors would be summoned which would let Selena throw her attacks at them and they would reflect off. Useful if she wants to throw a spell but isn't able to move much. Like if she wanted to do a surprise attack but didn't want herself to be seen. She would summon magic reflectors that are closer to the target and shoot her attacks at the reflectors which would bounce off and onto the target. Yellow: She would summon a fire/ice user who would use its powers to make the opponent colder or hotter.. Green: A green nymph would appear to heal the summoned but if she needs to heal someone else then some of her strength would be used as well unless it’s to heal an earth or nature person. Blue: A blue siren would be summoned. She would let out a sonic like scream to try which would put the opponent in a trans and lure him/her lure into danger. Indigo: An indigo phoenix would be summoned for transportation. Violet: This colour would allow her to appear as a violet silhouette to another person so that her identity would be kept safe.
They have their weaknesses. They cannot be stronger than you, at least maybe 85% of your strength goes to summoning them and giving them the power to attack. That means you cannot use a spell after summoning one of them and at this current fairy transformation you can't summon more than one.
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Protective Iris (Medium)– Summons up a force field that is also able to camouflage to match its surrounding
A moon and rainbow fairy can't summon a force field. Change it into a protective shield.
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Rainbow’s End (Medium) - Creates a rainbow and is able to teleport herself to the other end of it.
This has it's limits, not too long distances and not more than 4-5 people.
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Invisible Twilight (Medium) - A spell that turns her invisible 15-20 minutes at night and 20-35 minutes at day.
We're speaking about a Moon fairy here.. change the times around.
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She also has a crescent moon mark on her forehead when she's transformed.
For crying out loud, make an original character please. This is your second PGSM based character, one is enough.
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Selena wears a sparkly silver top with a skirt that has ruffles of every colour of the rainbow, and an indigo leather jacket. Her earrings are crescent moon shaped and she has a special crescent moon pendant which she likes to call the Crescent Moonbow Pendant she had since the day she was born . The pendant some of her white rainbow element in it. She never likes to take it off since her powers are a bit less out of control when she wears her pendant
Please fix this.
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Appearance:
Fairy form?
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Weaknesses: She can be very forgetful, easily distracted and gullible too. Her control over her powers isn’t that good either.
Two more weaknesses to flatten it out.
Lily, it's not hard to create an original character. Even if they both have the same powers, you can base it on her and be inspired but not copy it and create it into an OC, that's plagiarism. It's the same as stealing an artwork or a base and saying it's your own, you can't get defensive about that and yet do the same to characters.
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Subject: Re: Chandra Iris Amitola, Fairy of the Moon/Rainbow