Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon

Subject: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 6:16 am

Name: Sophie/Sophia sunny moon heart

age: 18

gender: female

what creature are you: fairy

race: solaria

allegiance: Good

origin: fairy

powers: Sunlight/Moon

spells:

sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee and panick because the enemies are scared of her attack and it makes them run away too high

sunlight heal this attack uses sunlight to heal herself low

solar eclipse this attack makes her enemies go blind with the moonlight for a whole 6 seconds high

sunlight shield this protects all her friends and all sun light around her low

sunny heart this attack is a strong attack/strike with the damage implied high

sunlight ray this attack only paralyzes her enemies for at least 1 minutes than the spell is done medium

appearance: her hair is blonde with a white streak and her eyes are hazel her human form is white boots white shirt and white skirt her fairy form is yellow top and white skirt and white boots she keeps the white boots from her human form,her wings are all white

strengths:Athletic,Her powers are strong around Earth fairies, Her powers are strong around Water fairies, Fashion because she wants to be a fashion designer like her idol Stella from the winx club.

weakness:her sunlight powers are weak when she is around dark places and dark creatures because she is afraid of turning dark, her sunlight powers are weak when around ice places like the omega dimension,Math because she is not very good or helpful with it

personality: she is light hearted and she is nice,she can be very cheer,she has a good fashion sense , is a very social and good person, she is reliable when it comes fashion aspects with her friends, she is not reliable when it comes to other problems,she loves all her friends,she loves cute animals who are nice and can talk,she doesn't like being lazy when it comes to working out with her friends, she can't handle too many tasks at once, she isn't very helpful when it comes to math problems of any kind.

history: She was born in a small house with her mother and father. She lived in the small house with her mother and father when she was a little girl she always would play dress up with her pet dog named Stella she was named after her idol and favorite winx Stella. Her mother was a chef for a solarian restaurant and her father is a male fashion model. When she was 6 years old she discover she had sunlight/moon powers when evil creatures attacked her just because she was playing with one of the baby creatures and the mother don't like it. So after she told her mother and father she had powers they throw her a party and enrolled her in Alfea before she was old because they were students that want to the college when miss Faragonda was a student. When Sophie get old she decided she wanted to move out but her parents don't like that idea becuase she don't have money to pay for a apartment but then suddenly a big fashion designer noticed she loved fashion because of the outfit she decided to give her an internship with her and she was a big named designer on solarian anyways. So her mother and father agreed for her taking the internship. One day someone from the magix dimension noticed sophie and her boss and how go she was with fashion and decided to give her a job with her as a female model for the magix's gazette a big magazine/Newpaper that showed her in outfits for different seasons of the year. Thanks to the job she get the apartment and her parents are very happy with her especially her father and her dog Stella lives with her too because she is her dog she was given to her when she was just a little girl after finding out she had sunlight/moon powers. She also get to meet her idol Stella because she get to model some of her clothes. When she meet Fran and the other girls she was busy with her work when they were visting the magix's mall for a meet and greet and the girls told her about alfea and told her she could learn another magic abilites in the dimension. Then Sophie decided to go to alfea to learn more about other powers in the dimension thanks to Fran Alina Brandy and Heather who is the nice witch from cloudtower. In the future Sophie wants to become a fashion designer like her idol Stella.

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 6:46 am

Quote :: Name: Sophie Sophia dark heart sun lily

The name is a bit too much, can you shorten it?

Quote :: sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee if they are from the darkness high

So if they are dark fairies or witches it makes them flee? Or if they are in Darkness? Please write it in a better way.

Quote :: sunlight burn that attack hits her enemy with sunlight making them flee if they are from the darkness high

sunlight heal that attack heals herself high

darkness dark heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike but not for long it only takes 1 to 4 seconds until the spell is done with high

You are only allowed two high spells.

Quote :: sunlight ray this attack only paralyzes her enemies for at least 5 to 3 minutes than the spell is done medium

3 to 5 minutes*

Quote :: darkness dark heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike but not for long it only takes 1 to 4 seconds until the spell is done with high

Basically this attack makes them unconscious for only 1-4 seconds? Please write it in a better way.

Quote :: horror movies,novel

How are these a strengths?

Quote :: appearance: her hair is black and her eyes are black her human form is black boots white shirt and white skirt her fairy form is black top and white skirt and black boots she keeps the black boots from her human form

What about her wings?

Quote :: romantic movies,novels

How are these a weakness?

Quote :: mother the elder.

Sophie's parents are dead and Francine doesn't have any parents from what you said.. so remove this.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You still need to make this half way legible. It's hard enough when you don't use grammar. How are horror movies a strength and romantic movies a weakness? Fix the power section so its easier to read and swap the 3 and 5 in sunlight ray. Do not bring in your other OCs into the personality. She hates math pure and simple. If she is an evil girl, alignment should be evil not neutral and just Gothic,doens't mean she can't have a soft spot for romance.

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:23 am

zerowing21 wrote:: You still need to make this half way legible. It's hard enough when you don't use grammar. How are horror movies a strength and romantic movies a weakness? Fix the power section so its easier to read and swap the 3 and 5 in sunlight ray. Do not bring in your other OCs into the personality. She hates math pure and simple. If she is an evil girl, alignment should be evil not neutral and just Gothic,doens't mean she can't have a soft spot for romance.

oh okay edited it and ready for all to check and btw do you want me to redo brandy too btw i might change her power brandy's not sophie/sophia

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

I would probably think that would be wise.

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 11:06 am

zerowing21 wrote:: I would probably think that would be wise.

already done and have all check this please and thank you

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 12:46 pm

Quote :: darkness dark heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike but not for long it only takes 1-4 seconds until the spell is done with medium

Rewrite this in a better way explaining what it does.

Quote :: the color black

How is this a strength? Remove it!

Quote :: girly colors

How is this a weakness? Remove it!

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Sun Sep 07, 2014 11:28 pm

SarahTheGamerEmpress wrote:

Quote :: darkness dark heart this attack takes out her enemies in one strike but not for long it only takes 1-4 seconds until the spell is done with medium

Rewrite this in a better way explaining what it does.

Quote :: the color black

How is this a strength? Remove it!

Quote :: girly colors

How is this a weakness? Remove it!

done thanks and rewritten this one but had to rearrange the spells high medium low ranking

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Mon Sep 08, 2014 2:38 am

I approve!

Subject: Re: Sophie The Fairy Of Sunlight/Moon Mon Sep 15, 2014 1:42 am

done ready for all who have not approved the oc's please and thank you

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