Firebid Boot

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Well time for some serious boot camp. Please enter Firebid so we can begin

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Fri Apr 24, 2015 3:47 am

wow it's been two days or so sense last post i'm too excited i need to move on in this bootcamp please

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Apr 25, 2015 12:39 am

Congratulations. You have completed the requirements.

Next Lesson- Have two OCs have a conversation.
Requirements:
-The length of the conversation must be eight sentences long (four for each OC).
--The dialogue must be seven words or more.
--The post must be written in third person point of view, not first person point of view.
-Entire post must be grammatically correct.
--Penalities will be decided upon Loxa and myself.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:19 am

oh okay i need to talk like a child easy

Hey Alina you are my best friend forever says Fran with a huge grin.

Why thank you Alina you are my best friend forever too says Alina giving a small smirk.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:51 am

firebid1030 wrote:: oh okay i need to talk like a child easy

Hey Alina you are my best friend forever says Fran with a huge grin.

Why thank you Alina you are my best friend forever too says Alina giving a small smirk.

I am afraid you have failed the following requirements:

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:: -The length of the conversation must be eight sentences long (four for each OC).
-Entire post must be grammatically correct.

Please try again.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Apr 25, 2015 3:22 am

oh oops i see

Hello Alina you are my best friend forever. says Fran with a grin

Why thank you Fran you are my best friend forever. says Alina with a smirk

Hey Alina you want go to the park with me? Fran asks Alina.

Sure Fran i would love to go to the park with you best friend.Alina tells Fran

i get it now sorry

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Apr 25, 2015 2:32 pm

firebid1030 wrote:: oh oops i see

Hello Alina you are my best friend forever. says Fran with a grin

Why thank you Fran you are my best friend forever. says Alina with a smirk

Hey Alina you want go to the park with me? Fran asks Alina.

Sure Fran i would love to go to the park with you best friend.Alina tells Fran

i get it now sorry

I'm afraid you misunderstood the current requirement:

Quote :: -The length of the conversation must be eight sentences long (four for each OC).

You must make each OC speak 4 lines, so the total will be 8 sentences.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sat Apr 25, 2015 5:15 pm

Hi Fran says Alina.

Hi Alina says Fran.

oh and can i get an example please

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Apr 26, 2015 12:31 am

No examples would be given at this point. Please try again, and make sure you have these following requirements:

Quote :: --The length of the conversation must be eight sentences long (four for each OC).
-The dialogue must be seven words or more.
--The post must be written in third person point of view, not first person point of view.
-Entire post must be grammatically correct.

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Apr 26, 2015 7:43 am

Hi Fran says Alina.

Hi Alina responds Fran.

"Hey do you want to hang at the mall with me Fran asks Alina."

" No Fran i don't like malls i want to stay at the dorm Alina responds to Fran."

Subject: Re: Firebid Boot Sun Apr 26, 2015 4:47 pm

I am afraid you have failed to properly understand what are the requirements. Let me demonstrate.

--You are asked to write a dialogue of eight sentences for 2 OCs. Each OC must have four sentences. The dialogue must contain at least 7 words.

--You must type the dialogue in third person point of view, not first person point of view.

--The dialogue must be made in one post.

-The entire dialogue must be grammatically correct.

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