Caroline Williams, fairy of fire

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Name: Caroline "Carol" Williams
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Race: Flametopian
Creature: Fairy
Allegiance: Good
Origins: Magic User
Power: Fire

Transformation Cry: By the fury of fire, take my power to the next level

Spells: Flaming Fury(high)(Fire shaped into a square that is 2 feet tall, 2 feet wide, and can be thrown at enemies which will cause 3rd-degree burns)

Blazing Fire(medium)(Fire vortex that stuns enemies for 30 seconds)

Fire Punch(low)(arm covered in fire that can cause 1st-degree burns when in contact with her arm)

Blazing Ray(low)(Fire Beam that is able to get enemies from a short distance and burn them for a short period of time)

Blazing Armor(medium)(Orange heart-shaped shield that is most effective against nature spells she can only use it 5 times a day and spells up to medium-slow down when they hit the shield that lasts for up to 2 minutes)

Strength Of Fire(high)(Spell that gives back 50% to something but will weaken Caroline after use for a while)

Fire Embrace(medium)(Fire attack splits in two and goes after enemies which sets them on fire, gives them first-degree burn, and last for 2 minutes or less if they hit someone)

Fire Bolt(low)(Fire lighting bolt that is able to stun enemies when they get hit for 10 seconds)

Untamable Flame Whip (Charmix Only)(high)(A long thin line of flames leaves Caroline's hands, acting like a whip, attacking other or spinning it around her head. Contact with it deals first degree burns and some moderate damage. The range of it is 4 yards or about 12 feet)

Strengths: can resist heat very well, very athletic when it comes to obstacles so she does track so she can remember her skills so she applies them in battle so she can evade attacks better, gains power from being near flames

Weaknesses: If Caroline is out in the cold too long, her powers weaken by 50%, She is allergic to animal dander, Caroline doesn't do well in Potionlogy because of how challenging it is. Caroline has sensitive emotions.

Personality: Caroline gets irritated if people mess with her possessions but not violent. She tries to break up fights so no one is harmed even if they might cause harm to her. In volatile situations, she will use her powers to stop it. Caroline tries to see the good side in everyone. Sometimes, she makes mistakes without knowing it until it's too late.

She likes to do physical activities in her spare time

Caroline will also not tolerate people harassing others and herself. She will take action by telling the person to back off or report it.

She would rather get her work done before doing anything in her free time so she will have more time and not have to worry about important things.

Appearance:

Everyday: Red ruffled short sleeve shirt, short orange skirt, pearl white heels, earrings that hang down with rubies at the end. She has brown eyes and long wavy dark brown hair. (Hair)

Fairy form: Red and Orange outfit, wings will be red and orange with some minor colors (white, pink, etc.)

History: Caroline is from the Royal Family of Flametopia.

The Royal Family of Flametopia doesn't believe in violence so they will not accept anyone hurting others or the royal family themselves so if anyone hurts them, they will be sent to prison for a long so they can rethink of what they try to do, Caroline doesn't like it when people are hurting others so does her older brother.

Caroline was born on June 18 and raised on Flametopia by a mother named: Melissa and a father named: Isaac who loved her and her older brother, she has an older brother named Connor.

Her royalty comes from her father's side of the family which means, her mom wasn't royalty at birth but became part of royalty after she married Caroline and Connor's father.

Caroline is the youngest of two children with her brother being 18.

When she was born, her older brother: Connor was very protective of her when their parents were too busy because he had a friend who lost a sister due to being killed by wild creatures while on vacation. So he stayed with her all the time he could until she was 12. Her brother was a guardian for her when their parents were away sometimes.

Her parents are usually busy so she would be spending a lot of time with her brother since their parents are obviously the king and queen.

Her brother would always put her in bed if their parents forgot to. He would keep her with him in public places at all times so no one would try to take her. He would try to comfort her if she would be crying if something sad happened.

Her brother is skeptical of anyone who wants to be in a relationship with her.

She has a cousin named Kimberly who lives with her family since her parents died when she was 3.

When Kimberly came to live with her, Caroline felt very happy that she had someone else to spend time with since yet again her parents are usually very busy.

As She and Kimberly grew older, they would do some things together but mostly they do their own thing or play with her sister or her brother.

Like most teenagers, they get on each other nerves a lot of times but they would always make up and be like nothing ever happened.

Caroline first found out about her allergy to animal dander when she was 8 when she was playing with a dog that one of her friends had. Then a few hours later at home, she started to sneeze badly and have itchy eyes so her parents took her to the hospital where they confirmed Caroline was allergic to animal dander.

Caroline first got to use her powers when she was 10 years old when she allowed to cook for the first time by making some noodles as an after school snack when she lit the stove with a little fire puff without turning it on and she told her parents about them and they were happy that she got her fire powers and then she went to the college on her home planet and it didn't help her much, then she found out about Alfea, she really wanted to go there so now she attends Alfea to fully master her powers, she hopes she can get Enchantix when she graduates Alfea and protect the magic dimension with her fire powers.

Caroline started to become very interested in Track by the age of 11 so she trained very hard to be able to join the team and she made it after a few more meets to find new members of the track team.

She was a high honors student, earning very well grades, and cleaning up trash around the school every month. She, along with her cousin, was nominated for homecoming court which Caroline won homecoming queen.

The college that Caroline went to on her home planet didn't really help her much to learn more about her power and the dark forces of the magic dimension, then she found Alfea and she likes what you can do there so now Caroline goes to Alfea to study her power more until she graduates Alfea with Enchantix and becomes a guardian fairy.

Her parents allow her to go to public school with a guard to watch her up until she graduated high school. She does allow the guard to come to check on her once a month while she's in college.

Caroline is hoping to master her powers so she can protect others with them.

While her parents give her a lot of freedom, she and her cousin: Kimberly have to come to the royal meetings 4 times a year (one meeting every 3 months).

In her 3rd year at Alfea, Caroline still didn't have her Charmix which put her behind most other fairies who already had theirs. That is until when her cousin: Kimberly got caught in a fight with another fairy at Alfea due to a misunderstanding. She was afraid of getting involved with it because she didn't want to hurt anyone.

But she soon realized that she had to do the right thing and protect her cousin, regardless of what might happen if someone gets hurt or not. So she shot her Fire Bolt attack at the girl verbally attacking Kimberly and soon, the girl soon left the scene. Caroline finally admitted to Kimberly that she was afraid of getting involved but she knew that she had to do the right thing, whether or not someone gets hurt.

Then a fire-shaped brooch and a flaming heart bag appeared on her waist, which meant to Caroline that she finally got her Charmix after being behind other fairies who already had theirs.

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Spells: Flaming Fury(high)(Fire shaped into a square), Blazing Fire(high)(Fire vortex), Fire Punch(low)(arm covered in fire), Blazing Ray(low), Flaming Armor(medium)(Blue heart-shaped shield that lasts for 15 minutes each time being used), Strength Of Life(medium)(Spell that helps people regain their strength so they will be able to stand on their feet), Fire Embrace(medium)(Fire attack splits in two), and Fire Bolt(low)(Fire lightingbolt)

Please have space between the spells so they're easily read.

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Also why doesn't Blazing Ray have a description?

What happens after Fire Embrace splits in two?

Strength of Life is a high level spell, it can't be medium. So either change the spell or change one of the other high leveled spells, I would suggest Flaming Fury, it doesn't seem high cause of the lack of description.

All of the spells need to be detailed and descriptive, please work on that.

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Appearance: hot pink shirt, short purple skirt, royal blue shoes, starts at Magic Winx in fairy form(same colors as normal outfit), shoulder length brown hair that is wavy, and blue eyes

Please be more detailed and descriptive

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Appearance: What does your OC look like? What should people envision when they read your OC's name? Body type, height, hair color and length, eye color and shape, and everyday clothing are required. Additional clothing options must be written here as well.

This is all we ask for.

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not being able to dance, trapped in the Oblivion

How is not being able to dance a weakness?

Being trapped in the Oblivion is a general thing. Change it or add another weakness.

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History: Brianna is from the Royal Family of Flametopia. Brianna's fire powers won't work very well in cold conditions because her fire powers weaken in cold conditions and so for her to use her fire powers to the fullest, she needs Lovix. Brianna was born and raised on Flametopia by a loving father and mother who adore her. Brianna goes to Alfea to study her power more until she graduates Alfea with Enchantix. Briana plans to come back and live at home when she graduates Alfea

I'm pretty sure a lot of important events have happened in her life from the day she was born till the day she joined Alfea, and even then something important could've happened. Add more to her history, it's not acceptable.

I can't think of two more weaknesses so I need ideas and I add some more to the history

The history needs more, it's rather barebones still, as for weaknesses, she could have an allergy or a fear that frightens her

I added how Brianna first got her powers, where her brother goes to school, and that she hopes that her little sister will be able to get her fire powers and go to Alfea sometime when she is older

How is where her brother goes to school important to the history? Also...dancing is too generic, what specifically makes it a strength for her. There also needs to be some negative aspects to the personality still. Also get rid of anything Lovix related, since its part of the gifts of destiny and no one else is going to be getting them.

Changed, I added 3 weaknesses and I added more to the history and a bit to her dark side

She needs a 3rd strength to counter balance 3 weaknesses. The turning evil thing....it doesn't make much sense and she still needs at least 2 personality flaws.

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Now, how is she athletic when it comes to obsticals? Did she take track so she's faster or can she jump higher? I want to know what happens when she turns evil. You need to explain that a bit.