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zerowing21
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 | Subject: The Wonderers Bootcamp  Sat Nov 22, 2014 7:44 pm | |
| This boot is for Wonderers character Zero. So let's begin this shall we? | |
|  | | TheWonderer
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sat Nov 22, 2014 8:24 pm | |
| "Alright might as well" Zero said as he walked to the middle of the gymnasium. | |
| | | | zerowing21
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sat Nov 22, 2014 8:27 pm | |
| (mistakes Lauren. you forgot the period at the end of what zero said. Also a comma should be after alright.) | |
| | | | TheWonderer
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sat Nov 22, 2014 10:41 pm | |
| - zerowing21 wrote:
- (mistakes Lauren. you forgot the period at the end of what zero said. Also a comma should be after alright.)
Sorry can we start over? | |
| | | | zerowing21
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sat Nov 22, 2014 11:01 pm | |
| (the way I do it is, I see the mistakes, tell you them and you just repost it. After that we just move on with the bootcamp) | |
| | | | TheWonderer
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:22 am | |
| (Okay)
"So what am I supposed to do now?", Zero asked the emptied gymnaisum.
(Did I do it right?) | |
| | | | zerowing21
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:28 am | |
| (Nope, you added the comma before zero and its not needed. make a new post with the correction please) | |
| | | | TheWonderer
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sun Nov 23, 2014 1:57 am | |
| "So what am I supposed to do now?" Zero asked the emptied gymnaisum. | |
| | | | zerowing21
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sun Nov 23, 2014 2:06 am | |
| "What we are going to do," Calls an old voice from behind the wizard, "Is get you to train against a training robot." The man walks around Zero. Once he is in front of the man, the older gentleman smiles, "I am Saladin, the head of Red Fountain." | |
| | | | TheWonderer
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| | Subject: Re: The Wonderers Bootcamp Sun Nov 23, 2014 1:33 pm | |
| "Red fountain...that's weird last time I checked I was supposed to be in Zaltora I wonder how I ended up here." Zero says as he scratches his head in confusion. | |
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