Zero of Zafarious

Subject: Zero of Zafarious Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:42 pm

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Name: Zero
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Creature: Specialists
Race: Zafarious
Power: None
Allegiance: Neutral

Weapon: Crossbow

Strength:

Photographic Memory: Zero is able to recall any event from before his memories where wiped away from him. Other then this he can repeat back any scene from an 1 movie or any lecture in class.

Computer Wiz-Zero is extremly good with computers he can take an entire computer apart and reasemble it back to it's original shape. He can also turn computer parts even broken ones into a new object.

Good With Heights: Zero is extremly good with heights no matter how tall. He was born with natural good climbing talents due to hanging out with his older cousins who where often into wilderness classes.

Weaknesses:
Fire: He doesn't know why but when ever he sees even the tinest flame he goes crazy. He is just afraid of being burned by flames.

Bad Eyesight: Zero has terrible eyesight especially when the sunlight is strong.

Hydrophobia: One afternoon while playing with his sister at the lake he slipped in to the water and almost drowned leaving him with a fear of water for the rest of his life.

Uniform: Zero's uniform is the basic season 1 uniform that the specialists wear. He has the basic blue cape as well as a purple clasp.

Apperance: Zero is a sandy brown haired boy with deep brown eyes. He has fair skin and is very musclar. His height it 6'3 and his weight is 209 lbs. He wears a blue shirt with white stripped lines as well as blue jeans and black square glasses. He also has a pair of sunglasses that he wears on the most sunniest of days. His shoes are red and white and have black laces on them.

Personality: Due to his sibilings betraying during the test Zero has an extreme mistrust of people. He is very studious and loves to learn new things. However, at times when he is in a really good mood every now and again Zero will crack a smile. Even though he can be a loner at times but when he is out with a good friend or someone forces him to go outside after being stuck in the house all day Zero loves to go outside in the fresh air. Zero is also very curious about the world around him especially things that relate to the enviornment. He can also be very shy when he meets new people but over time he opens up to them. If something doesn't go Zero's way he will stand up and fight for what he believe's in. He also can explode easily and misinterprets what some people say. But at the end of the day Zero is a bright and caring person.

Back Story:
Even though Red Fountain was Zero's very last choice in all of the magic schools of Magix his first school choice was actually Zaltora the school for wizards. Born a Wizards and fairy's son magic ran through Zero's family blood. His mother, father, and even sister had the blood of magic inside them...except he was born without magic. This caused a great strain in the family due to the heir of the family must be a first born magic user. So due to his lack of magic Zero's cousin was forced to take his place.

Due to the fact that he was a non-magic user Zero was constantly disregarded and compared to his sister and brother and was often left out. Due to him being left out he was able to focus more on improving his basic survial skills such as hunting, cooking, climbing, and swimming. He even spent plenty of time in the kitchen with his mother creating a little more bonding time between the two.

In a tradition in Zero's city at the age of 14 when a child is ready to attend High School in Zafarious they are able to choose which school they go to...by passing a test created by the Elders of the city. Zero attempted to train with his cousin and sister but they shunned them out of their training sessions leaving him to train alone for 2 months by himself. On testing day he learned that he must work together with his cousin and sister in order to pass the test much to the other two's dismay.

During the test it begins to rain extremly hard as they climb the mountain (which the Elders where very impressed by his climbing skills). As he begins to help the other two on the next ledge a monster appears (not created by the Elders) which catches them off guard. As Zero attempts to draw his sword his cousin steals his sword and his sister pushes him off the ledge. Luckily the bushes from below manage to break Zero's fall however, the elders did not see the betrayal and failed the test. However, before the monster appeared he managed to impress some of the elders with his previous skills such as climbing and his impressive photographic memory so they choose the school of specalists Red Fountain for him to attend.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:27 am

Updated.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You didn't address everything kyra mentioned, you now need to get rid of any mentions of powers in the history and you need to give us an appearance update with what his specialists uniform is whether its the original uniform or season 6 uniform and the gem/cape clasp color.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 5:39 am

I removed the parts where I mention his powers in the backstory.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 6:13 am

TheWonderer wrote:: Origins: Zafarious

1) Zafarious belongs under the category Race.

2) You should have one of the following for Origins: Human, Magic User, or Alien.

Quote :: Caring For Animals: Even though zero can be heartless at some times he does have a passion for animals and loves cats especially!

This isn't a strength. It belongs in personality.

Quote :: Love Of The Earth: Zero's strength is actually connected to the Earth therefore he has a better appreciation for the enviornment.

How is his strength connected with the earth?

Quote :: Personality: Due to his parents giving him up Zero has an extreme dislike of people. However, he is very close with his siblings and only trust them especially since his uncles betrayal. He is very studious and loves to learn new things and even though his element his Earth he hates the outdoors. Due to not having a mother figure in his life he also does not know how to do housework or even do simple tasks such as cooking and relies on his siblings

This personality still needs more added to it.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:22 am

Updated.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You're still missing a basic appearance Lauren.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:20 pm

The history requires change.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 10:32 pm

Both the history and appearance needs some adjustments. You need to describe her appearance so we know what she looks like and change the history. And another thing, you're missing any weapons as well. Decide what he should have and put it down.

Subject: Re: Zero of Zafarious Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:59 pm

I am currently cancelling this RP character as well as Odetta as I wish to no longer RP as "Zero".

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

The I'll lock the character for you if you wish.