Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water

Harmonix Fairy Posts : 1273

This is my new oc who I shall use mainly,I hope you mods approve of her.
Name:Maree Claire Aquawave

Age:16(when she first joins Alfea)

Gender:Female

Height:5'8

What Creature Are you? Fairy

Ethnicity:Androsian

Race:Andros

Allegiance:Good

Origins:Fairy/Human

Powers: Morphix & Water
Maree can control Morphix which is magical pink liquid which is made of water and can morph it into any shape she desires,she can also control all fluids but mainly water. With her morphix,Maree can harden it and create barriers and shields,and with water she can throw big water orbs but that takes up a lot of energy. Maree is more experienced with morphix than water,and has managed to liquidize it into water.

Appearance:Maree has dark brown curly hair tied back into a bun with a green band. She often wears blue,green or turquoise outfits. Her skin colour is slightly tanned and she has green eyes.

Strengths: Maree is very athletic and is very quick in situations she needs to be. A natural climber,Maree can fly quite fast yet has trouble with her magic.

Weaknesses:When things get too hard for Maree she can run away and is quite a loner. She finds it hard to accept new things into life. If anybody annoys her,she can lash out very quickly and is often disliked due to her short tempered.

Personality:She enjoys being active and sporty,but also likes reading alot. Maree can be positive and cheerful yet short-tempered and sensitive. Being alone is what she likes doing best and many people hate her because she likes doing things her own way. When she is a a good mood,she can be very cheerful which cheers everybody up. Yet you can always count on Maree,and is always willing to be helpful to her friends. Sensitiveness is a big issue for Maree,everything people say has a big effect on her. It can get her very sad or angry quickly. She is very protective of her friends and sticks up for them.

History: Maree was born 22 March on Andros and lived a normal life on Andros. As a kid she liked swimming and dancing,and attended swimming competitions which she won. Her best friend was called Terra but soon betrayed her,after spreading rmours about her. She then made friends with Hannah and were bestr friends till she moved away. She always knew she had powers and did not want them but at Alfea she learned to accept that she has magical powers. She wanted to just be normal and do things naturally without magic,but she soon began liking it. It was a sunny day on Andros but strong winds soon began to make a tsunami,her parents were on the beach and big wave swept them into the sea. She watched as a big wave swallowed up her parents and that was the last she saw of them. Tired and worn out,she manged to reach the shore. Maree was so depressed and upset and was sent to her horrid aunt Jane,she felt angry and devastated. In her aunt's house,she met her adopted cousin Yasmin who she found very comforting and nice unlike her aunt. Yasmin and Maree stayed together till Maree went away to Alfea.

Spells:
Magical Wave-She creates a wave of morphix which blasts away the opponent.(Medium)
Water Pull-Can only be used by a stream,if something is blocking the stream she can make some water to pull it away. (Weak)
Aquatic Protection-A purple shield (medium)
Morphix Magic-She creates a small orb of morphix wich she throws at the enemy. (Weak)

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Sun Nov 10, 2013 12:46 pm

Cheerful in strengths should be in "Personality section". And how is sensitive a weakness? Does it freeze her from working or gets sad/angry quickly? Please state that. Just change these and you're OC is accepted .

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Sun Nov 10, 2013 4:54 pm

You should expand her strengths and weaknesses by what is she good at and what is she bad at.. Phsyically/Emotionally. Her personality is what defines her.. Is she cheeky or gloomy etc. and then you expand on that as in why is she like that.

As for her history, you should add more details as in to how the storm happened or where it happened, how she felt when she heard/knew/saw that her parents died/disappeared, how she felt when she moved in with her aunt and then got sent away by her. Why she didn't like having powers and other stuff. Very Happy

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Mon Nov 11, 2013 1:24 pm

Also, you need to have specific spells. Please state your spells and the limit is 8.

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Mon Nov 11, 2013 1:44 pm

*Update* The OC sheet is updated. Please everyone use the improved version: https://believeinwinx.forumotion.com/t3357-oc-character-sheet#126402

Harmonix Fairy Posts : 1273

I've edited my oc,is it alright now?

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Tue Nov 12, 2013 2:57 pm

If she has more than 3 strengths, she more than 3 weaknesses too. And

Quote :: She trys to stay brave when villains are around,and is always sticking up for her friends.

That is a personality trait not a strengths. Just add it to personality or remove it from strengths and you're fine.

Also, she needs more expanding on her history on what happened when she was a kid, in Alfea, and after she's in her aunt's house. And her spells all need to be Winx spells. For now, she needs to start as Winx fairy then later on she can get to Enchantix, Sirenix etc.

Harmonix Fairy Posts : 1273

Okay,I have added all the things.

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:40 pm

Okay I accept your character! ^^

Subject: Re: Maree,Fairy of Morphix & Water Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:17 pm

She's all good to go so I give it my approval.

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