Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art

Subject: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Sun Oct 16, 2016 6:44 am

Name: Vega
Age: 16
Gender: Female
What Creature Are you?: Fairy
Race: Dominoian
Allegiance: Good
Origins: Magic User
Powers: Toys and Art
Spells:
Low Powered:
*Block Tower - Any objects/structures can be stacked in front of or around her like building blocks to form a magical shield/barrier. Can take up to three hits. If max hits are not reached, the barrier lasts for up to forty seconds. All objects and structures are put back to their original place after use of spell.
*Canvas Rupture - Vega cups her hands around the center of her chest and pulls them forward, creating small orbs of different colored magical paint to shoot at her target in a seven foot radius before dissipating. Up to ten orbs in one move. The spell inflicts light damage and stuns opponent.
*Puppet Tool - An enemy is enveloped in a magic wave that makes them lose control of their own body. Vega can control them to turn on their allies or help out their enemies for up to twenty seconds.
Medium Powered:
*Water Color Lullaby - Vega sings a melody and water colors float around her to enduce sleep to her desired target. There is a 50% chance of a direct hit. Target is asleep for up to fifteen seconds.
*Splatter Bomb - Vega claps her hands and slowly separates them to form an orb filled with magical paint. After throwing it at her target in up to a ten foot distance, the orb acts as a bomb and explodes in a seven foot radius.
*Stiff Joints - Vega outstretches her arms and shoots a beam from her palms at her target. Once hit, the target/enemy is slower in their attacks for up to thirty seconds. They can only move like a doll for that amount of time.
High Powered:
*Camo Wave - Her and the friends around her can blend into their surroundings. For herself, it lasts up to two minutes. For every 1+ person, it takes away thirty seconds.
*Blazing Missiles - Vega snaps her fingers, creating ten paint brush-shaped missiles to circle around her and point at her desired targets. Clapping her hands, the missiles shoot at a ten foot radius. Dissipates after ten seconds. Heavy damage.
Appearance: 5’6, Teal hair with thick curls, Bright, big light blue eyes, thick and long eyelashes, wears a flower next to her bangs, loves to wear knee length dresses and skirts, girly

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(fairy form by musasgal!)
Strengths: She is a wonderful listener and always has a piece of advice for anyone in need of one. She is very helpful and determined to get to a goal. She is open minded to anyone she meets, and tries her best not to have too many enemies unless they are a threat to her. Her creative nature allows her to fix most problems.
Weaknesses: She has trouble memorizing facts on the history of magic and realms. Most of the time, she needs to work alone. People looking over her shoulder can really throw her off course. She acts before she thinks, which can make the outcome a bit reckless and unorganized. Her work station is always a mess, even though she swears there is a system to it. She can be a bit too much of a people pleaser, which makes her forget her own needs.
Personality: A child at heart, Vega enjoys having a free and creative spirit. When one first meets her, she is very shy and hesitates to make friends. Partially because she has a habit of being a bit reckless and carefree with her words and actions and she is fearful of scaring people off with her loud personality. However, once one gets to know her, her lively and fun personality can be quite contagious. It’s hard to be in a sad mood around her. She is determined to keep a smile on any of her loved one’s faces and, in some rare circumstances, to strangers. She enjoys toy making and painting. With her reckless nature, and a bit of her fairy magic, she tends to have lots of trials and errors with her toy projects. However, she is determined to follow her dream of owning the magic dimension’s biggest toy company.
History: Vega resided in Domino with her mother and father until she was twelve years old. She lived peacefully, with her mother being a painter and her father being a carpenter. She loved to paint alongside her mother and build things with her father. She had a couple of friends, and was slightly bullied for her overwhelmingly bubbly personality. Her friends and family didn't allow this to stop her and were always there for her when times were tough. However, after the attacks of the Ancestral Witches, her mother was killed during the chaos. Vega and her father fled to Eraklyon after they were unfrozen, where they lived during and after their mourning period. During this period, her father blamed himself for not being able to save her mother. Vega, seeing this grief of her father at such a young age, did what she could to make him happy and be there for him. In the process of this, she discovered her powers one day when she found her father crying silently. Thinking of his favorite hobby that could cheer him up, which was wood work, she conjured up a hammer using just a rock and stick. Thus finding her fairy powers at the age of thirteen. When she turned sixteen, she left for Alfea College to study more into her fairy powers and learn how to better spread joy to those who hurt.

Subject: Re: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:52 pm

Spells:
You can have up to eight spells which have to adhere to the norm we set for spells. More information can be found in this guide regarding character building and how to fill in the sheet: https://believeinwinx.forumotion.com/t4496-guide-to-making-an-oc

Strengths and weaknesses:
Describe how the strengths and weaknesses affect your character and how they correlate with your personality.

Personality:
This looks really good.

History:
You might want to expand a little on this area. How did the attack affect your character except for the mourning of her mother who died? What impact did the move have? You might want to describe a couple of more key events in her life as well since now it feels incomplete.
Suggestions:
-What is the quality of her life regarding wealth.
-How did her father treat her after the move?
-How did she in school?
-Friends in her new place, friends she had left behind on Domino?
-How did Vega try to make her father happy again and how did that affect their relationship and Vega since she was only five years old at the time. (Would she even comprehend a complex emotion like grief at an age like that?)

Then there is a massive gap between the age of 7 and when she started to attend Alfea. Surely some major things must have happened in her life in the nine years that passed from when she discovered her powers until she went to Alfea, think about this and how it helped shape Vega into the fairy she is when starting out in the RP. (This will also help you reason out how the particular set of Strengths and weaknesses will function and manifest themselves. History, Personality and Strengths/weaknesses have a great deal to do with one another and have to form a comprehensive picture of who the character is and what has led up to shape the character.)

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Alright, I know this might be a work in progress, but I'll give you a bit of help now so bare with me.

Since you have her being originally from Domino, she'd be Dominoian not Ekryalian.

Remember you can have up to 8 spells for combat. Breath of life is more or less a basic toy fairy ability so you don't need to have it on your list. As with the other two spells, what class of spell are they (meaning how powerful are they?) So is the shield spells a medium powered spell or is it low or high?

For her strengths and weaknesses, they are all pretty much personality traits. You have to mix it up when it comes to this section, like add a weakness to subject or poor at a skill. If you use a personality trait, you have to explain how it strengthens her or weakness her.

As for the personality, I think adding in another trait and smoothing it out would do well.

Now for the history, Due to being from Domino (because our own canon time, plus information taken from the Italian version) there is over a 100 year gap, between the freezing of domino and unfreezing of it. So if she and her father left after they were unfrozen, you'd have to up her age up a bit to match. If they left during the chaos, was there some weird time stuff that went on that pushed them into the modern timeline?

Also, I'd like see more about Vega's early life, her build up to wanting to go to Alfea and what not.

Subject: Re: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Sun Oct 16, 2016 5:29 pm

thanks guys, this is a wip. i did as much as i could and decided to post it to get feedback. i'll be sure to work on what you guys mentioned!! when i do, do i post an updated version on this thread? thanks again you guys are really helpful!

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You edit the your first post and make a fresh post to tell us you made the updates. And no problem, just glad to help you out with this character.

Subject: Re: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Mon Oct 17, 2016 12:06 am

updated

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

For blazing missiles, are the missiles toys that she animates to life for combat?

What was Vega's life like before the attack by the witches? What happened in her life up to that point?

Subject: Re: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:47 am

catiebuug wrote:: Powers: Toys and Art
Spells:
Low Powered:
*Block Tower - Any objects/structures can be stacked in front of or around her to form a magical shield/barrier. All objects and structures are put back to their original place after use of spell.
*Spirit Rupture - Vega cups her hands around the center of her chest and pulls them forward, creating beams of light to shoot at her target in a seven foot radius before dissapating.
*Puppet Tool - An enemy is enveloped in a magic wave that makes them lose control of their own body. Vega can control them in any way she likes as if the enemy were a doll for up to twenty seconds.
Medium Powered:
*Lullaby - Vega sings a melody and her target is now asleep for up to thirty seconds.
*Disruption Orb - Vega claps her hands and slowly separates them to form a magical orb. After throwing it at her target in up to a ten foot distance, the orb acts as a bomb.
*Delay of Control - Vega outstretches her arms and shoots a beam from her palms at her target. Once hit, the target/enemy is slower in their attacks for up to thirty seconds.
High Powered:
*Camo Wave - Her and the friends around her can blend into their surroundings for up to five minutes.
*Blazing Missiles - Vega snaps her fingers, creating ten fire missiles to circle around her and point at her desired targets. Clapping her hands, the missiles shoot at a ten foot radius. Dissipates after ten seconds.

Would you be able to point out which spells are related to her art power? I'm having trouble finding them.

Subject: Re: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Mon Oct 17, 2016 6:37 am

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:

catiebuug wrote:: Powers: Toys and Art
Spells:
Low Powered:
*Block Tower - Any objects/structures can be stacked in front of or around her to form a magical shield/barrier. All objects and structures are put back to their original place after use of spell.
*Spirit Rupture - Vega cups her hands around the center of her chest and pulls them forward, creating beams of light to shoot at her target in a seven foot radius before dissapating.
*Puppet Tool - An enemy is enveloped in a magic wave that makes them lose control of their own body. Vega can control them in any way she likes as if the enemy were a doll for up to twenty seconds.
Medium Powered:
*Lullaby - Vega sings a melody and her target is now asleep for up to thirty seconds.
*Disruption Orb - Vega claps her hands and slowly separates them to form a magical orb. After throwing it at her target in up to a ten foot distance, the orb acts as a bomb.
*Delay of Control - Vega outstretches her arms and shoots a beam from her palms at her target. Once hit, the target/enemy is slower in their attacks for up to thirty seconds.
High Powered:
*Camo Wave - Her and the friends around her can blend into their surroundings for up to five minutes.
*Blazing Missiles - Vega snaps her fingers, creating ten fire missiles to circle around her and point at her desired targets. Clapping her hands, the missiles shoot at a ten foot radius. Dissipates after ten seconds.

Would you be able to point out which spells are related to her art power? I'm having trouble finding them.

honestly the only one is the camo wave. i completely forgot about her art portion and focused more on spells that were good attacks/damage. should i edit some to make them more artsy?

Subject: Re: Vega, Fairy of Toys & Art Mon Oct 17, 2016 7:14 am

catiebuug wrote:: honestly the only one is the camo wave. i completely forgot about her art portion and focused more on spells that were good attacks/damage. should i edit some to make them more artsy?

Yes. The spells should reflect the powers that are had. You don't have to make all of them art related; just the ones that aren't toy powers.

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