Alina Fairy Of Water

Subject: Alina Fairy Of Water Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:34 am

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name: Alina

age: 16

gender: female

what creature are you: fairy

race: Andros

allegiance: Good

origin: magic user

powers: Water

appearance: she has short brown hair with a hair clip on the side of her head, she has brown eyes, for casual clothes she has a blue top with a blue skirt and black boots that zip up and unzip, for her fairy form her wings are blue with bubble designs on them, her boots change from black to blue, her skirt stays the same blue, her hair goes into a ponytail and she has short black gloves since she is just a basic fairy

strengths: her powers are stronger near the water and surrounded other elements, She make friends easily with help She can cook meals with the help of friends, She loves to be around people she knows she can control her powers in any climate.

weakness: the fear of crowded places like bathrooms mall restaurants and other places, not getting enough sleep, She doesn't like to make friends with bad guys, She is bad at controlling her temper.

personality: she is shy she likes her space and is friendly when you get to know her and being private about her history, she is nerdy, she can be clumsy sometimes not all the times, she can be hotheaded sometimes when she doesn't get her way, she is very sassy with people, she can be poetic when she was to.

history: Alina was born in a cave by two fairies who were magicians to the planet Earth. She was kidnapped by a dark wizard named Dark soul who was one of the magicians on Earth when she was a kid because Dark soul killed his partner when she was in the cave. He keep her from finding out he lied to her and told her he want to a different traveling circus She learned how to use the key spell when she was bored in Dark soul's castle and unlocked every door in the castle when Dark soul was gone because she know every room in the castle sense she was bored. One day Alina was unlocked a secret door that said keep out she was just so bored she want to see what was in there when she opened the door to her horror she saw Dark soul's body in a casket with his soul drained dry.So she decided to run away from the evil man and run away to andros where a nice andros ringmaster told her he could tell her she could join the magix's traveling circus meaning he would go all of the magic dimesion. She learned she had bubble powers when she was playing with a seal and she saved the seals live when it was going to get eaten by a wild shark that get loosen from his cage because he was one of the traveling circus mans pet sharks What makes Alina tick is evil animals hurting other animals and others.She is special because she is the only fairy to have the bubble powers. She ended up learning about the magix universe thanks to Aisha one of the Winx club members and Alina meet her when on Earth when they were performing. When she was older she lived on Andros and she is still traveling with the circus and the circus ringmaster and his animals but he doesn't use sharks anymore because Alina doesn't like them. She meet Fran when she was ten years old when she was performing in an act in the traveling circus she performed in but she almost died thanks to a plant that was unleashed by one of the lynphea circus performer and Fran saved Alina from it meaning Alina owns Fran her live. She decided to go to Alfea after one of her friend Francine told her about it. She is now a student at Alfea but she does visit Andros and the man who is the ringmaster of the traveling circus when she is on vacation or go to Earth to watch Aisha perform with the Winx club band.

spells: Water key this spell unlocks doors low
Water shield it shields her from enemies attacks and evil sea animals for at least 10 to 5 minutes high
water blast it unleash bubbles on her enemies medium
water healer it only heals her and sea animals for 10 to 5 seconds low
water barrier it protects the people around her and the sea animals for at least 8 to 5 minutes medium
water drainer it takes all the bubbles and gets her ready for her bubble blast it takes at least 5 seconds to active low
water slash this attack paralyzes all her enemies in a fifteen to twenty radius for 5 minutes high
water burst this attack throws a lot of bubbles at her enemies for at least 5 seconds low

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

She can't clean big mess that her friends create, how is this a weakness James? Explain please.

Powers can not be bubbles, it would have to be water.

She can clean up small messes that her friends create, how is this a strength?

Subject: Re: Alina Fairy Of Water Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:50 am

oh okay I will make her a water fairy oh and i need to make fix the title.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Explains potions as strength.

The reliable person strength is more personality, so take it out. Same with Athletic and sporty, unless you can explain how its a strength it had to go. the clean up messes thing has to go as well since that's not a strength. So in the end, you need a total of two new strengths possibly.

Just reduce Agoraphobia to the fear of crowded places since its self explanatory as a weakness. You need to fix the Insomnia thing, explain how its a weakness.

Take out the mention of fran in the weakness and it makes little sense that she wouldn't be able to use water in a cold climate. it's magic water so she could still use it.

Subject: Re: Alina Fairy Of Water Sun Apr 09, 2017 5:06 am

good to go sir

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You only did half of what I said with strengths fix the rest of it. Nor did you touch what I said in weaknesses.

And when I say explain, you have to go into more detail for it.

Subject: Re: Alina Fairy Of Water Sun Apr 09, 2017 5:15 am

oh okay sir done.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

No you're not done. read over every ting I said with a fine tooth comb, because you messed up.

Subject: Re: Alina Fairy Of Water Sun Apr 09, 2017 5:25 am

I just noticed get rid of the reliable part in the strengths.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

you really need to read more carefully with this stuff.

Subject: Re: Alina Fairy Of Water Sun Apr 09, 2017 6:01 am

Will do master zero king of grammar.

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