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| Cygnus' third person RP training. | |
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zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 2:07 pm | |
| First topic message reminder :
Alright, now here we are to train you Cygnus in third person. It's not all that hard.
Third person allows you describe more things around you, but is less inner monology of the character. You don't have to be in your characters head the entire time, allowing for you to show more of what is happening in a given area etc.
Now I shall begins.
Sitting by the well with a large book of myths from Domino, The red haired specialists Roll eyes move back and forth at a very quiet pace. He skipped past the dragon flame chapter since to him it wasn't important. This story is rather interesting He thinks, as he flips the page. Nearby, his magiwolf pup, Layla and his cousins bunny Kiko, are running around with nets, chasing butterflies. | |
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zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 3:56 pm | |
| Roll is in front of her, not to the right of her. Kiko and Layla are the ones to the right. Please, try again and I'm sure you'll get it. | |
| | | Sashi Rains Winx Fairy
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 4:01 pm | |
| Sashi whispers, "I'm from planet Shilo." as she still gets shy and nervous while looking at the guy. | |
| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 4:09 pm | |
| It looks better.
Roll nods several times, closing his eyes. He couldn't figure anyway to break the ice and get this girl to stop being so nervous. Crossing his arms, the boy slowly opens his eyes and looks over at the pets. He slowly motions for the two to come over to where he is, then returns his attention to the girl, "I've never heard of it before, but can you tell me a bit about it." After he has spoken, Layla, with Kiko on her back, slowly trot over to the new student, both giving her looks of greeting. | |
| | | Sashi Rains Winx Fairy
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 4:15 pm | |
| Sashi whispers, "It's more of a old type planet with no electronics only horses to ride. However I was shock to see a flying bus going out of orbit. Like they were taking me away. It felt really weird my ears had pop during out of orbit." as she still talks to the guy that she didn't know. | |
| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 4:45 pm | |
| "Is that's why you're so nervous? You're not used to the culture that you see around?" The young man says to her, knowing full well of at least one other who had come from a vastly different culture than this. "I should Introduce myself, I'm Roll. I study over at Red fountain. These two bubbly animals are Layla and Kiko." The bunny waves from the Layla's back, trying to be friendly as he could be. Layla edges closer to sniff the girl. | |
| | | Sashi Rains Winx Fairy
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 5:57 pm | |
| Sashi speaks, "My name is Sashi Rains." she fiddle with her fingers, but looking at the ground to the right and then smiles. | |
| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 6:05 pm | |
| "It's nice meeting you Sashi." Roll answers, dropping his arms to his side. Layla sniffs once more and barks softly in hello. | |
| | | Sashi Rains Winx Fairy
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 7:04 pm | |
| Sashi looks at both cute animals. "Awww so cute." | |
| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 7:08 pm | |
| Kiko beams at the girl and gives her a large wave. Layla on the other paw barks softly in approval of the girl and sits down, awaiting some attention.
"You two are such hams." Roll comments dryly to the two animals in amusement. | |
| | | Sashi Rains Winx Fairy
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| Subject: Re: Cygnus' third person RP training. Sun May 15, 2016 7:30 pm | |
| Sashi closed her eyes and reach out slowly with her right hand a little bit close to petting on the top of the head, as she begins to open her eyes a little bit, like she was afraid to touch it. She felt a soft fur as she open her eyes then she smiles and laughs a bit.
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