Input on my fan fiction idea.

Subject: Input on my fan fiction idea. Sat Sep 19, 2015 2:03 am

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Hello! I hope this is the correct forum for this, if not please delete and or move. I am ok with it.

Ok, as I noted in my intro thread, I do fan fiction. Currently on the fan fiction website I am writing the AVP story "Loving the Dark Heart". It will be completed in a few months or so. So it is my focus till it is done.

However my daughter wants me to do a Winx fan fiction. So I told her I would start researching it. We both watch the show, and enjoy it, so I am not totally clueless.
However I could use some input on my idea and a general place to bounce ideas as they come.

I am planning my story to be centered on the Trix, it will be a redemption/romance story. It will take place some time after the end of season 6. I have to arrange for them to escape the legendarium world.(either them selves or are broken out)

Now my idea, is that after they get out, they have a discussion regarding their future. They have been beaten, battered and used for the last few years with nothing to show for it. Other then some nifty scars and bitter memories. They decide to just lay low, relax and do nothing strenuous.

So here is one part I need to figure out. Do I either create a OC world that is on the far edges of the Winx'verse map, that was obscure and unused in the show, or do I have them take refuge on Earth. I love either idea, and am leaning towards Earth as that would be easier for me.

Now I planned on having a OC character. He will be a single dad with a small little girl. The little girls mom will either have died at child birth, or in a car accident just before it and only the baby made it.

I have this idea of the Trix getting found by the Winx and a huge battle occurs. The Winx win. So here is a opportunity for my OC to ingratiate himself to the Trix. He could intervene on their behalf and get hurt(not a good idea but its a start) or he intervenes after the fact.

So after this battle there is lots of damage, lots of fires started, destruction every where. Our OC may not know who the Trix are(this is what im leaning to). He is trying to save people caught in a burning ware house, but instead comes across ICY, who is unconscious and badly hurt inside. He rescues her, as there is no one else there. Once he gets her outside, he runs into a injured Stormy and Darcy, who are in bad shape as well.

Their will be some back and forth about going to the hospital and they not wanting to, and they don't want to be seen. They are desperate to get out of the public. So he takes them to his home.

Now from there, a friendship starts between the Trix and this mans little girl, and specifically Icy, who the girl just adores for some reason. I will be blatantly ripping off Frozens theme of "love will thaw". However it wont be the OC males love initially that thaws the Ice queens heart, but that of his child. Which will naturally lead to romance between Icy and OC dad.

As you can see this story will be fraught with angst and inner conflict. They will have to decide between a more humble happiness or trying to ditch the family and get back to mischief. Of course I have to get the Winx club in the story some how so maybe they can be searching for the Trix.

So what do you guys think? I didn't put a lot down as I could write out a muti thousand word outline of my story, from a general sense. However that would be hard to read. I hope that I have given a good outline for your imaginations to spring from.

I am open to any suggestions and ideas. I just hope not to get shot down to hard for this. As I have been searching for trix romance over on FF and found only a few. I like the story "The Shard" the best out of what I have found so far.

I know that this will be the most ambitions and likely difficult story I have written yet, and I relish the challenge.

Thank you for your time, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts and ideas.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Well the fic here has to be at least PG to be on here, so maybe low level T from FFN.

Subject: Re: Input on my fan fiction idea. Wed Nov 11, 2015 4:25 am

Quote :: I plan on posting this, when I start it, on FF.net as well as here. It is going to be a mature story. NOT smut, erotica mature, but mature as in, suitable for adults and mature teenagers. Danger, language, violence and yes even a few spicy scenes as well. Basically It wont be a giggle fest story.

As Zero mentioned, the story needs to be PG for this site since we have members younger than a teen. For this site, I would minimize the spicy scenes to simple mentions. Danger is fine since that's nothing new (not even to the series), but the language needs to be cleared by the language dictionary that is posted on the site. Do not try to use words that aren't allowed.

Subject: Re: Input on my fan fiction idea. Fri Nov 13, 2015 1:34 am

Gotcha, Thanks guys. That gives me a clear guide. Of course, I can always make a "Uncut" version and post that one on FFN, and the Edited for content version here. Ill check out the dictionary you mentioned and will make sure I stay with in the limits.

I wasn't planning to many scenes involving spice, as the romance will be very slow.

I feel kinda stupid for not considering the fact their may be children here. Thank you for the heads up.

Also, on a unrelated note. Is there fire power sets other then dragon flame that Bloom has? Like Elemental Flame or some such? I have a story arc, spanning a few stories, and it involves a Character that focused exclusively on fire powers. To the exclusion of other non fire powers.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Yes, there is just basic fire element people out there. It wouldn't make much sense if there wasn't.

Subject: Re: Input on my fan fiction idea. Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:47 am

I kinda figured, but wasn't sure as it was, not discussed in the series that I have seen to date.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

It's not really touched on, but the closest you have to another fire user is Clarice.

Subject: Re: Input on my fan fiction idea. Fri Nov 13, 2015 3:10 am

Oh yeah I forgot about her.

Their will be a underlying theme or prophesy to this story series, that will slowly ramp up. Only flashes and mentions in the first story, but more significant as time goes on.

"Beware. The fire subdues the ice with fear. The darkness shall rise to bring the light."

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

That's rather interesting way to use something. I like it.

Subject: Re: Input on my fan fiction idea. Fri Nov 13, 2015 3:33 am

Glad you liked it. I thought it up while designing the overall "big bad". One of the things I saw mentioned here on this site, was that some of the villains were cliché or boring. So I wanted a big bad with depth, but also motivation. Most times you see big bad and it is simply "Rawr me Evil, all life must perish before me!"

So, what about a "big bad", that has responsibilities beyond him. His motivation is beyond simply gaining magical power, he already did that..

Basically, evil is just a matter of perspective.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

I say go for it, maybe his motives for his evil are different from what people will expect.

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