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zerowing21
RP Moderator
Posts : 9973
 | Subject: Aisha's Bootcamp  Thu Oct 30, 2014 7:33 pm | |
| Well Aisha, here is your boot camp. Start with a post from your character and we'll go from there. | |
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aisha238
Sirenix Fairy
 
Posts : 7867
Age : 24
Location : Fantasy Island: The only place where my dreams come true
Hobbies : Most likely playing Resident Evil, especially Resident Evil 5
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 7:46 pm | |
| "Hi, my name is Brianna. How are you?" | |
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zerowing21
RP Moderator
Posts : 9973
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 7:49 pm | |
| (You should have had the character enter and maybe look for certain person or character since we do use winx characters in this.)
Headmistress Faragonda looks up from her papers. There in front of her was a new student and she smiles warmly at her, "Welcome to Alfea. Who might you be?" | |
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aisha238
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 7867
Age : 24
Location : Fantasy Island: The only place where my dreams come true
Hobbies : Most likely playing Resident Evil, especially Resident Evil 5
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 7:55 pm | |
| "My name is Brianna" Brianna said to Headmistress Faragonda | |
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zerowing21
RP Moderator
Posts : 9973
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:01 pm | |
| (Don't forget your periods)
The woman smiles and slowly stands, "You must be the Princess from Flametopia, correct? It's wonderful to meet you." | |
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aisha238
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 7867
Age : 24
Location : Fantasy Island: The only place where my dreams come true
Hobbies : Most likely playing Resident Evil, especially Resident Evil 5
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:03 pm | |
| "Yes I am, I have an older brother and little sister." Brianna said to Headmistress Faragonda | |
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zerowing21
RP Moderator
Posts : 9973
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:14 pm | |
| (Forgot that period after Faragonda. Maybe have your character have some exposition or action. They're kind of static atm.)
The woman looks back at her desk, looking over the registry and then back to the girl, "Will we be seeing your sister when she is old enough?" | |
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aisha238
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 7867
Age : 24
Location : Fantasy Island: The only place where my dreams come true
Hobbies : Most likely playing Resident Evil, especially Resident Evil 5
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:28 pm | |
| "Yeah, she will be coming here when she is 16 like me." Brianna said to Headmistress Faragonda. | |
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zerowing21
RP Moderator
Posts : 9973
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:35 pm | |
| (Aisha, you're doing well, but we just need to see you do some exposition and actions here. Just look at what I've done with Faragonda with action and exposition)
"That's wonderful news." The woman begins, opening her draw. She take a key from it and slides it to Brianna, "You will be in dorm six." The headmistress leans back in her chair, making several quiet observations about the student across from her. | |
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aisha238
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 7867
Age : 24
Location : Fantasy Island: The only place where my dreams come true
Hobbies : Most likely playing Resident Evil, especially Resident Evil 5
| | Subject: Re: Aisha's Bootcamp Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:47 pm | |
| "Ok, I will head to my room now Headmistress Faragonda." Brianna walks to her room with the key to her room in her hand and when she gets to her room, she uses the key to open her room. Brianna goes into her room and says: "Wow, my room is really nice looking. It even has my favorite color on the walls." | |
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