Beth/Bethany Fairy of Earth

Subject: Beth/Bethany Fairy of Earth Thu Oct 30, 2014 3:59 am

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Name: Beth/BethanyThorn berry

Age:16

Gender:female

What Creature Are you?: fairy

Race: Earth

Allegiance: good

Origins: magic user

Powers: Earth

Spells:

Earth Crush This attack traps her enemies in big boulder the attack last for at least 20 minutes high

Earth smash this attack crushes her enemies with giant boulder and it hurts her enemies too high

Earth shield this attack shields her friends and herself medium

Earth energy this attack blasts out Earth energy that throws and hits enemies with medium

Earth punch this attack hits her enemies from a neutral distance making she can hit them from far away or close up medium

Earth barrier this attack protects her evil earth fairies or fairy hunters who are evil low

Earth fairy tracker this attack gives her the ability to sense earth fairies in danger or injured earth fairies her range for this spell is 200 meters away from all Earth fairies including the babies who might be earth fairies low

Appearance:

Casual look Brown hair pale skin and blue eyes glasses red shirt and purple skirt with blue boots

Fairy form she keeps the brown hair but in a bun and she keeps the blue boots and the glasses the only thing that the shirt changes from red to orange she keeps the purple skirt too her wings are green all over her back

Strengths:Great at pottery,Reading ancient writing,Math,Athletic, she can cook an good meal like someone she is knows, she can likes to work out when she is in a good mood or when she is tired of being lazy.

Weaknesses: Her powers are weaken by ice users potion classes, falling in love with boys who are jerks,she can be lazy when it comes to cleaning she can also be lazy when she is not in the mood to work out or when she is in a bad mood.

Personality: she is very nerdy and smart and she can be very easy trick with her powers,she gets annoyed by her sisters who pick on her alot, She is very talented she can sing and dance, She also knows how to cook thanks to her step sister Brandy, She enjoys taking care of People with her mother

History:Bethany was born in a house on Earth where she was the youngest one of the group in her family because she had two sisters named Amy and Samantha twins and her step sister brandy who always visited her and a mother named grace, a father named Craig. Her father was a doctor at a hospital who treat people but he always treat his Bethany like a princess when she wasn't one at all. Her mother was a nurse at the hospital with her husband who worked there too and they never had time for her. Bethany discovered that she had Earth powers when she was playing with on a cliff and she put her feet down on the ground and a rock came up. But when she had a enough of her sisters she would always use her powers to hurt them and then her sisters would tell on her and get her in trouble with the nanny her mom and dad hired because the nanny would always take her twin sisters side and make her cry on her room.When Bethany wanted to learn more about the magic dimension she decided to go to alfea where she wanted to learn another powers from another people and that is when she meet Brandy step sister, Fran, Sophie, Alina and Heather the girls who she hanged out with and she had all the classes on Alfea. How did Bethany learn about Alfea when her step sister brandy come to visit and saw her use her powers to hurt her twin sisters that and she had to stop her and tell her to be nice to her sisters. In the future she wants to became a Doctor like her dad or a nurse like her mom and marry a handsome smart man.

Subject: Re: Beth/Bethany Fairy of Earth Mon Aug 03, 2015 1:04 am

zerowing21 wrote:: James, the power of earth and animals isn't an allowed combo. Please select only one.

oh okay i'm just going for Earth then sense we have a an animal fairy ie roxy and changed up a couple of things

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 33 Location : New Zealand

Quote :: Earth fairy tracker this attack gives her the ability to sense earth fairies in danger or injured earth fairies her range for this spell is 5 miles away from all Earth fairies including the babies who might be earth fairies low

200 meter as a maximum range since she's still inexperienced.

The next lot, what I'm about to say with loxa's help, counts for all your ocs. It's something that needs to be addressed.

Quote :: Weaknesses: Her powers are weaken by ice witches,insects all types, ogres potion classes, falling in love with boys who are jerks, She is not good at helping people with big problems she needs her parents help with it

This is something that we have noticed across all of your ocs. Please stop saying your OCs are weakened by witches or fairies. Just say Her powers are weaker to ice users. Insects, ogres, and helping others with big problems aren't weaknesses so please remove them. And for now on, if we see something like that, we will tell you to either reword or remove them.

Anyway, the only valid weaknesses you have so far:
1)Falling in love with boys who are jerks
2)Her powers weaker to ice users
3)Potion class

Quote :: Strengths:She is great at pottery, her powers are strong when around water fire and technology fairies she is good at ancient warnings like her step sister brandy she is athletic like her sister's friend alina,She is awesome at Math, controlling her, She is great with animals big and small, She is good at helping people with small problems she doesn't need her parents help with it

Her powers cannot be strong next to ANY type of fairies. Please stop adding your OCs are stronger next to certain type of users. Controlling her, and helping in small problems are not strengths. This goes for all of your ocs, not just Bethany.

So far, you are left with these valid strengths:
1)Great at pottery
2)Reading ancient writing
3)Math
4)Athletic

If you ONLY add in the strengths and weaknesses that we pointed out to you, then they will be allowed. You must not add anything else.

Quote :: She enjoys both hot and cold weather, She enjoys getting gifts from boys and her friends, She enjoys studying for math tests and also magic tests in Alfea the school for fairies

Please remove these from personality since they're likes and dislikes. Please stop adding likes and dislikes to your personality with all of your ocs and switch them with personality traits. This is the third thing we noticed and needed to be addressed.

Subject: Re: Beth/Bethany Fairy of Earth Sat Aug 29, 2015 7:31 am

yukai5 wrote:

Quote :: Earth fairy tracker this attack gives her the ability to sense earth fairies in danger or injured earth fairies her range for this spell is 5 miles away from all Earth fairies including the babies who might be earth fairies low

200 meter as a maximum range since she's still inexperienced.

The next lot, what I'm about to say with loxa's help, counts for all your ocs. It's something that needs to be addressed.

Quote :: Weaknesses: Her powers are weaken by ice witches,insects all types, ogres potion classes, falling in love with boys who are jerks, She is not good at helping people with big problems she needs her parents help with it

This is something that we have noticed across all of your ocs. Please stop saying your OCs are weakened by witches or fairies. Just say Her powers are weaker to ice users. Insects, ogres, and helping others with big problems aren't weaknesses so please remove them. And for now on, if we see something like that, we will tell you to either reword or remove them.

Anyway, the only valid weaknesses you have so far:
1)Falling in love with boys who are jerks
2)Her powers weaker to ice users
3)Potion class

Quote :: Strengths:She is great at pottery, her powers are strong when around water fire and technology fairies she is good at ancient warnings like her step sister brandy she is athletic like her sister's friend alina,She is awesome at Math, controlling her, She is great with animals big and small, She is good at helping people with small problems she doesn't need her parents help with it

Her powers cannot be strong next to ANY type of fairies. Please stop adding your OCs are stronger next to certain type of users. Controlling her, and helping in small problems are not strengths. This goes for all of your ocs, not just Bethany.

So far, you are left with these valid strengths:
1)Great at pottery
2)Reading ancient writing
3)Math
4)Athletic

If you ONLY add in the strengths and weaknesses that we pointed out to you, then they will be allowed. You must not add anything else.

Quote :: She enjoys both hot and cold weather, She enjoys getting gifts from boys and her friends, She enjoys studying for math tests and also magic tests in Alfea the school for fairies

Please remove these from personality since they're likes and dislikes. Please stop adding likes and dislikes to your personality with all of your ocs and switch them with personality traits. This is the third thing we noticed and needed to be addressed.

feedback please sorry forget to say this is done and ready to be checked

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