Andréa Samantha Valentines, The Fairy Of Nature

Last edited by SwiftieCat on Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:29 am; edited 7 times in total

Name: Andréa Samantha Valentines
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Height: 5'8
What Creature Are you: Fairy
Ethnicity: Earth
Race: Linphea(But Moved To Earth)
Allegiance: Good Side
Origins: Magic User
Powers: Nature
Spells:
Deadly Vines — She creates a sparkly green ball that releases thick grey-green vines that holds the enemy tight. Level:Medium
Dancing Flowers — She shoots a multi-colored beam of flowers towards the enemy. Level:Medium
Flower Twister — She shoots a ball of flowers which can paralyze the enemy. Level:High
Blossom Of Flowers — She shoots a beam of pink and golden flowers that hypnotize the enemy if shot. Level:High
Marching Warriors Of Nature — She can control trees and make the attack the enemy. Level:Medium
Shimmering Petals — She summons petals that can trap and slice the enemy. Level: Medium
Flower Shield — She summons a defensive shield in a shape of a flower. Level:Low
Leaves' Coating — She creates an green spherical defense shield. Level:Low

Appearance:
Civilian — Her hair is long and black with blue stripes. Her eyes are light blue. She wears a top black and white shirt partnered with black pants. Her boots are colored black, white, gray, and a little bit of blue.

Magic Winx — Her hair color is still black and blue but the blue stripe is moved down. Her top is black and looks a bit like enchantix. Her bottom is a yellow skirt. As for the shoes, her Magic Winx is partnered with doll shoes instead of boots.

Strengths:
- She has excellent leadership qualities.
- She's good at fighting hand to hand combat.
- She knows how to control her power very well.

Weaknesses:
- She is bad at speeches, Math, and Science.
- Darkness weakens her powers 50%.
- She is very allergic to pollen.

Personality:
Andréa is a kind, cheerful, and a friendly girl. However, she gets mad easily. She is very emotional and she can be very shy. She is a curious-thinker and a very jealous friend. However, she can also hide her true feelings and show her facade instead. She is also easily distracted.

History:

Andréa was born in a poor family in a hidden place located at Earth, her own family being her parents, herself, and a brother named Samuel. They were all from Limphea but they moved to Earth to help humans. From her birth, her family expected her to do great things, and as soon as she could use magic, the magic of the nature. Once she started to use magic her parents drill her over and over to practice and control it. When she turned 13 did tragedy strike, a rouge band of witches attacked Earth capturing all their citizens and make them into stone statues and turning the once lush landscape into a stone sculpture.

Andréa was helping her friends go away as fast as possible from their village. The witches saw her moves and cast a stone curse on her. When her brother saw it, Samuel managed to push Andréa through a portal else where before the stone curse could capture her, but it caught Samuel instead.

The portal landed Andréa on Linphea where she spent the next three years practicing and developing her magic. She met friends that helped her understand her power. After those three years did she manage to get into Alfea, hoping to further her magic in hopes of saving her home from stone.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Her description nee eds a bit more. To me the controlling the madness thing is more of a personality thing. And could you make it so her personalty doesn't seem so...flat?

zerowing21 wrote:: Her description nee eds a bit more. To me the controlling the madness thing is more of a personality thing. And could you make it so her personalty doesn't seem so...flat?

How about now?

You forgot Race.

SwiftieCat wrote:

Spells:

Spoiler:

Quote :: Spells: 8 is the maximum limit of powers. Only two attacks are allowed to be leveled as high. You can have any number of spells but the maximum is 8.

You have nine. Remove one.

Quote :: Strengths:
- She can easily avoid pranks.
- She keep getting good grades.
- She knows how to control her power.

None of these are strengths.

Quote :: Weaknesses:
- She is easily affected by other's words.
- She let herself down easily.
- She is afraid of snakes.

These don't sound like weaknesses.

Quote :: Personality:
Positive: Kind, Nice, Cheerful, Friendly, She can control her madness and show up her facade.
Negative: Shy, Curious, Moody, Emotional, Depressed

Quote :: Personality: This section, under no circumstances, should be summed up in three sentences. Nor should it be summed up in a list of words.

Please expand on these characteristics.

Quote :: Luxurious Ivy — She creates a sparkly green ball that releases thick grey-green vines around the enemy; or she shoots a green beam at the ground, which makes vines grow upwards that tries to coil around the enemy. Level:Medium
Petal Hurricane — She shoots a glowing, multi-colored beam of flower petals toward her enemy. Level:Medium
Flower Twister — She shoots a beam of golden flowers towards the enemy. Level:High
Blossom Blaster — She shoots a green ball which is surrounded by green butterflies at the enemy. Level:High
Nature's Symphony — Her body is surrounded by a green glow that conjures up a wind which lets everyone hear to the voice of nature, however the voice of nature is only understood by Andréa. Level:Low
Glitter Dust — She blows golden dust on the ground, from that grows thick vines wrapping around the enemy. Level:Medium
Natural Camouflage — She disguises herself and her clothes to camouflage with the surroundings. Level:Low
Spring Ring — She summons a defensive shield of the shape of a green shamrock/clover. Level:Low

All of these are Flora's spells, please be original!

Quote :: Personality:
Positive: Andréa is kind, cheerful, nice, and friendly. She can also control her madness and show up her facade.
Negative: Andréa is shy, curious, moody, emotional, depressed.

Again, please describe these. Do not word them out, describing the personality gives us a good understanding at how the personality works with her.

How about now, Sarah?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Personality needs more negative things in it. Being distracted is more of a personality trait. The powers look alright now.

zerowing21 wrote:: Personality needs more negative things in it. Being distracted is more of a personality trait. The powers look alright now.

Now?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

It looks better, but since she's a fairy she wouldn't even use swords or other weapons so I can't really see it as a weakness.

Done.=)

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