Ruby, witch of fire.

Subject: Ruby, witch of fire. Wed Aug 27, 2014 3:47 am

Name: Ruby Rose Johnson.

Age: 17

Gender: Female

What Creature Are You?: Witch

Ethnicity: Eraklyon

Race: Erakyonion

Allegiance: Neutral

Origins: Magic User

Powers: Fire

Spells:
Fire blast: A basic blast of fire. Level: low
Fire shield: A shield made of pure Fire magic, which can burn you on outside contact. Level: low
Fire arrow: A blast of fire which can be thrown at a very exact, specific area and does not spread any farther than that area. Level: low
Burning heart: A spell to give a specific victim the feeling of a burning heart. Level: Medium
Fire control: A spell that grants ability to control natural fire. Lasts about 30 minutes. Level: Medium
Fire vortex: A huge tornado of flames. Level: High

Appearance:
Ruby has curly, dark auburn hair, big brown eyes, and fair skin with a speckle of freckles. She loves to wear bold, fierce colors, especially red and orange. Her favorite everyday outfit is a tight red top with orange accents, a ripped black mini-skirt, and orange ankle-high boots. She also loves to sometimes wear her chic black dress.

Strengths:
*She can tolerate intense heat longer than most people
*She's very smart and has good grades
*She has a good memory

Weaknesses:
*Awful at sports
*She's a bad driver
*Her powers are weakest in the winter and cold climate.

Personality:
Ruby has a very reclusive, bitter attitude, but she's also a very persuasive, focused girl. Due to her troubled past, she has abandonment issues, so she has trouble trusting people and opening up. She often has anxiety in large social situations. She has a very sharp mind and loves books and hates sports. The only person she considers her true friend is Diamond, and she'd do anything for her. She loves her family more than anything.

History:
Ruby was born on June 1st, 12:08AM, a mere 10 minutes after her sister, Diamond. Her parents were Clara and David Johnson. Her family was extremely poor, and unfortunately, could not support both twins. Her parents were forced to give Ruby up for adoption.

Ruby spent the first seven years of her life passed around fostercares, growing bitter and reclusive. By what seemed like a miracle, a young couple finally adopted her. It took a while for Ruby to warm up to them, but eventually she did. By the time she was 13 years old, her fire powers emerged. Her mother, a witch herself, helped her to steadily control her powers.

One day when Ruby was 15, she was in a coffee shop when she ran into a girl who looked almost exactly like her. It was then she found out about her twin, Diamond. Ruby had a hard time dealing with this news, but slowly started warming up to Diamond and they found themselves becoming the best of friends. She also met her birth parents, but still resents them and refuses to acknowledge them as her parents. Her adoptive parents are her only parents in her eyes.

When she was 16, she and Diamond got enrolled to Alfea college through scolarship. Ruby had meant to enroll at Cloudtower, but it was taken over and now all Cloudtower students had been moved to Alfea.

Subject: Re: Ruby, witch of fire. Wed Aug 27, 2014 12:50 pm

Quote :: *She's usually intensely focused
*She's very persuasive.

Personality traits. Please change it.

Quote :: *She has a bitter attitude
*She trusts almost no one.

Personality traits. Please change it.

Add more to her personality, in addition to the four above that should be in the personality.

Other than that, everything seems fine to me.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Sarah beat me to what needed to be changed. But Change those and you'll be good.

Subject: Re: Ruby, witch of fire. Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:01 pm

Updated.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Kyra is gonna get on your case for this, but cooking isn't a strength and you need to still add in negative traits to the personality!

Subject: Re: Ruby, witch of fire. Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:11 pm

Updated. Wouldn't a bitter attitude be a negative trait?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You need at least one more I feel. It doesn't feel even if not.

Subject: Re: Ruby, witch of fire. Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:29 pm

Updated.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Much better *stamps approved on the characters forehead*

Subject: Re: Ruby, witch of fire. Wed Aug 27, 2014 5:22 pm

I'll give my approval as well!

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