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winxdaphnebg Sophix Fairy
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| Subject: Magic story ! Tue Nov 05, 2013 5:20 pm | |
| First topic message reminder :It was a windy and rainy day at Alfea . The four girls were sitting in the hall . They were studing for tommorow . Suddenly the current stop . It was dark . They didn't see a thing . - What will we do now ? - Asked Alex . - I don't I don't see a thing . - Said Sara . - Let's use a little bit of fire to see . - Said Amanda . She make a little fire in her hand so they could see what's around them . - It's so scary here . - Said Mitchell . - We're in our apartament relax . - Said Alex . - Let's just seat down and talk . Everyone agree . They sit down and talk . Suddenly a loud nouse came from the corridor . - Let's see what's going out there . - Said Alex . The four girls go in the corridor there was a big fat monster ! - Let's transform ! - Said Amanda ( Amanda fairy of fire . ) ( Alex fairy of nature . ) ( Sara fairy of water . ) ( Mitchell fairy of wind . ) - Take This ! Fire ball ! - Said Amanda . - I didn't effect ! - Said Mitchell . - We must fight harder ! Tornato ! - Flower attack ! - Said Alex. - Water beam ! - Said Sara . - Fire ! ( just fire ) - Said Amanda . We beat it and then Griselda came . - What's going out here ?! to be continued ... | |
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The author of this message was banned from the forum - See the message | winxbloom800 Sophix Fairy
Posts : 572 Age : 24 Location : Lenix but my home planet is melody Hobbies : singing, dancing, reading, tv, sports, playing pokemon , helping the winx and studying at lenix
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:59 am | |
| - FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:
- Thank u for understanding
not really because i just wanna stop talking.... | |
| | | firebid1030 Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411 Age : 33 Location : aurora colorado Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| | | | Crystal Flake Moderator
Posts : 1207 Age : 27 Location : I live in my Crystal Castle :3 Hobbies : Listen to music, play video games, chat with my friends, making Winx photos, and eating! XD,
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:04 am | |
| James don't worry... You were just stating ur opinion | |
| | | The author of this message was banned from the forum - See the message | winxbloom800 Sophix Fairy
Posts : 572 Age : 24 Location : Lenix but my home planet is melody Hobbies : singing, dancing, reading, tv, sports, playing pokemon , helping the winx and studying at lenix
| | | | Kyra_Xyrespace Super Moderator
Posts : 1182 Age : 31 Location : America Hobbies : Writing, playing games, moderating on another forum
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:12 am | |
| - winxbloom800 wrote:
- just keep the bad comments to yourself and say nice things its a good story :)keep it up!
No. She should have given better advise to help the story, but this "keep bad comments to yourself" is a poor excuse. - FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:
- Everyone makes mistakes on not putting credits like someone I know >.>
This is the second time she's placed up works of art that didn't belong to her. That's not a mistake, it's not wanting to do it at all. If someone doesn't know at this point to credit someone, then that's on them. - FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:
- Duh but have u think that maybe she's Shy! Aha!
Not an excuse. - FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:
- James don't worry... You were just stating ur opinion
I think you posted in the wrong thread. | |
| | | The author of this message was banned from the forum - See the message | winxbloom800 Sophix Fairy
Posts : 572 Age : 24 Location : Lenix but my home planet is melody Hobbies : singing, dancing, reading, tv, sports, playing pokemon , helping the winx and studying at lenix
| | | | firebid1030 Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 15411 Age : 33 Location : aurora colorado Hobbies : working , playing on computer/phone, watch television/youtube videos, hanging with friends and family,,going to the movies,sleeping
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:16 am | |
| - FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:
- James don't worry... You were just stating ur opinion
yes and I have a lot of opinions plus I have a lot of changing up to do btw can someone delete my fanfic so I can make a new and improved version with winx daughter still I'm just changing one of my rpc's she will be Brenda fairy of the dragon flame daughter of bloom and using fran's full name in it I don't know when I will be it might be this week or in two weeks | |
| | | Domino_kitty Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 3464 Age : 43 Location : I used to be on the East Coast of the US in beautiful WNY. Now I'm in Canada where we have a living wage and health care. Hobbies : Political debates, reading, writing, procrastinating.
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:22 am | |
| - winxbloom800 wrote:
- Domino_kitty wrote:
- winxbloom800 wrote:
- FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:
- I know that's why! Don't blame it on her! Your basically telling her to stop doing this because she isn't good! She can do better by practicing!
like i said im not good and writing and i know that and she is still good anyway The only way you'll get better though is to practise at it and take advice from people willing to help you. That's how I got better. i dont need advice i have a teacher and parents Wow, fanbrat much? I don't tolerate that talk from my 9 year old and I don't tolerate it online either. You're very rude to people who do want to help you and obviously you're not taking your teacher's advice, or your parents' for that matter. Child, I'm old enough to be your mom, the only difference is that I'm on this forum and she isn't.
You aren't working up to your full potential, everyone can see that. I'm sorry that you don't want to try harder and keep acting rude to anyone who is trying to help. | |
| | | Katsu Sophix Fairy
Posts : 665 Age : 27 Location : Bulgaria Hobbies : apples
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:24 am | |
| Stop it. No need to turn her story thread into a war... She didn't claim the art is hers and plus it has credits on the pics, as long as she didn't say "these are MY pictures", I see nothing wrong.She is only 12 I think? You guys should be more gentle to her in a way giving your negative opinions.I understand you Domino_Kitty, but you being older than them, should know when it's good to back off and leave them, cause you know there is no point arguing Also, I would like Winxbloom to change her avatar which she stole from Crystal and stop claiming its hers.Now if this continues, I'll be locking this, if anyone is gonna comment in here, it has to be about the story. | |
| | | Domino_kitty Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 3464 Age : 43 Location : I used to be on the East Coast of the US in beautiful WNY. Now I'm in Canada where we have a living wage and health care. Hobbies : Political debates, reading, writing, procrastinating.
| Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 3:15 pm | |
| I still don't think anyone should be allowed to be rude. She was rude to everyone else when we critiqued her story. | |
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