Maryliz Stilton - Fairy of I don' t know yet

Subject: Maryliz Stilton - Fairy of I don' t know yet Wed Mar 25, 2015 3:19 pm

Name: Maryliz Stilton
Age: 13 years
Gender: Female
What Creature Are you?: Fairy
Race: Earth
Allegiance: Good Guys
Origins: Human
Powers: Uh... still don't know yet
Spells: Don't know yet too (obviously, if don' t know my power)
Appearance:

Like this:

Or like this:

Strengths: I am good at science, "talking" with horses or making music.
Weaknesses: I can be really insecure in my decisions, I am kinda suspicious too and I would do a lot just to help a person.
Personality: friendly, smart, CRAZY, insecure, very, very, veery stubborn
History: Maryliz was born in a wealthy family, but she had never been very pround of that. Since she open her eyes and started listen that she loves horses and music (that's why I don't know if I should be the fairy of animals or music). When she made 12 her parents took her to a harass for choose a horse [Wonder, her stallion], riding is her passion just like playing guitar and singing. Mary is a great student and very good friend, she dreams to be a wonderful fairy and use her powers to make the world a better place. Her favorite phrase is a part of a song named "Man in the mirror", from Michael Jackson and it says:" If you wanna make the world a better place.Take a look at yourself and then make that change. "

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Welcome to joining us on the rp.

Now, time to do a few things here, origins would be magic user since she is a fairy. To attend Alfea the character has to be a minimum of 16 years of age. You need to expand the personality a bit. It can't just be four things. Flesh it out, she needs good number of negative and positive traits. Doing a lot to help a person, sound more like a strength or even a personality trait.

Also expand on the history a bit. Talk about her early life, how she finds she's a fairy of whatever she is. Animals sounds like a safe bet. Even explain why she wants to go to Alfea.

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 32 Location : New Zealand

Welcome!! It's great that you decided to join the rp.

I guess zero didn't explain this (-donks zero on the head-), but it's our job as RP mods to make sure that your oc is perfect and ready to join in the rp section. We go though your oc, then ask questions and suggestions to help your oc to become fit to rp.
For a guideline for what we are asking, please visit this thread made by our super mod: https://believeinwinx.forumotion.com/t4496-guide-to-making-an-oc

Now, for your oc.....hmm....
For the strengths and weaknesses, it's more for your oc, so for this, it's more like Maryliz, she and her. Next post I will have a closer look at them.

As for her powers though....hmm....it sounds either Animals or Music. But I have a guide for you to help you out! Here is the list of the approved/available powers you can choose from: https://believeinwinx.forumotion.com/t3343-allowed-powers-and-more
And if you choose gems, here is a list of the available gems that you can be able to use: https://believeinwinx.forumotion.com/t3353-allowed-gems (sorry if it's a link overload Laughing

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One more thing before you update. Personality needs a bit more of an explanation. This can cover what she is like and how to handle her when she is interacting.

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