lee fairy of technology

Subject: lee fairy of technology Tue Nov 12, 2013 7:15 pm

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Name: lee

Age:16

Gender: female

Height:"5 and 6"

Allegiance: good guys

Origins: magic user

Race: zenith

Creature: fairy

Powers:Technology

fairy form: Magic winx. In Her transformation she wears a yellow skirt with a black shirt and black boots. She also has her wings that look like a butterfly that green in the outside but yellow in the inside.

Appearance: she has white hair that can turn into any hair style. a yellow shirt that can change color if she in the dark. red shorts that can glow. purple eyes and has black shoes with a gold shoe lace. pale skin. she wears a watch that has a gold numbers on them. wears blue glasses.

spells:
1.Low Tecno sting: is a spell that allow you to sting your enemies in a Tecnoweb. Once there caught in the web they will get electric shock.

2.High Technology blast: is a powerful blast that take alot of contraction to focus on your enemies that can cause a powerful damage to them which makes them weak and can no longer attack with there spells.

3.High Digital spiral: is a spiral that you can throw at your enemies if they get hit by it the spiral knocks them into another part of the universe.

4.Low Virus wall: is a giant wall that helps you take cover.

5.Low X-ray goggles: magic goggles that allows you to see skeletons or secret doors ways or to find someone.

Strengths: Lee really great when it comes to solving math problems. Or hard puzzles that involves technology. She also great with fixing and broken technology such as computers, cell phones, and laptops. Lee is Self Motivated and Determined she always determined to accomplish her missions and she motivated to get things done she takes it really seriously.

Weaknesses: drinking sugar make her blood pressure rise so she can get all crazy or hyper which makes her powers week and also lose focus when she trying to aim for her foes.lee cant swim. she clumsy sometimes. Scare of spiders.

History: she was raised on zenith where then she got separated by her parents who they took care of her they even read a story to her when she turn three and brought her amazing gifts. but then when she went to bed Dante kidnapped her so he can steal her powers. Dante an evil wizard who trick her into believing he was her father when he casting a curse on a photo and he gave it to her. He wanted her powers so he can becomes the powerful evil wizard in the world.She lived with him for years thinking he's her father until one day she looked at the picture again and it showed her her true family. She then got mad and gain her powers and over the years she train until the day she decide it was time destroy Dante once and for all. After his death the curse was lifted without his life force the curse serve no purpose. Then after five years the curse was broken.She then apply for a college for fairy's call alfea where she learn about alot of magic things.

And she meet Mrs fargonda and learn about the other magical colleges then she meet den from red fountain and she ask if he could be her boyfriend he said yes. lee then told den about her that she was a fairy and how she gain her powers and etc as a kid before she met dante she was all alone walking in the forest until she found a castle that had a king, queen, and a prince that was lee age. they ask if she wanna to play with her son she said yes. so she went into the prince room where play with the toys then. after an hour evil witches attack the castle the prince quickly grab lee they ran down a secret tunnel but unfortunately the prince feel in a dark hole that the witches cast a spell on the ground. lee was so scare she use her powers to destroy the hole and save the prince the prince ask how she did that and she said she don't know then they met up with the king and queen and escape.

after she escape with the king, queen, and prince she decide to go on her own journey she want to explore the magic dimension. so she said goodbye to them while the king, prince, and queen took a ship to another country.

personalty: She smart, funny, brave, cool, and very intelligent. When she mad she glows red. When she crying her eyes turn brown and she began's to act all down. But when she in love her eyes turn red but she is shy when it comes to asking a guy out. She can be impatience sometimes.

Subject: Re: lee fairy of technology Tue Jan 21, 2014 1:36 pm

Oh come on! :PIt's a joke. That's why I crossed the "~~Not~~". Hehe! Sorry for the misunderstanding! ^^

Subject: Re: lee fairy of technology Tue Jan 21, 2014 10:12 pm

SarahTheGirlieGamer wrote:: Oh come on! :PIt's a joke. That's why I crossed the "~~Not~~". Hehe! Sorry for the misunderstanding! ^^

i knew it was a joke Razz

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

OK Deme, time for you to update the character. You need Race as in what planet Lee is from. Origin would be magic user now. Alligence would be good guys only. You need what creature are you which is fairy. You also need Powers which is Technology.

She needs to have a basic fairy form in appearances now.

Please have the spells listed out, not in a box of text. You can have up to eight spells, but only 2 high.

How can a fairy, who just got her powers defeat a wizard? And why does
How is being hyper and crazy a weakness? Please explain.

Does Lee have any fears?

I would ask you to rework all strengths. Flying really fast and running aren't strength unless she excels at them.

Why does Dante want her powers anyway? And how is a fresh fairy able to defeat a powerful wizard? How does the curse break? The entire history is confusing and feels like it needs a complete overhual.

Her personality needs to be moved up and expanded upon. She needs more positive and negative traits.

Also one of the attacks uses DNA, how is that tech related?

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 32 Location : New Zealand

-coughs- I think it's time for a revision as well.

Quote :: spells: 1 is low.tecno sting is a spell that allow you to sting your enimes in a tecnoweb. 2 is high.tecnoalgy blast is a powerful blast that take alot of focus. 3 is high.dna spiral is a spiral that you throw at your enimes. 4 is low. ace is when you can think of all the people using tecnoagly and contract on that and use it as a blast to hit your foes.

Um....wut? Let me to address them in order.

Quote :: 1 is low.tecno sting is a spell that allow you to sting your enimes in a tecnoweb.

What happens after the enemy gets caught in the web? Does it cause damage?

Quote :: 2 is high.tecnoalgy blast is a powerful blast that take alot of focus.

A lot of focus of what? What does this attack do to the enemy? Does it hurt them?

Quote :: 3 is high.dna spiral is a spiral that you throw at your enimes.

Um....DNA isn't tech. That is more biological. Think you can rename it? And what effect does it has on the enemy?

Quote :: 4 is low. ace is when you can think of all the people using tecnoagly and contract on that and use it as a blast to hit your foes.

Ace what? And this is more of a high attack than a low attack.

Don't forget that you have a max of 8 spells so if you want to have it balanced more, feel free to add in a couple of more spells. We also have a new form too so I suggest you update the oc sheet to the current format.

Also, and I hate to be that gal, but please make sure that your grammar and punctuation is correct and clear to read. It will make our job MUCH easier.

Subject: Re: lee fairy of technology Fri Mar 13, 2015 1:33 am

Ok Yukai and Sten check on see if I need to fix anything.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You need to place the spell names before the description so we know what it is without guessing. You need 3 strengths minimum. The Fear would be in weaknesses.

Subject: Re: lee fairy of technology Fri Mar 13, 2015 11:02 pm

zerowing21 wrote:: You need to place the spell names before the description so we know what it is without guessing. You need 3 strengths minimum. The Fear would be in weaknesses.

ok I edited check to see.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You're still missing 1 strength.

Subject: Re: lee fairy of technology Sat Mar 14, 2015 12:02 am

zerowing21 wrote:: You're still missing 1 strength.

Ok How about now

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Can you make one not dealing with technology. All these could be lumped into one strength at this rate.

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