~ForeverChloe~
Lovix Fairy
Posts : 823
Location : You should know since you stalk me.
Hobbies : love to read, love to write, LOVE TO LISTEN TO MUSIC!!!!!
 | Subject: Why i ever left  Sat Nov 03, 2012 3:50 pm | |
| I heard a slight voice yelling across the hall and ringing in my ears. I made enough energy to get up and bump right into my mom. ‘Jasmine you’re kidding right you pretend you did not hear me hurry up and pack up time for school! ‘She scolded nearly making me deaf. 'Sorry mom it’s just I was sleepy and did not get....’ 'I don't care!" she interrupted she threw my back pack at me and walked away. I really hated mornings like this but I knew it was going to get worse much worse. My mom was the type who was really busy and if you don't listen or do what she says she thinks she been wasting her time explains to you what she wants you to do. Let’s put it like this you follow what she says or she will really hate you. i don't blame her she is very busy she is a lawyer she was always cheerful bringing people to justice. But of course that all changed after they let this criminal set free non guilty after he stole something from some store and accused it on some girl that he claimed to be a fairy. I mean really fairy's how dumb is he i never really believed in them but my friends have I just make fun of them. But after i do strange things start to happen to me like... ‘Jasmine stop standing there and looking off to space! Life is meant to live not to stare into space now get to school!' I heard her yelling again. Just great now its school was worse than ever! End of chapter 1 { try ed to make it short so you don't freak out!  } | |
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Awesomesauce
Harmonix Fairy
 
Posts : 1162
Age : 23
Location : Undecided. I'm moving and probably won't be updating this.
Hobbies : I... I can't remember. But my friends say I like to sing.
| | Subject: Re: Why i ever left Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:21 am | |
| Nice concept. Needs some work on the dialogue and natural flow of the story. I'd like to see more  | |
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~ForeverChloe~
Lovix Fairy
Posts : 823
Location : You should know since you stalk me.
Hobbies : love to read, love to write, LOVE TO LISTEN TO MUSIC!!!!!
| | Subject: Re: Why i ever left Sun Nov 25, 2012 4:27 am | |
| Thanks but i wrote this cause i was bored i wrote wayy better storys than this.. thanks though | |
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SwordArtOnline
Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 2679
Age : 23
Location : I have no idea.
Hobbies : Listening to kpop
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~ForeverChloe~
Lovix Fairy
Posts : 823
Location : You should know since you stalk me.
Hobbies : love to read, love to write, LOVE TO LISTEN TO MUSIC!!!!!
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