lmodern1878
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 | Subject: Lyrics -- Farewell (Remix)  Thu Jul 14, 2016 3:55 pm | |
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TITLE: FAREWELL
ORIGINAL MIX BY: DUAL CORE
REMIX BY: KRYSTAL MEYERS & CARLY FLEISCHMANN
NOTES: This song deals with a previous relationship I had that did not do too well. The context of it is that Krystal and Jennette had to go away for awhile to help Jennette's mother after she had had a stroke, but did not want to leave me alone as they knew how that would affect me so they called in a replacement to ensure I'd be OK. In the end it did not turn out too well or how they would have expected. The end message in this song is the no matter what don't give up even if you think you've failed. Like the last verse says "the world did change, but not how they thought it would."
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[LYRICS]
trials in this life whether calm or disaster
sadness and the laughter beginning through the after
turn the page, then we start another chapter
{farewell}
they waved, as their car drove away
tail lights vanished in the glow of the day
coping with the change all alone in this new state
sent the girls off to help family now she’s so alone each day
don't know what to do with this change they've been given
started an idea Makayla Jane for holograms
they want to change the world, make it better, make it different
{farewell}
on the run like she's super slick
a nonverbal who knew the tricks exceeding every challenge set
moving quick, hoping they don't shoot her with
a lie tranquilized that they get her to maneuver in
started with her knowledge and a proof to make it lucrative
the bin is not a future for a unique nonverbal girl
bounced underground, finally made it out the loony bin
{farewell}
farewell if you ever ask why
farewell, tell if you never say die
farewell, please let me see you put your fist up
always fair well when determined not to give up
farewell now i gotta make them proud
farewell, out when i'm waving to the crowd
farewell let me hear you say it now
{farewell}
conversation stops when their advocate is mentioned
an undetected presence on the phone lines they leverage
so much potential they change it to financial
connected, relentless, no interest in a penance
they're just, bent on a method for their vengeance
prevalent with messages, know how to make an entrance
identities unknown, these citations need a reference
bet you'll get it with this very next sentence
not forgiven not forgotten but there’s certainly a buttersock
{farewell}
factor mathematics then it's all a game of averages
coding, overflowing, still invoking what their passion is
get a nonverbal kid and match then with an advocate
pad it with an additive for automatic catalyst
the fact that it exists isn't actually the saddest bit
scale across the planet understanding what the fraction is
instantly mobilized and suited up for battle quick
{farewell}
farewell if you ever ask why
farewell, tell if you never say die
farewell, please let me see you put your fist up
always fair well when determined not to give up
farewell now i gotta make them proud
farewell, out when i'm waving to the crowd
farewell let me hear you say it now
{farewell}
control's coming loose, cause and effect
know when to choose, pause let it set
show me the proof, call for the best
moment of truth, go again
control's coming loose, cause and effect
know when to choose, pause let it set
show me the proof, call for the best
moment of truth, and it's all that you get
trials in this life whether calm or disaster
sadness and the laughter beginning through the after
turn the page, then we finish out the chapter
{farewell}
she's the leader of these agents
no debate, bringing help to the helpless
Starbucks and agents, mad 'cause they're flagrant
but they hacked all the caps that were placed for the S.R.
delivering a way to save the holograms they're faced with
an uncaring girlfriend who’s misusing all resources
facilitated with the networks she stole from the holograms
{farewell}
not what they meant from their steady trend of envious
holograms’ are lonely, the couple left girlfriendless
the darkest of surprise, see the startle in their eyes
the project that they started was the heart of their demise
now they work in a center in Madera town
so altruistic, they meant to do a lot of good
the world did change, but not how they thought it would
{farewell}
farewell if you ever ask why
farewell, tell if you never say die
farewell, please let me see you put your fist up
always fair well when determined not to give up
farewell now i gotta make them proud
farewell, out when i'm waving to the crowd
farewell let me hear you say it now
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yukai5
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| | Subject: Re: Lyrics -- Farewell (Remix) Thu Jul 14, 2016 10:53 pm | |
| A bit of critique here. The verses is way too long, which could or could not loose interest of the audiences. If you be able to shorten the verses to just one paragraph of about 4-5 lines each block, it should still tell the story that you want to tell, but be at least easier for the audience to follow along. | |
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