Elinor Gates, Fairy of the magnetism

i create this OC, and i want to know if i can use her in some roleplay

name: Elinor Gates

Age: 17 years

Gender:female

what creature are you?:fairy

race:earth

Allegiance:good

Origins:Magic user

Power:metal Manipulation and electricity

spells:

Polar Shield: she is able of create a magic barrier composed of magnetism
impregnated with her magic to stop any attack, specially usefull against electricity based magic.(medium power.can resist around 1 hit of high power before dissapear, altough it could vary according of the strongs of the blocked attack, his duration is around 1 minute)

Voltaic Spear:she generate a Spear maded of electrity that due to being guided for the magnetic field of the oponent have a high accuracy.(high power.)

thunder fist: she charges her fist and feets with electricity to fight hand to hand ad can cause paralize.(low power. the duration of the paralize is around 15 seconds)

electro blade: she create a katana maded of pure electricity,wich she is very skillfull using it, in part due to her likening of anime series that have sword fightings. (medium power, duration around 3 minutes)

compass guidance: she create a compass that guide her to places hard to find seeking their magnetic fields his maximum range of utility is of 5 kilometers, duration, 10 minutes.(low power.)

pression shocker: manipulating the magnetic field over certain area, she is able to manipulate the gravity in some degree, allowing her to increase the weight or reduce the weight of a thing or being, allowing her carry it easly or smash it.(high power.100%, the duration is around 2 minutes)

magnetize needle: she is able of cure minor or medium injuries by manipulate the organs of someone hurted, take around 20 minutes in cure the hurting.(low power)

guidance target: she is able of curse a target, a object or being, causing to all the metalic objects fly violenttly towards these target, hurting it or slowing it down, duration 1 minutes.(low power)

appearance: Elinor is a clear skin girl with brown hair,, she use a hair brooch in a braid in the left side of her hair, have purple eyes, and she is a athletic girl that altough dont look muscular is toned.

civilian outfit: she wears a white sleeveless shirt and turtleneck, along  a blue pant and purple sandals.

fairy form:she wears what looks like a one piece swimsuit turtle neck cerulean on top and under the breast is decorated with a pink lace, in the soulders wears a yellow metal shoulder pads, in the base of the neck she hold a peridot jewel, in the bottom is color indigo. completed with a pair of cerulean gloves and a league in her left thigh, and platform heels:

Spoiler:

Streghts:
she train physically all the days, is by it that she have a lot of endurance.

she have a great eye for the details, something that allow her notice things that others overlook.

she have an excelent accuracy, this is due that she dont like spent many energy because she follows the teaching of the iaijutsu, one strike, one defeat(specially when uses electroblade), the same style means that she is very good counterattacking.

great reflexes and acrobatically skills.

practice of martial art, specially judo and a strange hability to maintain the calm in stress situations.

weakness:
she have problems using her powers in places where not are metal and due to it she must rely in her eletrical powers, like the forest, altough she try to compesate it by manipulate the subterranean metals, it if she detect it.

she could be VERY timid, in part due to her past, something that cause she have problems rely in others.

sometimes she could have problems understanding the instructions, (altough this is less notable in battle due that there she put more attention)

never enter in a place if not have all the information, something that may delay her to help.

elinor, even with her hard training have problem using her electrical powers in wet places, like on board of a ship in the sea or similar, altough she is training to correct it, a suit maded of rubber or another dielectric material is good option to fight her too.

in the earth she always must hide her powers by fear of being treated as something anormal, is by it that is a little bit distrustfull

history
she born in the earth a long time ago, in london, england, her mother Marceline Gates, was a Fairy from tirnanog, and her father, Micah Gates, was a medieval historian, that was focused in the study of the england's dark ages, specifycally the arthurian myths trying to find the truth behind the myths and legends.

for elinor's misfortune, her mother die by childbirth complications(or that was she thinks), due to it she grown up without her mother and not have memories from her, since her childhood she enjoy the histories about fairy tales and myths and legends, something that her father not aproves due that he wants her attained to the reality... until the day tha elinor when have 10 years and are in her birthday, an  august 14, accidentally make levitate the family's car, something that cause the other childs of the neighboorhod fear her and even call her "monster" and force both to move to japan, where they dont fear these harrasment, there, her father to explain her the truth.

Elinor learn that her father never tell her about the true nature of her mother by fear of lose her too,because marceline was prey of the magicians of the black circle, dying in the battle and her mother not want her in danger by them, but elinor, decided to learn about her heritage attain a magical mirror that was between her mothers belongings that allow her travel to magix, where she meet Maia(the same sorcerer who helps bloom with her enchantix, and was a good friend of marceline) in pyros that, with her father approves because Micah thinks that there she could be safe of the blacks circle, training her in the use of her powers, and meet her animal friend, a golden falcon called Lancelot that have the capacity of fly to the sound speed, due to the hardest of her training she develops a strongs power,allowing her to hypotetically fight with enchantix fairies altough she not earn her enchantix yet.  until her 17 years,when she decide going to study in alfea, in part because she knows about the winx reputation and maybe she can befriend with they.
trivia:
birthday: august 14
astrological sign: elf
favorite food: mashed potatoes
favorite color: cerulean
favorite movies:historical dramas
loves: the tranquility
favorite music: j-rock and j-pop
Like:the manga/anime
dislike:hipocrecy

personality: she's the kind of girl that could be very reserved, principally due to her past, because of it she have problems rely on the people, but once you meet deeply she's a marvelous person,she is very entusiast when is about do new things, something very clear when discover about her powers, because this mean for her that she could emulate the feats of her heros/heroines of her mangas.she have a sense of justice that she thinks can't forgett, specially when is about situations that deserve punishment, is by it that she want to be a guardian fairy, to be able of defeat any evil sorcerer in the magical dimension, but this sense not blind her about what is important, if she see something in danger she will not doubt in help him/her. sometimes she have problems understanding the metaphors, is by it that some people could think that she lacks of humor sense. she not enjoy spent time with elistist people because she thinks that the people snobbish forget that what is really important is what is a person inside and not outside.

Like a trivia, elinor is a little bit otaku(her favorite mangakas are masami toriyama, rumiko takeuchi, nobuhiro togashi, hiro kishimoto, hiromu watase, kazuki takei, between other ), normally she uses anime motifs for example  quoting events from diferent anime serie and comparing with events around her, or planning her táctics taking anime series as reference, something that strangely works for her

So she's pretty much a metal manipulator correct.

Please denote if your spells are low, medium or high power.

How long do some of these spells last?

I think her 3rd and 4th strength can be combined to say she's very athletic and with that has good reflexes.

I kind of feel like the 2nd strength and 2nd weakness conflict to me. She is very good at noticing details, but she misses things. Do you mean when focused she misses out on some of the bigger details?

In the rp, we have it set where everyone learns their magic at age 10, so please change that in her history.

I would ask to expand a bit on her childhood, like what was it like and what not.

How exactly did she come by the mirror?

Birthday should be placed in history and maybe you can explain in the history why she hates hypocrisy.

While I think she has enough positive traits, she needs more negative traits in her so she is balanced out. Also, aura reading can only be done with those with no magic.

This is just a note, but atm, you need at least 2 mods approval on your oc. So please bare with us while we help you out.

Don't feel discouraged by our comments, Talgoose. We're trying out best to help you with your oc.

zerowing21 wrote:

So she's pretty much a metal manipulator correct.

Please denote if your spells are low, medium or high power.

How long do some of these spells last?

I think her 3rd and 4th strength can be combined to say she's very athletic and with that has good reflexes.

I kind of feel like the 2nd strength and 2nd weakness conflict to me. She is very good at noticing details, but she misses things. Do you mean when focused she misses out on some of the bigger details?

In the rp, we have it set where everyone learns their magic at age 10, so please change that in her history.

I would ask to expand a bit on her childhood, like what was it like and what not.

How exactly did she come by the mirror?

Birthday should be placed in history and maybe you can explain in the history why she hates hypocrisy.

While I think she has enough positive traits, she needs more negative traits in her so she is balanced out. Also, aura reading can only be done with those with no magic.

This is just a note, but atm, you need at least 2 mods approval on your oc. So please bare with us while we help you out.

Don't feel discouraged by our comments, Talgoose. We're trying out best to help you with your oc.

i fix all those traits.

in part, because Elinor can manipulates electricity.

With the power section you just need to tell us she uses metal manipulation and electricity.

The voltage spear has to have some chance to be avoidable. It would be op if it wasn't.

How long does magnetic needle last?

How many hits can polar shield take before its gone?

zerowing21 wrote:

With the power section you just need to tell us she uses metal manipulation and electricity.

The voltage spear has to have some chance to be avoidable. It would be op if it wasn't.

How long does magnetic needle last?

How many hits can polar shield take before its gone?

i make the corrections, what do you think of they?

and the idea of the evangelistic came to me because i have the question about how could react these kind of people when they see someone that have powers like the fairies.

fifteen hits is way too much for polar shield, normally for us here medium shields last 1 to 2 hits, maybe even 3 depending on level.

Well I'm not familiar with evangelicals, but some might see her as a witch cuz of magic, but I can't be sure without looking up details on that sub branch.

Now, why would Maia want to train her? Also, as a note, when your character enters the rp, they will be new to alfea, so they can't know the winx, unless through an event in the history where they had an encounter or something, or just of heard of them and meet them when they finally arrive.

This will be my last comments for now, since I want to get another mod to look over your character since they will probably see something I missed.

How long does compass guidance and thunder fist last?

Also, don't forget to tell us when you made corrections so we know you did it please.

Tal, whenever you make corrections to your character, you need to post here to tell us you did the updates and what ones you did. It helps us know what you've done and its also part of the rules.

Sailor Lily wrote:

How long does compass guidance and thunder fist last?

exist some kind of limit to the duration of the spell, what about 20 minutes for both?