Auorra Le Fay

Subject: Auorra Le Fay Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:15 pm

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Name: Auorra Morgan Le Fay
Age:17
Gender:female
What Creature Are you?: Witch
Allegiance: Evil
Origins: Dominio
Powers: Fire
Spells:
Fire Vortex: a huge tornado of flames and last 3 minutes. Level:high
Fire Blast: a basic blast of fire Level:low
Sheild of Fire:a Sheild made of fire last five minutes Level:low
Arrows of Fire:arrows made of fire which is thrown at a specific area. Level:low
Fire Heart:a spell to give a victim the feeling that they're heart is on fire for half an hour. Level:medium
Control Fire:gives the user the ability to control fire for half an hour.

Appearance: Auorra Le Fay - Page 2 Raliene__witch_of_blood_by_holhez21-d34g3jw

Auorra Le Fay - Page 2 Raliene__witch_of_blood_by_holhez21-d34g3jw

Strengths: tolerate heat than most people,has good grades due to studying, and has good memory
Weaknesses: Water,Ice , and cold climates, death(she's scared of death)
Personality:Auorra is very petty and mainupative. She is a cold woman who would do anything to get her way. She is cold and calculating. She doesn't care if anyone gets hurt or killed because of her plans. She is at times soft to witches that are in the same situation as her. She now only surrounds herself with people who she's sure that won't betray her. She loves newbies that have potential in her.
History: Auorra was born as the second daughter of Lord Damon of Dominio and Lady Danae of Isis. When assassins were sent to assistante her father her mother escaped with her and her sister. Her mother was a cold woman who didn't care for Auorra only for Ashley her older sister. Auorra was taught by her aunt Lily in the dark arts as a young child. It was Lily that supported her when her mother supported her sister only. So she learned everything from Lily while she can until she turned sixteen.When both sisters were sixteen they were enrolled at Alfea. At that moment she had killed her mother and sister indirectly by hiring assassins. They were killed leaving Auorra the heiress to all that fortune as she was the only leaving relative they had. She then moved to Cloud Tower and tried to be the best Fire Witch in the universe. She has almost no friends expect few.

Subject: Re: Auorra Le Fay Sun Jul 19, 2015 1:25 am

Both half an hour

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

30 minutes is too high for a high spell. It should be 2 to 3 minutes tops. As for the medium, that seems a tad high as well, but I will confer with the other mods on that.

Subject: Re: Auorra Le Fay Sun Jul 19, 2015 1:58 am

How about this?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

That looks better. I still would like a bit more on her history if you wouldn't mind.

Subject: Re: Auorra Le Fay Sun Jul 19, 2015 9:52 am

What else can I add like her new rivals and friends or is that God modding?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

I mean like early history like child hood, like what events shaped her aside the assassination stuff. When did she learn of her magic when she was young, etc. Adding in rivals or friends she hasn't officially met yet is more or less not something you can add in yet.

Subject: Re: Auorra Le Fay Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:59 pm

Is this fine?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Guess it will do. How long does her shield last. Why is she awful at tennis? Did she play tennis when she was younger?

Subject: Re: Auorra Le Fay Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:19 pm

She played tennis when she was younger with her sister and she lost. It was humiliating for her because she lost it in public.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

That reasoning really doesn't make it a weakness. If she just never grasped the game and wasn't really able to compete that well in it, then that would be it. Maybe another rp staff member should say something here soon to help you out.