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| Subject: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:58 pm | |
| Name: Matrim Dermoor, also known as “Matrim the traveler”
Age: 63
Gender: Male
What Creature Are you?: Humanoid.
Race: Citizen of Magix
Allegiance: He's neutral but has a strong tendency towards being good.
Origins: Magic user
Powers: Undetermined (see history)
Spells: None (See history)
Appearance: He is a man who most often dresses in colorful robes rather than normal clothes. His robes come in all colors except for pink, purple, white and black. His hair has mostly turned gray and he grows a beard which he wears braided. His hair grows long and sleek. It hangs about halfway his back. His skin is Caucasian but the many travels and the aging of his body has turned it leathery. Lines emerge from his eyes and the side of his lips and his cheeks are a bit soggy by the wear of time. Most of his face though is covered by the large braided beard he wears. When he reads he wears rectangular glasses which are surprisingly narrow. The glasses are set in an anthracite colored frame which only envelops the top half of the glasses and leave the bottom bare.
Strengths: Explanation Scholar strength. Matrim knows a lot of stuff from a lot of realms, knows much about the lore, the culture and the people there making it a knowledge based strength. Often he tells stories about his experiences in other realms and uses the wisdom gathered to solve or identify problems (problem identifier synergy).
Explanation moodlifter Strength. Moodlifter is a strength that doesn't influence Matrim directly but he helps lift the spirits of those who seek him out and talk to him. He tried to give solid and honest advice. (Problem identifier synergy)
Explanation Problem identifier Strength. Along with the analytic mind of his scholar heritage honesty makes Matrim very good at pointing out where exactly issues lie. Not only is he able to identify them, he isn't afraid of expressing where the problem lies. He will however always remain tactful about approaching delicate situations when feelings might be hurt (moodlifter synergy). Identifying problems doesn't benefit Matrim directly but it does positively influence his environment.
Weaknesses: Explanation Scattered Weakness. The scattered weakness (synergy with friendly) causes Matrim to regularly drift off subject when talking to someone. For instance when he's having a conversation with someone about flowers, he manages to fluently change the subject to bees, then to the price of honey and ultimately ending up explaining how the economy works. Indirectly his train of thought makes sense though it deviates vastly from where the initial conversation started. Matrim also has trouble identifying whether his conversational partner is still interested in what he has to say (Lonely Synergy) This way of talking is also something that goes on in his braid. He's scattered and it's hard for Matrim to focus on a single subject for prolonged duration of times.
Explanation limping Weakness. Matrim cannot run. He could perhaps very briefly in the time of most need but can't keep it up for long and will be in pain when this occurs. This is a weakness when confronted with danger and he has to flee.
Explanation non-magical magic user weakness it has been detected by the wizards that Matrim is a magical creature of some sort and does possess magical energy within him, be it a very tiny amount. Matrim however never managed to channel enough of this energy to discern where his power lies.
Explanation of Magical fear Due to events going awry with his best friend (see history) Matrim is uncomfortable discussing magic since he cannot understand it and has seen first hand the devastating effects of it going wrong. He will refuse any magic being cast on him if he is able to do so (If he is conscious or awake).
Personality: As explained in the Strengths and weaknesses Matrim is a friendly and honest man who's molded by the many travels he made, the different cultures he experienced and the hardship he's been through. Friendship is something he never truly knew for a long time, every time he made close friends he traveled to another realm (See history why). He's very talkative and loves to tell stories about his travels. He also enjoys an audience when he tells his stories.
Due to his many travels and many experiences with different cultures has caused Matrim to be extremely open minded about many ideas including ones persona. He almost always acts understanding even when faced with issues often considered weird or taboo even. Unfortunately his understanding of people and the many different ways people function also causes him to be understanding and supportive of negative traits. This is because he has come to understand that even when ideas seem weird or alien to him, in other societies this works just fine and thus he respects other point of views, both for the good and for the bad.
History: Matrim was born in the suburbs of Magix and his life was pretty much like any other average life in Magix. Matrim excelled in school in the subjects history, geography and English while being substantially weaker with the beta subjects like math and science. At his sixteenth when his high school time ended Matrim attended to wizard school. He unfortunately needed to stop with his studies very soon since his magical energy was too weak to even determine the origins of his power, let alone that he could actually channel anything useful. However Matrim had to stop training to become a wizard, the school did see the intellect Matrim possessed and let him study on the school anyways to become a scholar, which was all that Matrim wanted. During Wizard school it was also when he met Mark. During freshman year they were assigned a project together in history class.
During this project Matrim and Mark became good friends and for the first time Matrim learned to link happenings that happened between realms, how one thing on melody could influence the political course on Lynphea. How everything played out.
This was the start of a great friendship that lasted through the entire duration of Wizard school. Matrim expanded his knowledge about history and culture of all the magical realms and also one non magical realm, namely Earth. He saw his friend not only grow in his knowledge but also in his might as a wizard. He had amazing abilities to teleport over vast distances and also to create gateways between different realms. He would travel all the realms, working towards his dreams.
It was near graduation, with the final exams nearly over both Mark and Matrim were sure to get their graduation. Matrim as a scholar and Mark as a wizard. They had agreed to travel the realms together and get to know everything. Right before graduation Mark decided to jaunt to his home realm of Dolona to visit his parents one last time before he would head into the world.
It was at the day before graduation when his friend mark wanted to visit home. The wizards had a year of unprecedented feuding with the witches behind them, though no one was prepared for the final blow the witches would deal. Mark became a wizard specialized with transportation magic, he could conjure the most accurate portals over great distances. So the day before graduation he decided to head home. Unfortunately for Mark his magic was tempered with and when he realized it was too late. His portal scattered his body and spat him out distorted beyond recognition. Until this day, this image is burned into Matrim's memory and the death of his best friend weighs heavy on his shoulders.
At graduation Matrim stood with tears in his eyes on the stage. In his speech he asked everyone present to have a minute of silence for Mark, since he had only died the day before and so they did.
Graduation was hard for Matrim, he lost everything he cared about and now he was a scholar, equipped with the knowledge to gather more. And so a couple of days later, after giving himself some time to mourn Mark's death he started with his journey, the journey Mark was supposed to take with him, though he was no more, only with him in spirit so he decided to visit every realm for the both of them.
And so he did, starting with Solaria. He made detailed documentation of all he saw and took whichever jobs he could do in order to provide for his existence. He had refused Alfea's offer to become their historian, though he always returned to the place in order to leave his documentation. Every time he was in Alfea he told the fairies who studied there the stories of his travels and did whichever services needed to pay for his stay, not that it was required of him since he delivered the documentation which he wasn't really paid for at all.
It was at his first visit to pyros Matrim had started to always carry a quarterstaff around, Which he could often be seen decorating, making carvings of what he had seen and experienced. Ever since his visit to Pyros Matrim had a limp which seemed to be the reason why he had the habit of walking with a quarterstaff. Until this day he refused to say a word about what happened and neither does he allow the limp to be magically healed.
This cycle continues until this day, though his stays at Alfea became longer and longer each time he visited. As he grew older he couldn't ignore the rest for which is weary bones yearned. Nor could he ignore his brain yearning for familiarity. Visiting all the realms and studying their cultural differences enriched the man, but also took their toll. Now he has arrived at Alfea once more, perhaps permanently unless the allure of traveling calls him once more.
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| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:22 pm | |
| I have to say, Matrim is a very interesting character. I would like to see at least on more positive and negative trait for him in personality. | |
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| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:57 pm | |
| Added a personality trait that works both the positive and the negative way. Added part: Due to his many travels and many experiences with different cultures has caused Matrim to be extremely open minded about many ideas including ones persona. He almost always acts understanding even when faced with issues often considered weird or taboo even. Unfortunately his understanding of people and the many different ways people function also causes him to be understanding and supportive of negative traits. This is because he has come to understand that even when ideas seem weird or alien to him, in other societies this works just fine and thus he respects other point of views, both for the good and for the bad. | |
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| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Mon Apr 06, 2015 11:37 am | |
| *stamps tentative approved on his forehead* You might want to take out the dialogue since its considered Fluff and some mods don't like that. As well as make it more summery then story. | |
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| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Wed Apr 08, 2015 10:08 am | |
| Oooooookay. Everything seems good - except strengths and weaknesses.
Being a storyteller isn't considered a strength. Sure, strengths can be stuff that makes a person shine on top of others, but there are millions of storytellers all over the worlds. Unless he's known as the top storyteller in the world, that's definitely a strength.
Friendly. Only thing in it that can count as strength, is him encouraging others. Which is basically "empowering others wills." Which in sense...is a personality trait. Unless it works in battle; which considering he can't combat nor would someone's will be lifted up by just few words 100% of the time, it can't be a strength.
Honesty. This is another personality trait. I see no way it can be a strength; unless you can explain how it is a strength in your book.
On to weaknesses.
Talkative is also a personality trait. I also see no way it can be a strength; unless you can explain how it is a strength in your book.
Explain how is being lonely a weakness to him. It can be a weakness, but from your description, it doesn't explain why it's a weakness. It just states how loneliness. | |
| | | Nikkie (✿◡‿◡) Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 2285 Age : 33 Location : Netherlands Hobbies : Worldbuilding, writing, making music, watching shows, reading, dungeons and dragons.
| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:41 pm | |
| General explanation of strengths and weaknesses. Matrim is a character purely made as a non combatant, thus I resorted for my strengths and weaknesses within his personality trait. So you're right by saying that the strengths and weaknesses are in fact personality traits. I have explained with every trait why it works in Matrim's advantage or to the advantage of those surrounding him as well as personality traits that work against Matrim or his immediate surroundings.
Explanation storyteller strength. The storytelling strength isn't a strength because he's exceptionally good at telling stories but he simply knows a lot of stuff from a lot of realms, know much about the lore, the culture and the people there making it a knowledge based strength.
Explanation Friendly Strength. Friendly is a strength that doesn't influence Matrim directly but he helps lift the spirits of those who seek him out and talk to him. He tried to give solid and honest advice. Come to think of it it's more a virtue than a strength actually but in my opinion with a character like Matrim the strengths will more often cross or lay with that character's virtues rather than particular skills. This also synergizes with the honest strength/virtue.
Explanation Honest Strength. Along with the analytic mind of his scholar heritage honesty makes Matrim very good at pointing out where exactly issues lie. Not only is he able to identify them, he isn't afraid of expressing where the problem lies. He will however always remain tactful about approaching delicate situations when feelings might be hurt (Friendly synergy). Honesty doesn't benefit Matrim directly but it does positively influence his environment.
Explanation Talkative Weakness. The talkative weakness (synergy with friendly) causes Matrim to occasionally drift off subject when talking to someone. For instance when he's having a conversation with someone about flowers, he manages to fluently change the subject to bees, then to the price of honey and ultimately ending up explaining how the economy works. Indirectly his train of thought makes sense though it deviates vastly from where the initial conversation started. Matrim also has trouble identifying whether his conversational partner is still interested in what he has to say (Lonely Synergy)
Explanation Lonely Weakness. As explained in the history Matrim never stayed in one realm for more than one or two years at the most. His friendly nature did give him acquaintances but he never managed to truly build a connection with someone since he was often absorbed with his work. This along with the death of his best friend during his time at the wizard's college causes the loneliness. And how it functions is that he's very talkative when he's around others (Talkative synergy). But it also causes him to become melancholic and withdrawn when he's confronted with his own loneliness by seeing other friendships bloom or when people come to him to talk about the subject. It functions a bit complexer than the other strengths and weaknesses since this is a deeply rooted problem and an experience he feels he has missed during his lifetime, it's basically his one big regret. And exactly that is what causes it to be a weakness for him, it's something that makes him sad and thus withdrawn and less likely to engage in conversation, perpetuating the problem. He's also somewhat frightened to make connections with someone or actively seek friendship due to the only half-processed death of his best friend. | |
| | | Nikkie (✿◡‿◡) Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 2285 Age : 33 Location : Netherlands Hobbies : Worldbuilding, writing, making music, watching shows, reading, dungeons and dragons.
| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:04 pm | |
| Revised wording and naming in OP of my strengths and weaknesses. | |
| | | Nikkie (✿◡‿◡) Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 2285 Age : 33 Location : Netherlands Hobbies : Worldbuilding, writing, making music, watching shows, reading, dungeons and dragons.
| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:13 pm | |
| Tweaked the History Added part. It was at his first visit to pyros Matrim had started to always carry a quarterstaff around, Which he could often be seen decorating, making carvings of what he had seen and experienced. Ever since his visit to Pyros Matrim had a limp which seemed to be the reason why he had the habit of walking with a quarterstaff. Until this day he refused to say a word about what happened and neither does he allow the limp to be magically healed.
Weakness Loneliness Limp Weakness is now limp and no longer loneliness. | |
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| Subject: Re: Matrim the traveler (Matrim Dermoor) Sun Apr 12, 2015 11:19 pm | |
| - Nikkie (✿◡‿◡) wrote:
- What Creature Are you?: Human
Race: Citizen of Magix
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Origins: Magic user
Powers: Undetermined (see history)
Spells: None (See history) Under no circumstances is a human allowed to have magic. None. Now, if he's human oid, then that's different and should be changed to such. But a human is not allowed to have magic. At all. - Quote :
- History:
- Spoiler:
Matrim was born in the suburbs of Magix and his life was pretty much like any other average life in Magix. Matrim excelled in school in the subjects history, geography and English while being substantially weaker with the beta subjects like math and science. At his sixteenth when his high school time ended Matrim attended to wizard school. He unfortunately needed to stop with his studies very soon since his magical energy was too weak to even determine the origins of his power, let alone that he could actually channel anything useful. However Matrim had to stop training to become a wizard, the school did see the intellect Matrim possessed and let him study on the school anyways to become a scholar, which was all that Matrim wanted. During Wizard school it was also when he met Mark. During freshman year they were assigned a project together in history class. – “Gentlemen, This is a two man project, all partner up please,” The teacher said. Matrim rolled his eyes, it was commonly known he was just there as a scholar rather than a wizard in training and that didn't quite make him the most popular kid in class. Everyone was rapidly partnered up and to no surprise Matrim found himself without a partner. He sighed deeply and already prepared himself to do this on his own, as he had to with some of the previous projects since those classes held odd numbers. Yet this class was different, it didn't hold and odd number of people so another one was without partner. “Mark, you partner up with Matrim,” the teacher said.
Matrim could recognize the same thing in Mark as he had thought himself, yet another group assignment that needed to be done alone, and of course the surprise when it turned out it didn't. Matrim approached Mark; “seems like we're stuck to one another,” Matrim stated casually joking and chuckled softly.
“Seems so,” Mark responded tentatively not really knowing how to handle Matrim's approach. Matrim tensed up when he noticed it had set off Mark a little and apologized to him.
“So, we need to make a report about the Solarian royalty four hundred years ago, can you imagine a more boring subject?” Matrim asked to get started with the project.
Now Mark smiled and started: “Don't be deceived with the current status of Soralia. They now know an era of unprecedented peace since house Lunius came to rule. Before that, including four hundred years ago subterfuge, deceit and civil unrest between different groups was ever prevalent. Where there is light, there must be shadow. So on Solaria you have the people of the sun and the people of the shade. These groups used to be enemies, couldn't stand each other until back in the day Lord Lunius united the groups with a truce from which a long lasting peace emerged, the peace now known on Solaria,” Mark explained.
Facinated Matrim listened to Mark's elaboration of the subject and suddenly his interest was sparked. There could be much to be learned from this project, both historically as anthropologically. “Wow, I never would have thought Solaria to have such a troubled past,” he said and smiled. “Good to see I'm not the only one with an interest in history.”
Mark looked a bit surprised at the statement. “Then how come you know nothing about this?”
“Well, I mostly read into the history of Magix and the history of Earth. I'm perhaps a bit narrow,” Matrim explained sounding somewhat ashamed of the accusation, which was right since he did learn rather narrowly.
“Then this project is an ideal way to broaden your view! Everything comes together at one point, sometimes you can only know for instance why something happens on Melody, when you understand what's going on in Lynphea,” Mark said with a bit of a dreamy voice. “You know, I will visit all the realms some day and learn everything there is!”
“Hmm, Hmm, I would like to see more of the world as well,” Matrim mused. “Learn about the cultures of the different realms and how they came to be, it's astonishing to see how diverse people from different places are, isn't it?”
“It certainly is,” Mark said and glanced a warm smile towards Matrim. – This was the start of a great friendship that lasted through the entire duration of Wizard school. Matrim expanded his knowledge about history and culture of all the magical realms and also one non magical realm, namely Earth. He saw his friend not only grow in his knowledge but also in his might as a wizard. He had amazing abilities to teleport over vast distances and also to create gateways between different realms. He would travel all the realms, working towards his dreams.
It was near graduation, with the final exams nearly over both Mark and Matrim were sure to get their graduation. Matrim as a scholar and Mark as a wizard. They had agreed to travel the realms together and get to know everything. Right before graduation Mark decided to jaunt to his home realm of Dolona to visit his parents one last time before he would head into the world. – “Say hi from me to your parents, even though they don't know me,” Matrim said in a friendly voice as he patted his good friend on his back.
“Will do Matrim!” Mark replied with a smile as wide as a mile over his face. “After tomorrow, we are people of the world!” He stated. He started the process of creating the ever familiar gateway he had cast so many times before to visit home, or some other realm if they wanted to go there, this time was no different, or so they thought.
When the gateway opened it was pitch black. It seemed to suck the light surrounding the portal as well. Both Matrim and Mark looked at the thing until Matrim spoke: “I might not know an awful lot about magic, but that can't be good.”
“You're right, this isn't good at all,” Mark said. He tried to dismiss the gateway but when he tried he got sucked in. Seconds passed before Mark got ejected again, lifeless and completely distorted, he could barely be recognized. The jet black portal blinked out of existence and Mark lay lifeless on the courtyard.
Matrim fell to his knees next to his only friend's corpse. “No, Mark...” he said with a voice strained from grief. His eyes burned as they lost the fight against the tears welling up in his eyes.
Quickly others gathered around the corpse until the headmaster forced his way through the crowd. He looked at the corpse and Matrim kneeling next to it. The man's hard face softened, if only slightly, to show compassion for Matrim. “Away, everyone except mister Matrim,” he said without raising his voice. Compliant all students obeyed, heading towards their dorms.
“The portal sucked him in... and spat him out like that,” Matrim said, answering the question the headmaster would surely ask preemptively.
The headmaster's hard face now softened some more. “Tell me exactly what happened mister Matrim, I know it hurts but I must know,” The headmaster said with a very calm and soothing voice.
“He wanted to open a gateway to Doloma, his home realm. When he finished casting it the portal was pitch black, as if it was sucking up all the light around it. Then when he tried to dismiss it, he got sucked in and spat out like... like that,” He said and on the end he couldn't suppress a couple of sobs and a tear running down his cheek.
“Oh they went to far this time, I'll have a talk with the head mistress of cloud tower. They need to get a handle on those students, rivalry is one thing but not at the cost of a life!” the headmaster spat.
“Let me at them, I'll (...)” Matrim started.
“You'll what, you cannot channel any magic mister Matrim, have not been trained in any forms of combat. We will deal with this, and surely this will get those three thrown into the Omega dimension if even the slightest bit of justice exists in this world!” The headmaster spoke.
Somehow it made Matrim feel slightly better, knowing those who caused it would pay the price, though it would never fill the hole Mark's demise left. – At graduation Matrim stood with tears in his eyes on the stage. In his speech he asked everyone present to have a minute of silence for Mark, since he had only died the day before and so they did.
Graduation was hard for Matrim, he lost everything he cared about and now he was a scholar, equipped with the knowledge to gather more. And so a couple of days later, after giving himself some time to mourn Mark's death he started with his journey, the journey Mark was supposed to take with him, though he was no more, only with him in spirit so he decided to visit every realm for the both of them.
And so he did, starting with Solaria. He made detailed documentation of all he saw and took whichever jobs he could do in order to provide for his existence. He had refused Alfea's offer to become their historian, though he always returned to the place in order to leave his documentation. Every time he was in Alfea he told the fairies who studied there the stories of his travels and did whichever services needed to pay for his stay, not that it was required of him since he delivered the documentation which he wasn't really paid for at all.
It was at his first visit to pyros Matrim had started to always carry a quarterstaff around, Which he could often be seen decorating, making carvings of what he had seen and experienced. Ever since his visit to Pyros Matrim had a limp which seemed to be the reason why he had the habit of walking with a quarterstaff. Until this day he refused to say a word about what happened and neither does he allow the limp to be magically healed.
This cycle continues until this day, though his stays at Alfea became longer and longer each time he visited. As he grew older he couldn't ignore the rest for which is weary bones yearned. Nor could he ignore his brain yearning for familiarity. Visiting all the realms and studying their cultural differences enriched the man, but also took their toll. Now he has arrived at Alfea once more, perhaps permanently unless the allure of traveling calls him once more.
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