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| Subject: Matthew Summers Thu Sep 11, 2014 2:12 pm | |
| Name:Matthew "Matt" Summers
Age:16
Gender: Male
What Creature are you?:Human
Height:5'11
Ethnicity:Eraklyon
Race:Humanoid
Allegiance:Good guys
Origins:Human
Powers:None, he fights with a staff.
Appearance: Physically, Matthew is described to be classically handsome and athletic, with a brooding, mysterious and intense aura. Physically, Matt has a pale complexion, a broad forehead, strong bone structure (angular jawline), a straight nose and a well-formed mouth. He possesses dark brown almost black hair which hangs just over his ears, usually styled in a casual disarray yet sometimes gelled for special occasions. With striking, intense light blue eyes contrasting wonderfully against darkened lashes and eyebrows. Matt also has straight teeth with a heartwarming smile. Matt is of slightly above average height, about 5'11", and he has a lean, flat-muscled and athletic physique. In regards to his clothing and fashion sense, Matt is generally rather trendy and casual. He is often seen wearing darker colors such as black, grey and dark blue although sometimes, he does wear lighter colors.
He is often seen wearing t-shirts, shirts or sweaters of darker colors and in various styles such as short-sleeved, round-necked and v-necked shirts. He often wears dark or black jeans with a belt with black, leather boots with a buckle. On occasion, Matt will sometimes wear black leather jackets. He will wear dark sunglasses when he doesn't wear his eyeglasses which he needs.
Specialist outfit: He wears the Lynphea college battle outfit and has a dark purple gem on his chest.
Strengths: Athletic and can perform acrobatic moves He's a great observer, meaning he can learn a lot from a person through their behavior or attitude. Ability to plan, he always plans ahead and thinks over his plans before executing them.
Weaknesses: Claustrophobic, he is afraid to be in a little room. Can get a blurry vision without his glasses or eye contacts. He can sometimes let his anger control him.
Personality:
When he was young, Matthew was compassionate, kind, noble because he admired life and thought that everyone deserved love. He has always been someone with politeness that's why he wanted to be dutiful, and a gentleman. He is definitely seen as the 'Golden Boy' at his parent's view and he had the admiration and respect of his family.
Though that didn't last for long, Matt changed. He became much more self-destructive and arrogant, Matthew would always be determined to achieve his goals even if his life could be in danger. He also got more dangerous, he has no trouble threating or hurting someone if he needs to or wants to. Even though he might seem like a cold human being, he is emotional deep down. He still gets hurt and sad when he thinks of all the people he has lost like his mother.
Matthew has always been able to convince people into believing him though he does not succeed every time. Finally, he has a great sense of humor and is big flirt. Matthew will always find a moment to seduce someone.
History:
Matt was always a sweet boy since he was born. His parents always considered him as an angel and gave him anything he wanted when he was young. He was always surrounded by people that loved him, when he grew older he became a rebel since he was tired of the "golden boy" title. He liked the rebel life, the life that would get him into trouble.
He became friends with a gang on a street in Eraklyon. They were the type of rude boys who would cause trouble in the town. Matt wanted to give up his title so he joined them. He got caught for a crime he did not commit, thus giving him trust issues. After a few months he finally got out of jail and decided to not go back to the gang.
He went back to his old life but did not go back to his old self. When his mother died in a car accident, Matt shut his loved ones out, he suffered inside and became a darker person. He started to wear lot of black clothes and became a much more dangerous person. He would feel guilty for going back to his bad habits but that faded away.
He became the mysterious guy after his mother's death, he didn't have many friends and he could hear rumors about him but he didn't care. One day he read an ad about Red Fountain and decided to join the school since he grew tired of Eraklyon.
His relationship with his father is pretty fragile, they never get along and Matt's father sees him as a very irresponsible and reckless boy. Once Matt told his father about his decision to enroll at Red Fountain, his father did not care which completly ruined their relationship.
Last edited by Fearless Diva on Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:57 pm; edited 9 times in total | |
| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Thu Sep 11, 2014 3:55 pm | |
| Putting everyone else before him, sounds a bit like a personality trait to me. And speaking of personality, can I get one more negative and positive trait please? | |
| | | Fearless Diva Moderator
Posts : 3893 Age : 25 Location : Rosewood Hobbies : TV Shows, Music, Movies.
| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:25 pm | |
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| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Fri Sep 12, 2014 4:18 pm | |
| It seems better, but I would change the first strength to be athletic or something along those lines. | |
| | | Fearless Diva Moderator
Posts : 3893 Age : 25 Location : Rosewood Hobbies : TV Shows, Music, Movies.
| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Fri Sep 12, 2014 4:32 pm | |
| Okay,edited,what about now? | |
| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
Posts : 9973
| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Fri Sep 12, 2014 4:33 pm | |
| Let's see what Sarah has to say first since she might catch something I'm not. | |
| | | Kyra_Xyrespace Super Moderator
Posts : 1182 Age : 31 Location : America Hobbies : Writing, playing games, moderating on another forum
| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Mon Sep 15, 2014 1:03 am | |
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| | | zerowing21 RP Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Mon Sep 15, 2014 1:06 am | |
| *stamps approved on his forehead | |
| | | SarahTheGamerEmpress Sirenix Fairy
Posts : 5880 Age : 27 Location : MLCS Hobbies : PLL, Finding Carter, OUAT, Korra and more.
| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Wed Sep 17, 2014 5:38 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Origins:Magic User
Powers:None,does not use magic How is he a magic user if he can't use magic? Put him as human. - Quote :
- Athletic
Can perform acrobatic moves
Both of these are kinda the same so add in another strength. - Quote :
- he will wear dark sunglasses.
Dark sunglasses are different than eyeglasses. Add eyeglasses to his appearance. - Quote :
- Matt is compassionate, kind, noble, honorable, intelligent, athletic, responsible, academic, dutiful, and a gentleman. He is definitely seen as the 'Golden Boy' at his parent's view and he had the admiration and respect of his family.
He can sometimes be a rebel and go into trouble,but he would be forgiven. He can be cocky, jealous and sad when he goes trough hard times. He likes to hide his feelings,to not show them but he can also be obnoxious sometimes. This is rather listed than descriptive, some personality traits also fit together so how about you just describe them rather than list them? - Quote :
- went back to his bad habits,though not forgetting his manners,compassion,sweetness.
What are some of those bad habits and how can he do them while not forgetting his manners,compassion and sweetness? - Quote :
- He became the mysterious guy after his mother's death,he didn't have any friends,he could hear rumors about him,but he didn't care.
You could just add that to the paragraph above it, it's still the same thing really. - Quote :
- Matt loves to go on adventures,to explore the world.He loved to watch the sunset,it reminded him of his mother.
Putting this at the end like that is kinda making it out of context. When did all of this start? Tell us about one of his adventures in the worlds he explored. How and why does the sunset remind him of his mother? I think this needs to move up with the introduction of the history. | |
| | | Mermaidix Sirenix Sirenix Fairy
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| Subject: Re: Matthew Summers Wed Sep 17, 2014 5:43 pm | |
| You know what to do, Melanie. Spice up those areas that need to be change or so, than your OC will be approved. | |
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