Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated

Subject: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:48 am

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name: Brandy/Breanne Fire Flame

age: 18

gender: female

what creature are you: fairy

race: domino

allegiance: Good

origin: magic user

powers: fire sparks

spells:Fire spark It is a big flame of fire that hits her enemies from a long distance range high

fire heal:It heals any of her friends that have been hurt by fire or any strong enemy that hurts them with her friends weaknesses and this is pretty much like princess bloom's fire shield in her enchantix form like the fire shield this spells lasts for at least 6 to 10 minutes medium

fire flame:It is a huge flame that hits her enemies from a long distance like her fire spark attack enemies high

fire shield:This attack protects herself and all dragons and fire creatures around her meaning this could protect evil creatures too which is bad because they can attack her the attack least for 1 to 5 minutes like the fire blast low

fire blast shield:This attack protects everyone around her who is in danger meaning her friends, her parents, her pet dragon that is all she can do with this attack and herself this spell lasts for 6 to 10 minutes medium

fire heat:This attack makes her enemies friends and everything and everyone around her hot and sweated and sticky and it annoys enemies and it gets her attacked making someone save her again this spell ever helps her when she is cooking because it turns on the oven and stove with the wave of her finger this spell least for atleast 1 to 5 minutes low

appearance: red hair red boots red shirt orange skirt this is her human form orange glitter wings and orange skirt and shirt and she keeps the red boots from her human form that is her fairy form her eyes are brown she also has an apron for when she is at work

strengths: she is really good at reading ancient warnings,her fire powers are stronger when she is around hot stuff,She is really good at math like her stepsister bethany,she is very athletic like her friend alina, She is also a very reliable friend in many aspects except for fashion.

weakness:her fire powers are weak when she is near somewhere that is cold and icy,her fire powers are weak by water fairies and ice fairies, her snooby mouth gets her in trouble alot with students, her fire powers are weak when she is near or somewhere that is wet.

personality: she can be bossy,she can complain about everything alot,she can be very very sweet,she can be alittle clumsy when she serves food to people,she can be a good listener when it comes to friends with problems. she can get along with any type of fairy, she doesn't get along with witches that disses her mother, she is not very good in water, she can never eat in a restaurants with a bad review, She can eat in a restaurants with very good reviews like 5 or 4 star dining because she is rich, She can clean her own room without the maids help, She can make delicious food for her family when she needs to.

history:

Brandy was born in a mansion on domino with her family, her mother Nicole her father Rodney and her half sister Bethany.Nicole was the most known actresses in the magix dimension and her father was the guard to the king and queen of domino and he was frozen for awhile. she had pet dragon named bob because it was a gift from her parents as a birthday present she would play with him and take care of him.Her mother would make her food when she was at school but her food wasn't good she would always go to a diner to get the food. Her sister never cared for her and she was always a snobby camera woman for her mother. One day she showed off her waitresses skills to a restaurant the exact same restaurant she works at now as a part time after school job .

Her Mother could careless about her daughters food because she was too busy traveling around the magix dimension for a movie or reality show she was shooting about her life.But she was looking for a job to pay the rent when she lived there she saw a for hire sign on the restaurant window and she get the job to pay the rent at her apartment which was on domino too.Her father however did like her food because she would deliver it to him everyday at home.

One day Brady's boss asked her to takeover the 50 years chefs job because he retired from his job.Which means she get promoted from waitress to one of the chefs there.When she want to the college of domino people know she come from a rich and she was big snobby which really annoyed all the girls at the college she used her fire powers to get in a fight with one of the students who dissed her mother and called her mother a terrible actresses and that person was an evil mermaid witch named Luna who will later be a witch of cloud tower but more about her later.She showed her food to the college when she bring her food from home when people asked who made this because she would always share her friend with her friends and then the girl who she get in a fight with said Hey you should make us food like this everyday guess who that girl was it was her very own sister she was more popular then her because she worked with their mother and then after she show the school food she decided to help the school by making food for everyone in the school.

She met Fran when she was on a vacation when she was working at the restaurant. So She want to alfea to control her fire spark powers. She has a half sister from Earth named Bethany who is now going to alfea she helps with the rent of her apartment on Earth and she visits her half sister's house on the holidays. In the future she wants to become a sous chef after she gets promoted from a chef or maybe the head chef who gives the orders to the other chefs.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:12 am

I approve!

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Sat Oct 25, 2014 4:42 am

thanks for the help all and i'm really glad i'm not bug you guys that much either

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Sat Oct 25, 2014 5:40 am

It's all right, we all learn and grow ^_^.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:48 am

yep waiting for other

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

weakness:her fire powers are weak when she is near somewhere that is cold and icy,her fire powers are weak by water fairies and ice fairies

You never fixed this when kyra asked you to. This is one weakness. You need at least one more.

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 33 Location : New Zealand

Ok, you still need to fix up on what Kyra told you before.

And lets have a closer look at the spells.

Quote :: fire spark it is a big flame of fire that hit her enemies high

Can you explain why it is a high spell? What makes it give huge damage?

Quote :: fire heal it heals any of her friends that have been burned by fire or hurt high

Quote :: fire flame it is a big huge flame that hits her enemies into a nice crispy burn making them flee medium

This sounds like a high spell if it leaves a burn.....

Quote :: fire shield this attack protects herself low

How long does the shield last for?

Quote :: fire spark shield this attack protects her friends and everyone around her medium

Hmm....I'm confused about this. This is giving mix messages.

Quote :: fire blast this attack hits her enemies low

This is fine, just needs to be tuned up a notch.

And with all, what does it all look like? I need you to explain what it looks like and what it does.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Tue Apr 21, 2015 2:07 am

thank you for the help everyone it's been awhile sense i have check all of the oc's in awhile

Sirenix Fairy Posts : 5304 Age : 33 Location : New Zealand

oops, I forgot one spell Laughing

Quote :: fire heal it heals any of her friends that have been burned by fire or hurt high

Um...burned by fire or hurt? What do you mean by that?

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Tue Apr 21, 2015 2:45 am

oh i noticed oops and ha ha ha ha

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

But also, fire heal could use an update cuz it seems only good for one kind of situation. All the other spells could use better descriptions to give us an idea of exactly what they can do and how long an effect lasts.

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