Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated

Subject: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:48 am

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name: Brandy/Breanne Fire Flame

age: 18

gender: female

what creature are you: fairy

race: domino

allegiance: Good

origin: magic user

powers: fire sparks

spells:Fire spark It is a big flame of fire that hits her enemies from a long distance range high

fire heal:It heals any of her friends that have been hurt by fire or any strong enemy that hurts them with her friends weaknesses and this is pretty much like princess bloom's fire shield in her enchantix form like the fire shield this spells lasts for at least 6 to 10 minutes medium

fire flame:It is a huge flame that hits her enemies from a long distance like her fire spark attack enemies high

fire shield:This attack protects herself and all dragons and fire creatures around her meaning this could protect evil creatures too which is bad because they can attack her the attack least for 1 to 5 minutes like the fire blast low

fire blast shield:This attack protects everyone around her who is in danger meaning her friends, her parents, her pet dragon that is all she can do with this attack and herself this spell lasts for 6 to 10 minutes medium

fire heat:This attack makes her enemies friends and everything and everyone around her hot and sweated and sticky and it annoys enemies and it gets her attacked making someone save her again this spell ever helps her when she is cooking because it turns on the oven and stove with the wave of her finger this spell least for atleast 1 to 5 minutes low

appearance: red hair red boots red shirt orange skirt this is her human form orange glitter wings and orange skirt and shirt and she keeps the red boots from her human form that is her fairy form her eyes are brown she also has an apron for when she is at work

strengths: she is really good at reading ancient warnings,her fire powers are stronger when she is around hot stuff,She is really good at math like her stepsister bethany,she is very athletic like her friend alina, She is also a very reliable friend in many aspects except for fashion.

weakness:her fire powers are weak when she is near somewhere that is cold and icy,her fire powers are weak by water fairies and ice fairies, her snooby mouth gets her in trouble alot with students, her fire powers are weak when she is near or somewhere that is wet.

personality: she can be bossy,she can complain about everything alot,she can be very very sweet,she can be alittle clumsy when she serves food to people,she can be a good listener when it comes to friends with problems. she can get along with any type of fairy, she doesn't get along with witches that disses her mother, she is not very good in water, she can never eat in a restaurants with a bad review, She can eat in a restaurants with very good reviews like 5 or 4 star dining because she is rich, She can clean her own room without the maids help, She can make delicious food for her family when she needs to.

history:

Brandy was born in a mansion on domino with her family, her mother Nicole her father Rodney and her half sister Bethany.Nicole was the most known actresses in the magix dimension and her father was the guard to the king and queen of domino and he was frozen for awhile. she had pet dragon named bob because it was a gift from her parents as a birthday present she would play with him and take care of him.Her mother would make her food when she was at school but her food wasn't good she would always go to a diner to get the food. Her sister never cared for her and she was always a snobby camera woman for her mother. One day she showed off her waitresses skills to a restaurant the exact same restaurant she works at now as a part time after school job .

Her Mother could careless about her daughters food because she was too busy traveling around the magix dimension for a movie or reality show she was shooting about her life.But she was looking for a job to pay the rent when she lived there she saw a for hire sign on the restaurant window and she get the job to pay the rent at her apartment which was on domino too.Her father however did like her food because she would deliver it to him everyday at home.

One day Brady's boss asked her to takeover the 50 years chefs job because he retired from his job.Which means she get promoted from waitress to one of the chefs there.When she want to the college of domino people know she come from a rich and she was big snobby which really annoyed all the girls at the college she used her fire powers to get in a fight with one of the students who dissed her mother and called her mother a terrible actresses and that person was an evil mermaid witch named Luna who will later be a witch of cloud tower but more about her later.She showed her food to the college when she bring her food from home when people asked who made this because she would always share her friend with her friends and then the girl who she get in a fight with said Hey you should make us food like this everyday guess who that girl was it was her very own sister she was more popular then her because she worked with their mother and then after she show the school food she decided to help the school by making food for everyone in the school.

She met Fran when she was on a vacation when she was working at the restaurant. So She want to alfea to control her fire spark powers. She has a half sister from Earth named Bethany who is now going to alfea she helps with the rent of her apartment on Earth and she visits her half sister's house on the holidays. In the future she wants to become a sous chef after she gets promoted from a chef or maybe the head chef who gives the orders to the other chefs.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Mon Sep 08, 2014 5:29 am

yes one more to go and can we have a bootcamp started for both brandy and sophie please and thanks

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reverses approval. How is her losing her pet dragon a weakness?

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Mon Sep 08, 2014 5:55 am

firebid1030 wrote:: strengths: she is really good at reading ancient warnings,her fire powers are stronger when she is somewhere near lava or volcanoes,dragons because she has one,her fire powers are stronger when you make her really angry,her powers are stronger with magma and dragon flame fairies

What do you mean "dragons because she has one"? That makes no sense.

This (her fire powers are stronger when she is somewhere near lava or volcanoes) and this (her powers are stronger with magma and dragon flame fairies) count as one thing since they establish the same principle; she's stronger around hot things.

Quote :: weakness:not great at sports,her fire powers are weak when she is near somewhere that is cold and icy,losing her dragon pet bob who take care of her with the help of his dragon trainer who give the people who found her the dragon as a pet,her fire powers are weak by darkness and water fairy

Losing something isn't a weakness. Not unless this dragon holds the key to her powers in which case I could possibly see it as such but if not then no.

Fire beats darkness since a flame's light would cause darkness to disappear. So how is her fire spells weak against dark spells?

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Thu Sep 18, 2014 2:26 am

done ready for all who have not approved the oc's please and thank you

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No edits have been made since the 8th

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Thu Sep 18, 2014 3:39 am

oh yeah that is because that was the last time i worked on it sorry i have been busy with other things but please tell me what to edit in or out btw can i put being good friends with fran and alina as a strength for her please

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Thu Sep 18, 2014 12:02 pm

No.. that's not a strength, that's a personality trait.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Thu Sep 18, 2014 12:25 pm

You need to fix the strength traits, James. Thank you.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Thu Sep 18, 2014 8:59 pm

I got 3 things. How are her parents dead, went to work as waitress alone, was being taken care of by the people in the palace, yet you in the end say her mom died when she was in the palace? Her mom was dead long ago before the dragon find her, judging from what you wrote. This needs to be fixed.

Plus, reading ancient warnings...I approve of it. Reading such hard stuff can be quite a strength (because it's a talent that can count as strength) due to it being rare and not a lot of people really know of such talent.

But her weakness of not being good at sport is personality trait.

Fix these and I will approve.

Subject: Re: Brandy The Fairy Of Fire Sparks Updated Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:30 am

done edited and please add your inputs of i need to change anything sense i haven't edited sense the 18th of this month

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