Naru, fairy of sound

Subject: Naru, fairy of sound Thu Aug 28, 2014 4:48 am

First topic message reminder :

Name: Naru
Age: 16
Gender: Female
What creature are you? Fairy
Ethnicity: Melody
Race: Fairy
Allegiance: Good guys
Origins: Magic user
Power: Sound
Attack Spell: Rainbow Melody (low)
(Rainbow colored sound waves hit enemy and cause fair damage)
Paradise Song (mid)
(fires a series of rainbow sound waves at the enemy; this attack is hard to dodge)
Defense Spell:
Sonic Shield (low)
(Rainbow sound waves form a protective barrier)
Appearance:

Spoiler:

Strengths: Piano Virtuoso Prodigy, excellent at making cute charms or bracelets, is a likable person and thus makes friends very easily.
Weaknesses: Gets lost easily, has trouble playing other musical instruments especially the violin, is a total klutz (as in clumsy)
Personality: She is shy, reticent, but also is a friendly and caring girl. She cries a lot when she gets sad or scared and is freaked out easily. She hates spiders and bee-like insects in general. She likes butterflies and whales though. She likes only classical music.
History:
Naru is a daughter of one of the Muses of the Golden Auditorium. She was raised by her mother. She's trained ever since childhood by her mother in playing piano. The Muses were all very protective of her ever since she was little and prevented as much as possible from being exposed to harm. She can see the rainbow colors of the music. She likes all the other Muses, because they were all nice to her like her mother, and calls them each "Auntie". She wants to become a Muse like her mother and thus decides to go to Alfea to strive towards that goal.

Subject: Re: Naru, fairy of sound Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:37 am

Is the history better now?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

It needs to be longer and have more information on her life.

Subject: Re: Naru, fairy of sound Fri Oct 24, 2014 1:23 am

Is the history better now?

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

It still needs more about her life.

Subject: Re: Naru, fairy of sound Sat Nov 08, 2014 12:52 am

I added more to the history. Smile

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

We need more substance than that. Like what was her life like and all that jazz.

Subject: Re: Naru, fairy of sound Sat Nov 08, 2014 1:01 am

ugh...*scratches head*...I think I may need some extra time to work on this...can you review my other oc first? I think that one is easier to do. Smile

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Take your time on the revamp of this.

Subject: Re: Naru, fairy of sound Mon Dec 29, 2014 2:32 pm

Quick reminder to you Shiki this OC isn't done yet in case you want to continue ^.^ .

Subject: Re: Naru, fairy of sound Tue Dec 30, 2014 11:26 pm

shikiryougi wrote:: Personality: She is shy, reticent, but also is a friendly and caring girl. She cries a lot when she gets sad or scared and is freaked out easily. She hates spiders and bee-like insects in general. She likes butterflies and whales though. She likes only classical music.

Her personality still needs more work done. Please expand on it more.

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