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PostSubject: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YFri Jul 25, 2014 2:20 am

Name: Elena Pierce

Age:16

Gender:Female

Height: 5'7

Creature:Fairy

Allegiance:Good guys

Origins:Magic User

Power: Ice

Spells:

Frost Barrier : It creates ice shards that forms a snow-flake shaped barrier. Level:Medium

Arctic Flakes: Elena creates a series of glowing icicles and throws it towards the enemy or object.Level Medium.

Zero-Gravity: Elena shoots a snow ray towards the target that freezes it for one minute. Level Medium.

Enhanced Jump:  Elena can jump incredible higher and longer distances than any normal being. When she jumps, she leaves a print of ice. Level Low.

Ethereal Chaos : Elena creates an ice storm freezing all near by objects and enemies .This spell lasts until they melt. Level High.

Frozen Plain: Elena puts her hands on the ground to force out ice spirals that moves towards opponents to throw them off-balance or stop them Level High.

Ice Staff: Elena can create a staff made of ice to fight her opponents. Level Low
 
Frozen Missile: Elena can create missiles of ice. Level Medium

Appearance:
Elena has a haircut that has red streaks on a little part and stylish waves to her tresses.She wears a red dress with small white  dots that ends at her hips, with some black boots that stop at the foot.She also wears a black leather jacket to it and legging to it.
She has brown eyes and she often wears necklaces.

How she looks:

In her fairy form, Elena wears a dark purple sailor fuku with a grey skirt, elbow length gloves and high heels. She wears a tiara on her forehead, with a red stone in the center of it.

Strength:
Cold places
Swimming
Artistic


Weakness
:
Hot places
Fire magic
Music Powers(High noises can break the ice spells)


Personality:
Elena is a sweet girl who grew up in a wonderful place. She is brave and not scared of using her powers or speak out loud her opinions. She is smart  and she loves to shop and hang out with friends. She seems cold and distanced to people who doesn't know her. She can sometimes be very smart if she puts a hard effort to it. She can also be hot headed if she gets offended or annoyed.
Though the disappearance of her mother tormented her,she doesn't like people who mistreat their mothers when she can't even find her.She sometimes gets worried for her family or friends but she knows she is just being paranoid.She only calls them if they have been missing for quite sometimes,12 hours.

History:

Elena is a normal girl who lived with her brother,sister and her parents.They live on the planet Icetopia.It was a planet that was most cold and freezing,Elena's parents are the count and countess Caleb and Aurora.They lived in a fine palace but Elena didn't like people working for them since she love to see people happy.Though most of people think she is cold hearthed,she is just like everyone else. Her parents has always loved her and so has her brother but she always fight with her sister Lola.

Elena loves her ice magic,she loves to be in the cold and play in the snow.Elena first discovered her magic when she was only a child, she already knew she had them but she didn't know how to awaken them. When she got 15,she heart about Alfea, the college of Fairies to master the powers. She was always fascinated by fairy tails so she loved fairies and wanted to become one.

She sometimes wish to be a normal girl. She is a good student but she is sometimes childish and she likes to sneak out and have fun.Icetopia is her home,she would do anything for it.

Her friends are Melissa,Bonnie,Caroline,Nadia and Alison. They all live in the same apartment and Elena shares a room with Bonnie. One day, the king of Icetopia died with his family due to an attack of terrorism so the only heir to the Thrown was Elena's father who was his brother.So Elena then became the princess of Icetopia and she got a ring that made her powers even more powerful by 10% giving her also the ability to create pure Crystal Diamonds that are made of diamonds mixed with ice. They don't do anything special but they are valuable.

Elena's mom,queen Aurora one day disappeared. Her father though she got killed by the terrorist who are the flame folk until one day they got a message from the queen saying she escaped but she wouldn't tell where. Since that day,king Caleb has sent his guards to find her but nothing has been reported.
The flame folk are just like the fire eaters,monsters that lives in Icetopia and wants to heathens the planet so they can defeat the the citizen of Icetopia,Elena can't bare to look at the flame folk.She doesn't trust them  but she doesn't want to blame all of them for the actions of a few.


Elena is determined to find her mother and to vanquish the flame folk once and for all with the help of her friends and family. She has visited the last spot from where her mother sent the letter and she has been following her tracks. That's why she decided to go to Alfea to understand her powers and make them stronger so she could defeat anything that was in her way.


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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YFri Jul 25, 2014 12:21 pm

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Ice Spiral (Ice Spiral is an attack spell. It creates a series of glowing green icicles and throws it towards the enemy. Level:High

Quote :
Icicle Fury(Ice Fury is a spell that makes a gentle snow fall from the sky, from which creates many black icicles, and throws them at the enemy.)Level:High

Why are these two spells considered high? What are their effects? Please edit that for all the spells especially those two.

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Strength:
Decrease the temperature around them.
Manipulate ice.
Survive more in colder areas than others.

All her strength are related to ice. You could just say she's stronger in cold and freezing areas. Add other strengths that don't relate to her powers.

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Weakness:
Powers are weaken at extreme hot places
Ineffective powers against strong flames
Ice powers melt when they are in hot places.

All her weaknesses are related to fire. You could just say weak against hot areas and fire powers.

You're missing areas from the character sheet. Please fill them in.

Your history is so short, we need to learn more about her through her history. Her background, when did she become a fairy? How did she discover her powers at first? And other casual stuff as well. I want you to write 6 paragraphs, each paragraph has to contain 5-8 sentences.
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YFri Jul 25, 2014 1:06 pm

Ok how about now?
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YFri Jul 25, 2014 3:32 pm

You're missing two paragraphs and two paragraphs only have 4 sentences. I'm only asking you to do this so I can help you with writing a proper history to your character.
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YFri Jul 25, 2014 5:17 pm

What about now?
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YSun Jul 27, 2014 4:07 am

For the spells that freeze targets, can you edit in how long the freezing effect lasts?

As I said, Cold places and Frozen places are considered the same. Change either into something else.

Add more to the personality.

Okay so you said that she went to Alfea and earned Enchantix but she went to Alfea again? :| I'm sorry you really have to arrange the timeline of the history because it doesn't connect together.
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YSun Jul 27, 2014 10:39 am

And now?
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YSun Jul 27, 2014 2:44 pm

Quote :
Ice Spiral (Ice Spiral is an attack spell. It creates a series of glowing green icicles and throws it towards the enemy. This attacks can destroy almost anything a
and it freezes it's target. Level:High
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Eternal Ice (The spell creates an Ice storm freezing all near by objects and enemy) Level:Medium
For how long do both these spells freeze the target?

Strength and Weakness are fine although I'd like to see more.

Everything else looks fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YSun Jul 27, 2014 4:12 pm

I changed it and added some weakness and strengths.
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PostSubject: Re: Elena,fairy of Ice   Elena,fairy of Ice Eo1pl7YSun Jul 27, 2014 8:12 pm

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Elena is determined to find her mother and to vanquish the flame folk once and for all with the help of her friends and family.

You mentioned this in her history. Add something like this to her personality. If she wants to remove all flame users, does that mean she hates fire users? Does she pick fights with them? Does she attack them? Does she ignore them, bad mouth them, degrade them? Does she understand that it was only a select group and not the entire user group?

Also, her mother is missing, so is she tormented by this fact, or is she curious on why her mother left? Does she grow jealous about others who have their mother around, or is she understanding and gets by? Does she get worried or scared when friends go missing without notice? Does she frantically call them or search for them if they don't respond in a timely manner?
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