Cygnus' third person RP training.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Alright, now here we are to train you Cygnus in third person. It's not all that hard.

Third person allows you describe more things around you, but is less inner monology of the character. You don't have to be in your characters head the entire time, allowing for you to show more of what is happening in a given area etc.

Now I shall begins.

Sitting by the well with a large book of myths from Domino, The red haired specialists Roll eyes move back and forth at a very quiet pace. He skipped past the dragon flame chapter since to him it wasn't important. This story is rather interesting He thinks, as he flips the page. Nearby, his magiwolf pup, Layla and his cousins bunny Kiko, are running around with nets, chasing butterflies.

Winx Fairy Posts : 42

She walks over and went pass the walking back and forth person and he looked stressed. The animals are running around with nets catching butterflies.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

As I said in chat, you have to use the person name, or use she, her or other related words to complete how it sounds.

So something like this, Sashi steps into the courtyard and her eyes center on the ramping animals trying to catch butterflies. The young girl smiles at the sight, walking towards the well she continues to watch.

Winx Fairy Posts : 42

Sashi notices a man sitting there and looked into his eyes from far away. As hes rolling his eyes, she thinks he is getting frustrated.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

The young man finishes up the story and gently closes the book, placing it on the grass next to him. Roll begins to glance around, looking for Kiko and Layla and soon he spots them by the flower bed. Smiling, he slowly begins to stand, taking his attention away from the two, only to have his vision center on the new fairy, "Hello," He greets the fairy, "Uh, are you new here at Alfea?"

Winx Fairy Posts : 42

Sashi whispers, "Yes I am new." as she gets shy and nervous by turning her head to the left while her face is turning a bit red around the cheeks.

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

"Welcome to Alfea." Roll says kindly to the young woman. He slowly rubs the back of his head, feeling unsure how to engage this person further. "So, where exactly are you from?" He asks, glancing sideways to keep an eye on Kiko and Layla. They are still chasing a butterfly, but slowly coming towards them.

Winx Fairy Posts : 42

Sashi whispers, "I came from a distant planet called Shilo. What are those animals names?"

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

You didn't have her stop speaking to follow Roll's gaze. It makes no sense unless you have her stop speaking, follow his gaze over to Kiko and Layla. Please try again on this. The description and detail is key to make it work.

Winx Fairy Posts : 42

Sashi whispers, "I came from a planet called Shilo." As she looks at the guy to her right slowly and shaking with nervous.

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