Winx club newest generation of 2015 lol

Subject: Winx club newest generation of 2015 lol Sat Sep 19, 2015 2:40 am

So yeah new Fan fiction ive been trying to come up with more ideas for my other fanf fics so yeah! ENJOY!

One day Bloom found a baby on the streets of Domino the baby had powers but was not a fairy it was witch the baby witch had positive enrgy though it also had negative energy "Oh you poor thing..." Bloom says in her annoying season 7 voice the baby was powerful it had the power of ice but this was a different story how would it affect Domino?
So yeah clearly the whole storyline follows Witch babies the Winx girls find on the street yep I know weird as heck

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Steph, as a story, it just gives a vague idea of what you want. There is no need to say Bloom's voice is a certain way cuz it can sound however you want it to in your mind. While its a good start to a plot basis, I would ask someone to help you with this if you so desire. It sounds like it could be rather good.

Subject: Re: Winx club newest generation of 2015 lol Sat Sep 19, 2015 5:09 am

UGH THERES ALWAYS THAT LITTLE THING AHHHHH yeah im done im only going to continue the ones I did better (Kinda icludng this one im DONE with Timix!) sorry just frustated cause theres ALWAYS that little thing that messes it up from being a good story
cause I want it to be as good as a book

RP Moderator Posts : 9973

Steph, don't give up at all. I can teach you how to write better if you let me.

Subject: Re: Winx club newest generation of 2015 lol Sat Sep 19, 2015 5:12 am

Ok ok *Breathes in and breathes out*

Subject: Re: Winx club newest generation of 2015 lol Sat Sep 19, 2015 10:05 am

Madam, I am new to writing as well. My very first go around with "Loving the Dark Heart" was a complete mess.. My grammar was non existent, I had not separated different peoples lines of dialog, and the list goes on and on.

If it were not for my friend in Nevada, who is far more gifted with English and grammar then I am, my story would be unreadable. I had to spend a whole weekend editing everything, it was worth it as now, I have a far better understanding of how to write. Not perfect, but better then when I started.

I think, maybe you would benefit from a beta reader, I know I have. They beta read your story before its published, and point out the grammatical errors and possible story conflicts, as well as suggest improvements.

I offer the above with nothing but respect. I have, and still am, in your shoes. Don't give up on writing, as I discovered it opens your mind like few things can.

Subject: Re: Winx club newest generation of 2015 lol Sat Sep 19, 2015 6:09 pm

Well I could try the beta reader thingy but I kinda was taught grammar on the Chat lol but il try the beta reader thing
anyways herses info on my next part oc this cause I wanna tell you guys,, Stella time today

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