The case of the flame cookies(credit goes to lauren for this rpg)

Last edited by Tecnafairy on Thu Jul 24, 2014 3:12 am; edited 5 times in total

First topic message reminder :

once there were different flame cookies light, fire, lava, that all make a super delicious cookie but if it fall in the wrong hand that world of domino will turn into darkness

"We need to go straight forwards" she replies

"It would probably be a good idea to find the longest worker here." Mina said.

(Deme can you write in proper style? It's hard to read what you are saying.)

"Well they all seem old here" she says with a smirk

fran: hey that is rude to say elena and i think i see a men it looks like there boss let's play it cool

alina: you get it fran but i don't think that is the boss i'm confused i think that is a worker

fran: oh no i think we are in a thug factory i think your gps just take us the wrong way lee and i think we should save the man

alina: wait this is a criminals hangout i thought something was fishy here

"Where are we girls" she asked with anger

fran: it feels icky in here

alina: yeah i totally agree and where are we answer our question

(what you mean lily in a proper way)
lee: idk I hope were not lost

(I mean with capitals, periods, quotation marks, proper punctuation etc.)

"Well I'm pretty sure this isn't a deserted area so someone will hear us if we scream." Mina said as she prepared to let out a scream. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

(Ok)
''Sighs screaming ok ahhhhhhhhh were lost help said lee''

(Deme to do it properly you put the actions outside the quotations for example: I sigh screaming "Ok ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! We're lost, help!!" said Lee.)

(You can do it this way if you would like: Lee: *sighs screaming* Ok ahhhhhhhhhhh! We're lost, help!!)

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