Magic story !

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It was a windy and rainy day at Alfea . The four girls were sitting in the hall . They were studing for tommorow . Suddenly the current stop . It was dark . They didn't see a thing .
- What will we do now ? - Asked Alex .
- I don't I don't see a thing . - Said Sara .
- Let's use a little bit of fire to see . - Said Amanda . She make a little fire in her hand so they could see what's around them .
- It's so scary here . - Said Mitchell .
- We're in our apartament relax . - Said Alex . - Let's just seat down and talk .
Everyone agree . They sit down and talk . Suddenly a loud nouse came from the corridor .
- Let's see what's going out there . - Said Alex . The four girls go in the corridor there was a big fat monster !
- Let's transform ! - Said Amanda
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( Amanda fairy of fire . )
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( Alex fairy of nature . )
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( Sara fairy of water . )
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( Mitchell fairy of wind . )
- Take This ! Fire ball ! - Said Amanda .
- I didn't effect ! - Said Mitchell . - We must fight harder ! Tornato !
- Flower attack ! - Said Alex.
- Water beam ! - Said Sara .
- Fire ! ( just fire ) - Said Amanda . We beat it and then Griselda came .
- What's going out here ?!

to be continued ...

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Tue Nov 05, 2013 5:36 pm

nice story , i love it so far

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Tue Nov 05, 2013 8:38 pm

Even though I can see the original artists on the images (placed by the artists to combat art theft), you should be giving them credit for their works of art since none of them (to my knowledge) are yours and yet you are posting them here, claiming them to be yours. You haven't credited the artists, and so by default you're claiming they're yours.

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Tue Nov 05, 2013 9:46 pm

The story is very bland and the pilfered pictures make it hard for me to actually concentrate on the story.

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:49 am

yeah I have to agree with both this is a boring story and you are stealing art so sorry

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:06 am

Okay so I was looking at the comments of this topic and a lot of people say it's not good! Heres some things u can make ur story better.Okay first, put credits on the Photos u took from any website because it kinda stealing someone's art. Don't worry everyone makes mistakes. Next, if u really want people to love ur own fan fiction, make things up! Last, describe every character! Give them personality! Maybe for the photos, draw ur own! But still put credits. If ur not sure pm a mod!

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:18 am

firebid1030 wrote:: yeah I have to agree with both this is a boring story and you are stealing art so sorry

well you didn't have to say it like that! its still good and its way better than the first story i made just keep the bad comments to yourself and say nice things Smile

its a good story Smile

keep it up! Smile

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:28 am

winxbloom800 wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: yeah I have to agree with both this is a boring story and you are stealing art so sorry

well you didn't have to say it like that! its still good and its way better than the first story i made just keep the bad comments to yourself and say nice things Smile

its a good story :)keep it up! Smile

How are you going to learn to improve on your stories if you keep insisting that people only give you false positive reviews? You won't. You don't tell your teachers to only give you A's and 100%s if your school work doesn't deserve that, why should you expect your readers to do that? It makes no sense.

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:34 am

Domino_kitty wrote:

winxbloom800 wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: yeah I have to agree with both this is a boring story and you are stealing art so sorry

well you didn't have to say it like that! its still good and its way better than the first story i made just keep the bad comments to yourself and say nice things Smile

its a good story :)keep it up! Smile

How are you going to learn to improve on your stories if you keep insisting that people only give you false positive reviews? You won't. You don't tell your teachers to only give you A's and 100%s if your school work doesn't deserve that, why should you expect your readers to do that? It makes no sense.

Well that makes sense! And Kayla u keep repeating the same thing! And I already gave the author advices. EVERYONE of u make mistakes! Don't just blame it on her

Subject: Re: Magic story ! Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:36 am

FacebookWinxSirenix wrote:

Domino_kitty wrote:

winxbloom800 wrote:

firebid1030 wrote:: yeah I have to agree with both this is a boring story and you are stealing art so sorry

well you didn't have to say it like that! its still good and its way better than the first story i made just keep the bad comments to yourself and say nice things Smile

its a good story :)keep it up! Smile

How are you going to learn to improve on your stories if you keep insisting that people only give you false positive reviews? You won't. You don't tell your teachers to only give you A's and 100%s if your school work doesn't deserve that, why should you expect your readers to do that? It makes no sense.

Well that makes sense! And Kayla u keep repeating the same thing! And I already gave the author advices. EVERYONE of u make mistakes! Don't just blame it on her

No one is saying that we don't make mistakes, we're saying she should learn from her mistakes. Not continue to make them

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